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Always Remember What Is Important (Part 3 of 3)
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Tina: Are you sure because I dropped her off this morning?
Ms. Holloman: I assure she wasn’t in my class today and none of her other ones…is everything ok, do we need to call someone?
Tina: No…no um I should probably go thanks and it was good to see you.
Tina didn’t wait for a reply, she was anxious to know where her daughter was, so she called the first person she could think of that would know.
Ring Ring Ring.
Bette: Yes
Tina: Bette, Angie is missing!
Tina said in a panic voice.
Bette quickly jumped up and began looking for her shoes, she had taken them off to take a quick nap after crying herself into a major headache.
Bette: What do you mean missing???
Tina: I came to pick her up from school and Ms. Holloman said she didn’t show up today, even though I dropped her off and watched her go into the school this morning…Bette where could she be??
Bette: Tina don’t worry we will find her, she probably just skipped Ms. Holloman class today.
Tina: She didn’t show up for none of her other classes today either Bette.
Bette: Fuck Tina where are you right now?
Tina: I’m headed to the planet.
Bette: ok well wait for me there and we will look together.
Tina: Ok
Tina pulled up at the Planet and as she was getting out the car, she saw Bette pulling up behind her.
Tina: Have you heard from her?
Bette: No and I tried to call Kit but no answer, let’s just hope she’s in here.
They both quickly walked through the planet doors and looked around but saw no Angelica, so they made their way to Kit’s office barging in without knocking.
Bette: Kit!
Kit: Baby girl why are you screaming?
Kit said playful until she saw the look on Bette’s face.
Bette: Kit, Angie didn’t show up to school today after Tina dropped her off…have you seen or heard from her today?
Kit took a serious tone.
Kit: Of course not and if I did I would have call you baby girl…what the hell is going on?
Tina: My baby ran away!
Kit tried to comfort Tina.
Tina said breaking into sobs.
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:-) happy to hear
Wow,thank you very muvh
Excellent… as always.
awesome, thanks for a great story. I love Tina, telling Kelly to F….. off. that was classic. thx a lot.
You are brilliant …. I enjoy your story so much so much. Keep it up.
Thank you …..
Thanks TN1 you had be crying but they were happy tears and I adored wonderful Tina! She dealt so well with Kelly and Henry!
As you say Girl we must Always remember what is Important – the L word – LOVE!
Excellent!
Amazing end of a wonderful story.
And Tina telling Hellry and Kelly to fuck off, priceless!
Thank you, that was great.
I think you are ready to write a story now that will require a THUD and a cold shower.
Wonderful story. Really liked Tina telling Kelly the real truth. Thanks
Thank TN1, my heart is Tibette
very happy with this final.
Their stories are better more and more.
10 Stars.
Gees TN1…well butter my butt and call me a biscuit!…this story was better than a mess of fried catfish!…yessireebob!…dang…kept pulling at my heart strings!….Boom!… as always you pulled it all together and gave us a happy ending!…Pow!..thx for this great Thanksgiving tearjerker…and please for da next ones since I’ve run out of Kleenex…..remember..’tis the season to be jolly’…give us some of that… hot, provacative don’t stop til you get enuf loving that you my fav storytellers know how to write sooo well…,why don’tcha!..yur a phenomenal storyteller!…by golly gee!..lubya \(*-*)/
You did it on this chapter! I loved me some Tina when she put Henry and Kelly asses in their places. I wished Bette could have being standing at Kelly’s door and heard Tina putting her ass in check and that would have being priceless. I was in tearing when they went around the table. So very touching! Thanks and now own to a very HOT and loving Christmas story when they first meet. Let Tina give Bette a Christmas she will NEVER forget. PPS
You know I haven’t read everything that you wrote but this short story is by far my favorite. It was hard reading this in the beginning but so glad you made everything right towards the end and oh what a sweet ending it was. Tina’s “monologue” while confronting Kelly was freakin outstanding and deserves a good round of applause! You my friend and Pie are the new life lines of this site so keep up the great work! CHEERS!