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    An epistolary affair

    Story written on May 27, 2011 by kins40.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=77445
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    Letter 11 – Finale

    B,
    When I open my eyes you are not here.
    Then, I close them again and I see you.
    You are slowly inching your way up from the foot of the bed. 
    You are wearing a tailored shirt. It reaches below your hips. The white one you like to get changed into when you come to bed and at this very moment, this is all you are wearing.
    I am already in bed as you are making your way back from the bathroom. 
    As I see you stalking up towards me, my breath catches like so many times before. You look fantastic and your eyes never leave me as you get closer to me in this perfected, agonisingly slow, pace.
    I, instantly, recognise the look in your eyes and all I have to do is smile back at you and I know that you will transform the night which is approaching, into our sanctuary, a world where only you and I exist.
    My heart swells as your perfume reaches my nose and I  feel your body close to me. You leave a trail of wet kisses along my legs as you slowly progress up the bed. Your warmth is already registering on my skin as you go and the loose curls around your face tickle it along the way. 
    Your mouth settles on my stomach. You have teased the light cloth of my t-shirt up the way a little bit with your teeth and you take your time kissing around my belly button dipping your tongue within it every so often, knowing full well that it will tickle and elicit a giggle out of me. 
    Your mouth progresses to the left and then to the right to treat my hips with the same amount of affection.  I do not believe now that a single part of me has been left untouched by your talented lips.
    You finally reach up and you hover over me for few second. You sustain my gaze. I smile at you again and I whisper to you "I love you" and you say it again, like you did in the private garden, you look at me the same way and you whisper back, "je t’aime". 
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    2. My dear, dear friend! That was simply… breathtaking!!! You know, I had to laugh at myself, cause all the way through my reading, I had my elbows on my desk, with my head in my hands and a silly, goofy, but happy smile on my face! LOL… That must have been a picture!… Okay now, and here I thought I would be the bold one when it came to THE night… Well M’am, looks like you did a fine job yourself, didn’t you? Hot and loving at the same time… the perfect combination. And I loved to have Tina’s perspective on the “moment”! The part about Chapel Hill was absolutely beautiful and delightful and… Okay, GOTTA backtrack a bit… Who else can picture JB/Bette in that white shirt crawling up the bed with that predatory look on her face???… Yeah, I thought so… Sorry, had to get that off my chest. Okay, so as I was saying, I loved the CH part, and had to laugh at Bette who “reluquait” the cake instead of Tina’s beautiful assets… Anyway, that was perfect, and I can’t help but weep at the fact that this was the finale… Thanks for that letter, thanks for this challenging but amazing partnership, but most of all, thanks for your incredible support and friendship, especially in the last few days… I wish everyone could see what a truly special person you are. Thank you!… Kw… Oh, and so sooooo glad you got out of that building… ;)

    6. Hi Kins… I hope you’re better now… :-) ahem.. May I assume that you wasn’t feeling well and stucked for 3 hours ride home do made you wrongly type the word “Finale” for this letter!? … (Though when I saw Kw comments it might be true) … Does it mean finale for all the letters exchanging between our girls as they would live in the same land, face to face, side by side everyday?? … Or?? … Frankly if this is the real ending of the story I would be so upset for being abandoned after held and captured by those sweet romantic wonderful chapters/letters written beautifully by you and Kw… *looking at you with puppy dog eyes begging for treat* …. ;-) and no story on Bette’s reaction when see the sa-ku-ra? T haven’t show her (right? or my memory fails me? :-p will re-read later to ensure ..) .. Sigh with all due respect to you-writers to call when to end the story, I guess I’ll just hope and pray that you would be kind enough to share more… ;-) and enjoy your weekend with your love ones :-)

    9. As i was saying, but I admit that this story although filled with loved and beauty has me more than a little confused as to how the story unfolded and where and when it took place.

    12. Alright, what gives? What did Tina say “Yes” to, marriage or what? Will we get another chapter or is this the end of both your writing, what? I don’t understand. It was a lovely letter however, not filled with the passion of the previous ten. Of course, we don’t expect to have that level of passion forever but we can hope that their romance would carry on for a bit longer before the end of the story. Or do we get a sequel or epilogue or a continuation of the story when they are together or something. What? Having Bette show up at the farm was a wonderful surprise and I am not really complaining but, it just seems that things were left out. I don’t know what I’m trying to say but it didn’t feel complete. Does this make any sense at all to you. This story has been thrilling through those very beautiful letters with the beginning of a (hopefully) lifelong romance between “our girls.” I do most sincerely hope there is a way to continue the story of their lives. Thanks for posting.

    13. this is awesome..but I have to wait for Bette’s POV/Kword chap,..Tina is saying yes to what?..U-hal.. Or marriage?.. [there is one more chap right?]

    15. Wow kins. Glad u got home safe hun. ty for this its great but is it really the end is Bette gonna respond? I do love a cliff hanger though. :)

    16. Hi Kins, Great to read that after so much of a hassle day you can create such beauty and wonder. It was sheer perfection. I can’t wait to read more. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    18. Alright, I’m so sorry I couldn’t read ( and of course comment ) on this wonderful chapter any sooner, but you see, I was at the French Open these last few days and Kw failed to tell me you had posted ( yes, I blame her for keeping the “secret” lol ! ). Anyway, did I mention this was a wonderful chapter ? And that I had absolutely loved it ? I particularly love such description as ” I had held you hand all day and it was as ” if I had been permitted to hold the most precious item in the world “. But this is just one example of many more that I had to re-read a number of times for your words really sounded like a melody ( and before you say anything, no, I’m not trying to paraphrase Alphaville ;) ) and I realized it was like I couldn’t keep from searching for a chorus and that’s how I found myself reading and re-reading some sentences 5 times or more. This is why I need to say this to you guys, you cannot stop here. Of course you cannot keep us hanging like this ( although I have a pretty good idea what Bette’s question must have been and I don’t believe it has anything to do with an actual marriage, but more like the kind of question that Hugh Grant was asking Andy McDowell at the end of Four Weddings and a Funeral, which was to try and live together, make a life together, although they hadn’t been living in the same country for a while then ), so anyway, it’s not so much the question that I need to know as much as the craving for this story to last. Anyway, beautiful job you two !! Chapeau bas !! And once again, congrats on your auction win, petite veinarde ! ;)Oh, and Kw, you were so right, I could TOTALLY picture Bette/JB in that shirt. loool !

    19. Oh, and BTW, sorry for leaving such a long-a** comment. It’s just that I was very frustrated ‘coz for some reason I couldn’t comment on Kw’s last chapter and there were so many things that I wanted to say. Thank God I at least got to tell her how much I had loved the Notting Hill moment, and how B&T’s “foreplay” reminded me of the movie Fanfan, which I must confess I love.

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