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All you need is love chapter 16
“Is dinner ready yet mommy “ Josh demanded as she walked through the living room – Dan and Josh were watching a movie while Zak was playing with his building blocks.
“Six minutes “
“Where’s Tina ? “ Danny asked
“Coming over -”
“We know — we’ll behave “ Dan said pulling at face at his two brothers
“I am not asking you to act differently but I do want you to treat her with respect “
“Tina your girlfriend “ Zak announced
Bette lifted Zak up “ Yes – Tina is my girlfriend “
“You kiss Tina “ he added
Bette fixed Danny with a look
“Just what have you been telling your brother ?”
“Nothing – he must have heard “
“If you have so much time to talk about my dates – it must mean that you have also done your English homework “
“Kind of “
“Care to explain that remark ?”
“Not really – its Saturday mom “
“Do you know how much teasing I get from Dana if my son’s English homework looks like a drunken spider has done the barn dance on the page ? “
“Gee mom “
“Gee mom yourself – will you please move some of Zak’s blocks before someone stands on them “
“You mean Tina “
“I mean anyone – especially anyone who hasn’t done his English homework “
“What’s for dinner ? “ Josh asked looking up from his TV viewing
“Chicken kebabs with rice “
“Great – my favourite “
Everything was Josh’s favourite – Bette was just about to continue her conversation with Dan when the door bell rang
“That will be your girlfriend “ Dan said
Bette considered if the kebabs would start burning if she wasn’t careful
“Dan – would you answer the door – I need to check on dinner “
“Okay “
Bette put Zak down who waddled after Dan as she went into the kitchen just in time to turn the kebabs over and start the rice. She listened as her sons all greeted Tina – Bette concentrated on the voices – Dan was cool as always, Josh just adored Tina and it showed – Zak also made a fuss of Tina – Bette smiled – she really loved the blonde’s soft southern voice.
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……………..still holding my breath from L-wing!!! Help hurry….
Practice, practice, says the teacher. Great chapter AllyE.
Nice choice of outfit for The Porter, and nice to know that full attention to the ass is being noted!
Well, hell, funnyone, if sex is like riding a bike then that means I’m gonna fall off several times before I get it right. :( Falling off a bike never felt all that great.
oh crikey!!!! such anticipation!!! I love this story….I can’t wait!!! PPS
Let them practice – A LOT!
As a card-carrying member of the lesbian club, even I know not to wear brown shoes with black pants. OK, maybe not always, but if I walked out in Shane’s outfit, my partner would send me back to try again. Shane needs a loved one to help her with such fashion choices. love the story…thanks for the post!!!
I love this story and your others. Thank you!
I give them til the weekend,if even that long.lol practice make perfect. p.p.s. ally and hugs back women
ALly, Great Chapter!!!! I just hope Tina’s girls take there geing together as weel as Bette’s boy’s. Preactice does make perfect. Thanks PPS I just love this story!!
I don’t know if they’ll even make it to the weekend. Love the boys and can’t wait for the girls. You gotta love Helena, and the rest setting up things and ideas so Bette and Tina can be alone.
this is absolutely the sweatest story…thank you
yes, yes, yes, practice makes perfect!!! great chapter ally……as usual……
Good chapter. They are wonderful and the kids is love Tina and adored her. Now let them more practice and love to see them make out. Ok post soon please, thanks!
funnyone it is like riding a bicycle. and i hate using self control ally. thanks.
of course they need to continue practicing and we will love to read more about it! Good very good chapter!
Bette and her boys are just too cute(especially Dan)…..now let’s see how the girls react when they see Bette and Tina together. Bette and Tina are taking things slow but that just means the payoff will be oh so muh sweeter. How soon can Helena and Lara take the boys away for the weekend (LOL)? PPS!
Whoa!!! lol…I don’t know how they’ve got so much self-control!!!!! Loving the story. PPS
Self-control is overrated… well, maybe not so much when you have three boys sleeping upstairs…
Great chapter. The sexual tension is driving me mad – not far to drive me my wife says. Lets hope they get a sleepover soon.
Damn Jb beat me – oh well I still love Ally and think she’s # 1.
Practice makes perfect! LOL! Lots of sexual tension….hmmm…maybe you could help them out with that, Ally? Bette’s boys are so sweet and it’s wonderful that they want to see their mom happy. B & T will have their own “Brady Bunch” ….what shall we call them….hmmm? PS.
Hey Ally, Another afternoon delight as Tina and Bette grow even closer and towards comsumating their love for one another. The simple pleasure of a family meal and time watching a DVD together was blissful. The magnificence is in the detail. The honesty and openness is apparent and adorable. Tina’s conversation with Shane allow her to process her thoughts and admit out loud how strong her feeling for Bette are. Loved the stolen kissed between this pair. Only fulled the fire of their desire and passion. It was be interesting to see how Tina’s girls react to these developments. Please continue this awesome adventure soon. It is your class ans style that radiates from this tale and make is a real plesure to read and follow. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Aw shucks, Tina, its like riding a bicycle. Well, not exactly, but I’m sure you’ll quickly get the hang of it.
Wau too short. But it was a great chapter… I don’t think they will last long. I would say i hope they won’t…I just want to ask if Love and Pride is on hold? I really enjoyed it…
Can’t believe I’m first and of course I’m supposed to be working. Cute stuff !! Hope tina’s girls handle it as well. IMO these two need to get an overnight alone asap!!
Oh forgot to say congrats on your awards, well done Ally :o))
You can say sexual tension alright LOL…great story Ally, very sweet :o)) More please…