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All Time Love
Story written on September 29, 2012 by kins40.
She was ready to operate on Tina.
Bette hesitated, remembering the softness of the skin she was about to wound, contuse, hurt, not purposely of course, but the memory of its near translucent perfection, its feathery softness, how glorious it had felt pressed against her own skin, halted the surgeon’s move.
Images poured onto her mind, now aching reminders of the deep love she once shared with her, until Tina had ended it all with her baffling disappearance.
Now, after all this time, fate had reunited them in roles, Bette had always wished she would never be faced with. Tina’s life lay solely in her hands, a call the doctor had made in the ER a few minutes ago, when Shane had requested her professional opinion. Bette had not hesitated and had ordered she’d be taken up for emergency surgery.
"Dr Porter?" The voice of her assistant intruded, restoring her concentration, "Whenever you’re ready."
Bette took in a silent deep breath, tilting her head back. A nurse moved swiftly with a piece of gauze to wipe her forehead. Straightening back up, her focus now fully on the life on her table, she began to make the incision.
*****
Bette had no idea how long she’d been standing there alone in her darkened office with her forehead rested against the cold window pane.
All she knew was that she had not slept – although hardly unusual in her line of work – instead watching how the snow had resumed falling once again outside, silently covering the icy roads and pavements and in effect treacherously setting up the inhabitants of the city with widespread and countless dangers.
Her breath kept on fogging up the glass pane every time she breathed sometimes needing her hand to wipe away the condensation as she let out a deeper sigh. And every time her hand passed in front of her face, she thought about the work they had accomplished earlier in the OR.
Granted they were controlled by her brain, her knowledge, her expertise, her science and without this, hands were merely hands and not the lifesaving tools she knew them to be.
To Bette, the inside of the human body had always awed her. A beauty a lucky few were privileged to experience, one she definitely found exhilarating.
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And the reel of unwanted memories is left behind for the next chapter to come… Seems like Kins found a new way to keep her fans clinging on the edge of a cliffy ending, made them wondering what is actually happened? … :-) amazing writing Kins!! Thanks for the update! :-) Maybe need an extra warning on your AN that the chapter is not suitable for a weak stomach, the details are amazingly so clear and implicit. The oozed blood can be pictured so clearly and I was getting panicky internally like Bette too ;-) hehe.. Top grade story! PPVS and let the memories engulfing us in the next chapter :-) thanks again!!
Wow, very descriptive
Your writing, as usual, is beautiful, even when depicting icky things. But I must say – at the risk of sounding piggy – it ends MUCH too quickly. ;-)
Very descriptive my friend. I bow to you. I can’t wait to read about Bette’s unwanted memories.
You are an amazing talent. Do you write books?
hats off to Bette for getting through the entire surgery. i would have been a complete mess. you’re amazing. this story is wonderful.
I am almost speechless. As usual I am awed by your immense talent and heartbroken over the situation they are in at the moment. Can harldy wait until Tina wakes up and finds that Bette has saved her life. I, too, love details and no it wasn’t too much. It shows the anguish Bette felt at what was happening to the love of her life and she had to dispense with her personal feelings and just be the surgeon with a case that had almost insurmountable odds of survival. Thanks for bringing us another wonderful story. You’re awesome.
I knew this would be good. I love ur stories. Your an amazing writer. PPS.
First off ..Bravo!….and …are you a doctor?…..cuz this is very detailed.. Like watching a live ..”Operation Procedure”
WOW this is 100% drama! I think for a doctor, having to save the life of a loved one or a family member must be the worst thing that can happen in your profession.Excellent writing, very descriptive, sometimes I find it difficult to read because English is not my original language, and the only thing I would like if there were more dialogue between characters because it makes the story more enjoyable and easy to understand and follow and I think that is missing it in your stories
K, I would follow your stories into the dark. I’ll just echo what has been said before, you’re a treasure to this site. 😘 thank you!
Great writing and story.Love it.Love the drama of it too.Look forward to the next Chapter.You are one of the few FF writers that keep the Tibette story alive and for that i thank you.I am in awe of the many scenarios that are created around Tibette.Keep up the good work.
wow… don’t no how bette did it, but glad she was able… wait till tina wakes up… i can’t wait … great story… pps
I’m so happy to see another story from you. I love the way you write. Thanks so much for posting this.
Amazing as always.Thank you.PPS
Thank you Kins as that chapter was utterly amazing. it was so perfect I realized that I was holding my breath with the suspence. You are an incredible writer and the details kept me on the edge of my seat! Thank you!
OMG!!!! Glad to see you Back!!!!! Please post like NOW!!!
That was awesome and interesting, like it. Please post more, thanks!
Wonderful writing as always. I hope you can keep complexity for each character. Not too flasback.
“a whole reel of unwanted memories” – very eloquent. Waiting patiently for those memories.
I love great writing and you, kins are top notch. Can’t wait for more. PPS!
Wonderful as always. Thank you
Awesome! Thank you!
As usual..simply amazing!