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Amicus Curiae
Story written on April 30, 2013 by justkeepswimming.
"Do you rent to avoid commitment too?"
"I’m not avoiding commitment," Tina replied. "I guess I’ve never met anyone I wanted to live with."
"I’ve never lived with anyone I was involved with either," Bette said. "I like my space. Plus other than the two year relationship, I’m a notorious under achiever when it comes to the duration of my relationships. I’m not well tolerated by others."
"They break up with you?"
"They would say my schedule breaks up with them," Bette said. "I’m told I put my job first; I never give enough time to the relationship; no one counts meeting at Daddy’s diner as a quality time…"
"I love your father’s diner!"
"I know you do."
There was a silence as they both reached to take a sip of wine.
"Let’s get the dishes taken care of and then review tomorrow’s agenda so we can relax with our wine before bedtime," Bette said as she stood.
They sat facing each other on the sofa, wine in hand. Their glasses were approaching empty.
"Work goes by quicker when we do it together," Tina said.
"Never underestimate the power of being highly motivated," Bette said. "We can enjoy our wine, and then I’ll run you a bath before bed. I have everything picked out to assist in helping you relax."
"I can’t remember the last time I had a bath," Tina said.
"All part of the full service package we offer here at Chez Porter Bed and Breakfast."
"You forgot ‘spa, meal delivery and attorney-at-law’," Tina added.
"I do aim to please," Bette said. She drank the last of her wine. "Wait here, I’m going to get your bath started."
"You don’t have to…" Tina started.
Bette held a hand up to halt Tina’s objections.
"Wait here," she repeated. Bette then disappeared down the hall.
Tina finished her wine and started looking through one of the magazines that rested on the table in front of her.
"I’m ready for you," Bette said.
Her voice startled Tina. She hadn’t heard her return.
"You can bring the magazine if you’d like something to read during your bath," Bette said.
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I am so in love with this story! The dialogue you’ve developed is both intelligent and playful. Can not wait to see where you take us.
Excellent thank you
You’ve got mad skillz, woman! Loving their banter, intelligent, witty and delectable.
I could use a relaxing evening like that. I’m also intrigued as to how the rest of their night’s going to go. Thank you for posting! :)
Love it, they are perfect for each other. Please post more, thanks
I especially like the way you handled the realistic situation of past sexual liaisons and the health factor.Too many fanfic stories have folks just going from one hookup to another w/o consideration of their past sexual history especially among lesbians.
As usual, amazing story from you, i love the way you write dialogue, its simply brilliant. Would love to read everything you have written, so in case i have missed something, any chance of posting other stories you have posted under different names? More please, love it.
Excellent story!!!Like everyone else, i enjoy the dialogue between Bette and Tina.PPS
Enjoying this story a lot. thanks
Everything that others have said and I feel the same way. I am completely in awe of the way you write for these two. The dialogue is awesome, you make conversation between them so realistic and normal it is just wonderful. I can hardly wait for the next chapter or two. Also I’m so happy you love our girls and you take such special care of them. Do you mean to say that you have more than two screen names. Gee. Thanks for posting.
Thanks for the update. I’m really enjoying this story.
I could use a night of pampering like that. Nice update.
Looking forward to the next chapter.Thank you.PPS
cool!..even the banter was great….. ..now I really like them to see in “Action”…on court and off the court.
Well their day was a whole lot better than mine – and the night will probably be as well. Enjoying the journey of this story. This update was a great way to end the day.
It was delightful to find this chapter posted this evening! I do love this story, and it’s only getting better with each chapter.
Hopefully I can squeeze this comment in before the reboot. Great update. Almost missed the kiss lol. Keep em comin
Thanks for getting in this chapter before the redecorators arrived!
Great chapter! Thank you.
The dialogue and the sexual tension between them is awesome! Can’t wait for their date!