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An angelic beginning…
“Meaning…?”
As she searched for the right word to cover her slip of the tongue, I locked eyes with her and gave her a small smile that I hoped said ‘relax’. Her discomfort almost made up for the goofy eyes I was giving to her minutes before when she was so patient whilst i remembered my name. ‘Do it now Bette’ said that stupid old ***** brain of mine.
“Would you like to come out to dinner with me tonight Ms. KennardTina?”
There we go, the old Bette was back – cool, calm and confident but with a new monogamy gene installed.
“No…”
Crash
My heart plummets to my feet and she obviously saw from my face that I was disappointed, upset, devastated, ‘heart-broken’
“Oh gosh that sounded so rude, I’m terrible at speaking before I thinkI meant I can’t, I have things to do” and then as though someone pushed it out of her “but it’s not that I don’t want to”
As my heart inched its way back up my body pausing briefly in my groin, I began to regain some composure.
“Well how about a night when you are free?” I blurtedagain. ‘Porter you have nothing to lose apart from letting this woman walk out of your life and never feeling this level of attraction ever againdo ittell herbut don’t scare her’
“Tina, I’m not going to deny to you that I’ve just asked you out on a date. I am a ***** woman and I find you incredibly attractive. However, I understand if you are not a ***** woman or not attracted to me in any way and do not feel comfortable with my offer.” ‘Please don’t reject me, say yes, say tomorrow or name a date and time and I’ll be there.’
“Bette…”
Just the way she said my name seduced me and I knew then that whatever she said after this, rejection or no rejection, my life would change.
“….I would really like to go out with you but this is quite a confusing feeling I’m experiencing and I don’t know whether to shun it or embrace it. ‘Embrace it, Embrace it!’
“I understand Tina, look why don’t I give you my card and you can call me if you feel okay about datingah..I mean going on a date with me?” ‘Oooh, don’t push it Porter, you’ll be asking her ring size next…’
I hastily scribbled James’s cell number on the back of my card and handed it to her. Our fingers brushed and I couldn’t help the sharp intake of breath as I felt my stomach twist. I snapped my head up to see whether she caught my reaction and see the same look in her eyes‘She felt what I felt’
I didn’t detain the angel named Tina any longer and I watched her hurry out of the door, hoping it wouldn’t be the last time I saw her beautiful face but that it would be the last time she ran away from me
TBC.
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(54 votes, average: 3.72 out of 5)
Beginnings are always fun. There is the sweet anticipation, the tenderness, the romance…and in Bette’s case, the goofy as well. Nicely done.
My favorite line: “Bette!” I blurted out like it was the first and only word I’ve ever mastered.
Tripping over your own tongue seems to be a rite of passage in a new beginning.
I could never get fd up with B&T stories especially the begining please please continue
You always gotta love B&T beginings. This has a bit of a differnet twist again, not the earring story, though theirs nothing wrong with the original . Bette tongue tied, too much. Miss I’m always in control Porter at a loss for words. Can’t wait for more.
cool story!
OH please continue im a real sucker for these Bette and Tina beginnings and this ones loooking good!
i like it…reading on
OMG! I am having quite a wonderful morning… more B&T beginnings! I love it! I like this different meeting. Now, I just wonder how long it will be before she calls Bette. Oh boy! Oh boy! Oh boy! Oh boy! Oh boy! Am I excited or what?! Please, post again soon. Great start to what I a sure will be a fantastic story!
We can always have another Bette and Tina beginning. It seems that I never grow tired of these. Please continue.
Gotta love beginnings! I think you’ve captures Bette’s voice well. I love it. MORE!
We always love beginnings…so keep them chapters comming…you´re doing great..post soon
i love beginnings also. so please continue. loved bette stumbling al over herself. very cute. thanks.
nice start!!!!!!!!!! continue
Another new beginning…me likes it, me likes it!
(looking around wondering where the 2nd page is) LOL
wow..looks like we gonna have tons of B&T beginning to read on..i like,i like! LOL..post soon!
Great beginning . Please continue
That was a wonderful beginning…looking forward to more. Thanks!!
Damn this is good and interesting, like it. Post soon, thanks!