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And it Started With a Phone Call Chapter 17
"Hi, there," Tina spoke into her cell phone.
"You’re home a lot earlier than you anticipated," Bette began. "It’s only 8:30." She glanced up at the wall clock to check the time. She had been pouring over photographic representations of some work she was considering for the gallery, and the dining room table was covered with evidence of her evening’s efforts.
"Well, in fact I’m on the freeway on my cell phone," Tina replied. "Because I’m done so early, I thought I’d give you a call and see if you could stand some company for a while tonight."
"Of course," Bette grinned widely as she replied. "How far away are you?"
"I’m just approaching your freeway exit," Tina said. "I should be there within five minutes."
"Would you like some tea or something? I can put it up so it’s ready when you get here."
"Thanks Bette, I could use a little pick me up," Tina’s long day was starting to wear on her, but it had been a productive one. "Whatever you have on hand is fine. I’ll see you soon."
Bette walked briskly into her bedroom to change out of her pyjamas. She pondered her choices briefly and pulled a pair of jeans from the closet, to be complemented by a tailored button up top. She went to the bed and pulled out a t-shirt from under her pillow, held its rumpled form to her face and inhaled deeply. A smile spread across her lips as she took in the scent. She then folded it neatly and placed it in the top drawer of the dresser before making her way to the kitchen to put the kettle on the stove.
The doorbell rang signalling Tina’s arrival. Bette opened the door to her tired, but smiling, girlfriend. Tina stepped across the threshold and took Bette into her embrace.
"You feel so good," Tina spoke softly into Bette’s ear. She caught a view of the dining room table as they continued to hug. "I’m not interrupting your work am I Bette?"
"I’ve actually gotten a lot done tonight," Bette said as their bodies separated. "I’ve managed to create a "no way in *****" pile, an "absolutely I want this artist" pile and a short stack of "unsure". Good progress for an evening.
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(29 votes, average: 4.52 out of 5)
I could get used to Bette holding me too. Nice chapter, post another soon, Please
I agree with fergz.. I could definately get used to Bette holding me, who couldn’t? Great chapter. I liked how Bette kept Tina’s shirt under her pillow- so cute! Can’t wait for more :)
Sweet, come on Girl, post again,
She will sleep much better in B’s arms
don’t you think
“I’m open to them, and encourage your thoughts.” Woo… how ’bout reader hints regarding ‘lots n lots of pages’? ;-)
Man, I’m so hopelessly in love with this B&T burgeoning relationship it’s just not funny. These quiet peaks into everyday life are just as good as any other because the quality of your writing is so high. I’m not usually a fan of sweet but this story is slowly redefining my tastes. I’m hopelessly addicted, thanks for feeding my habit ;-)
Very Sweet.
Usually short chapters get me frustrated cos I want more. But this was enough, just a brief stop to check in on our two favorite girls. Very nice, very nice indeed. By the way my best friend of over 20yrs is just like Sharon, except she can’t keep a secret so we never tell her everything.
Feeling warm and fuzzy all over. Very sweet.
Good chapter. Bette is so cute she keep Tina’s t-shirt under her pillow, and love Bette and Tina’s love, they so cute. Post soon!
The warmth and attention to detail in your chapters is such a quintessential, beautiful thread. You lend your character grace, an unparalleled distinction. You write the emotions, and we feel them. Thank you Swim.
I have to agree with Eric having very good taste in women. Who would not want to date either Tina or Bette. Although this chapter was very simple, it was beautiful, because it is nice to see the “normal” life between these too. It makes the story more realistic too. Awesome job once again! Kiitos!
Can’t I just live with them in their houses, in their lives, in the middle of this story? That way, I could just live and breathe and exist day-to-day, enjoying this story and not be dependent upon you for another post.
I want to be there for every moment, including the small ones “that exist in private” like these.
Escapism? For sure! I love the world you’re weaving for these two.
Poor Eric, shot down twice. You can’t blame a man for trying, though, can you? I wonder how he’ll feel when he finds out that B&T are together, foolish? But it’s not the ‘Eric gets humiliated Show’ either, is it? I like your focus: nothing extraneous and falsely dramatic, non-stop B&T.
Thank you.
If she spends the night she will not get any much needed sleep. Do you think I could trade place with Tina for 5 minutes. Dtdn’t think so. Thanks for posting
Cute chapter. I like how Tina can still make Bette nervous even though they are now officially girlfriends.
Post soon.
Love Peace and Chicken Grease.
Sweet chapter, what if they fall asleep and she end up staying the night and getting the best nights sleep than she has had in quite some time? I hope that Eric was not snooping around having heard that they see each other. Please post again soon.
Hey definitely really sweet I Love it Thanks WOW! Please continue post soon.
hmm, my wish… let T stay there for a night… and I don’t have anything NC-17 on my mind,really!LOL. only sweet dreams! ok, but if I comment or not, I trust you with this story and always read. thanks and please post soon.
What a delicious storyline and the magical way you deliver it. Thanks
Hey “swimmin” looks like you have a new fan here….I love what you have given us with B&T’s beginning….it reminds me very much of my current relationship, we met 5 years ago, and lived 45 min apart. I can easily recall how cherished our encounters were,until of course I demanded she move in with me, after I tired of the commute. I’m waiting for Bette to do the same…: )
And live happily ever after! Thanks for sharing your talent!
And I could get used to finding your posts. Would love to see more of your posts. cute and sweet chapter by the way.
Sweet just a nice night
what can you say to near perfection. dont let it go to your head. lol. really enjoyed the inner dialogue, the actual dialogue. and its was just do damn comfortable. my comments would be please more, asap. thanks again.
so sweet..
K
Excellent chapter. They are just so sweet. Can’t wait for more.
This is such a sweet and endering story. Sorry for not commenting before, but I most definitely wanted to congratulate you on your award!