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    And it Started With a Phone Call Chapter 20

    Story written on August 11, 2005 by justkeepswimming.
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    The smile came across her face as Bette heard the start of the only message on her voice mail.

     

    "Hey babe, thanks for the message this morning. Just to let you know, it took every bit of willpower this morning to let you make your callsLet’s just say you shouldn’t expend too much energy over the course of your work day, because I’ve got plans for you tonight. I miss you too."

     

    The tone of Tina’s voice was soft and ***** as she spoke. Bette replayed the message a couple more times to listen specifically to Tina’s comment about having plans for her tonight.

     

    "Little does she know, I have plans for her as well," Bette said quietly to herself, as she finally hung up the phone to begin her day. "And not just for tonight."

     

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    Tina realized her head had drifted forward toward the computer screen as she composed a letter to one of the principle investors in a film that was about to start production. She took a moment to lean back, simply becoming more aware of how her body reacted to the stress of the uncomfortable position she had adopted. She had settled toward the monitor in order to complete the task at hand when there was a knock at her door.

     

    "Come in," she called as she moved back from the desk.

     

    In walked her immediate supervisor, slender and distinguished as he opened the door and greeted her with a smile.

     

    "Good morning Tina, hard at work I see," he commented.

     

    "Hello Edward," she replied.

     

    "I wanted to remind you of the get together at my house on Friday evening," he stated. "It’s meant to be casual, but it’s likely to include a brief meeting as well. You’re more than welcome to bring Eric if you’d like."

     

    "I’m glad you reminded me, Edward," she felt like she was missing her opportunity to correct him about Eric, but continued on anyway. "I do have it noted in my calendar," she stated as she brought up her week at a glance on the screen of her desktop.

     

    "I don’t want to keep you," he finished. "And on second thought, please make sure you tell Eric about Friday. I’ve been thinking of asking him to do some work for us and I’d like to touch base with him on whether or not he’d be interested."

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    4. jks – what a tasty treat. i did a happy dance when i saw that you had posted. i love your writing. im such a detail whore. and you dont disappoint ever. so glad tina was brave enough to invite her. i think shes getting it. so do we get another one for friday, hint hint. post soon please.

    5. Another brilliant chapter! I’m glad Tina has decided to bring Bette, that’s a big/important step. Can’t wait for more and hopefully it won’t be too long since tomorrow is Friday *crosses fingers* :)

    14. Fins, I was away and just caught up on your last couple of chapters…bravo! I love how strong and powerful Tina is, but I am looking forward to see how she handles Friday night. Even though she made her decision to ask Bette while in a state of bliss, I wonder if she is not going to have angst when the actual time of introductions comes closer…

    16. What’s with ??, you should know by now we love this story. The verbal foreplay is as hot as the two of them. So glad Tina invited Beth. Can’t wait till your next update.

    17. I’ll have something of substance to say about your delicate prose at a later time. Sorry for being so silly right now. It’s late…
      Okay:

      Glad to see that the depth of their interaction made Tina’s mind up for her. Looking forward to the party.

      Michael Kors? Private gallery ownership must pay well. Who knew???? Bette probably knows him personally, she’s so fabulous! Eric who?

    18. “Tina’s moist, exquisitely soft flesh” Yes ma’am!!!!!

      Have you heard the new slogan of the ‘Sweets Council’?
      Tina, it’s what’s for dessert!

      Your dinner sounded pretty good as well! You and Carolann should collaborate on a meal!

      TBC? You’re being too modest, I’m sure.

    19. wow…i loved the expensive suit part! Your description on the food was detailed and actually made me hungry at 8 o’clock in the morning. You know, I’m definitely not a writer, I can only write professional business agreements etc. So it is wonderful for me to read your story. It makes me wonder where you get such a talent….I would like to visit that place. LOL! Kiitos!

    21. I believe your adoring fans have expressed more aptly than I am able, the talent you posses. Smooth, and sexy, the heat is palpable, and the early fires of love well stoked I think. Thank you so much for posting.

    22. JKS, it is NEVER too late to comment. ;) At least that’s what I keep telling myself when I realize I’m behind on comments. This chapter was wonderful…so was the last one…you know how much I love the little details of everyday life, and you write them so well. Thank you. :))

    23. The tbc(?) is a joke right?
      Fave quote of all time:
      ———-
      “I’m going to make you come so hard, you won’t want to leave this apartment for the rest of the week”

      DAYUM!

    24. JKS,
      I have just recently caught up with all your wonderful chapters. This is a fabulous story and you must continue.
      I love the way that you capture the complete entricment between Bette and Tina. This sudden and real connection nakes your tale so captivating.
      Please post soon.
      A loyal fan.

    25. I hope “?” is only testing the water thing. I really like this story, you know that, do you? I’ll try to make comments more often. Swim, you better prepare yourself for my linguistic errors then LOL. wonderful chapter!

    26. Wonderful and Amazing chapter, and I just loved the way you handled the love scene. Big step for Tina to ask Bette to go to her “work function”, but after a night like they spent together it was a easy decision. I’m looking foward to Bette laying on the charm and wooing her colleagues, and later maybe the weekend at Bette’s. Please continue this is a lovley story.

    28. WOW JKS your story is fantastic. I just read all the chapters. The B&T scenes are remarkable. I can picture them in my mind when i read your words. keep up the great workand post soon.

    29. From the previous chapters we know that Bette is ready. Heck! You don’t let someone borrow your $’000 clothes and then not want to be seen with them in public! It’s a clear decision on Tina’s part. If Bette says no, then that would be very strange.

    30. Said it before, I’ll say it again. You just continue to bring it! Everytime. Thanks JKS, I read and savor every word of every post. Had to comment this time since there was a ransom involved……..just keep writing….

    31. Bravo — I just caught up on all of this and it’s amazingly exquisite. I can only hope there aren’t problems down the road for them, though I expect there might be … in say 7 years or so (ha ha) … they’re just too perfectly perfect together and you write them magically, not overly flowery or silly or trite. Terrific, terrific writing –please continue!!!

    33. A jock, an intellectual, a writer, and now…gourmet cook! You are the Renaissance Woman!

      I loved your depiction of B&T making love. It is sexy without being raunchy. The verbal foreplay really reminds us that the mind is the largest of all sexual organs!

      I have to comment on the grammar, formatting, and structure of your prose. I have been distressed that recent “award winners” could not even put together a decent sentence. This round of winners restores my faith that writing, as an art form, has not been completely abandoned in this world!

      Keep up the wonderful work, and remember the little people when you become famous!

    34. nice- love that the interaction between the 2 instilled enough confidence in Tina concerning their relationship to ask Bette to the Fri night event. can’t wait to read more.

    35. OK…what’s this tbc(?) crap??!!! ;-)
      I think that the comments above attest loud and clear to the fact that many of us are eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Thanks for writing.

    36. I’m glad that Tina finally realized that the only opinion of what Bette is to her…is hers. Nice to see she’s taking Bette to her work dinner.

      As for how you handle a love scene, very nicely. Very nicely, indeed. You allowed their caring, passion and desire for each other to shine through. Always leave them wanting more.

      I loved Tina’s innocence in what clothes she had on. But very resourceful of her to find out.

      I think it’s the subtle nuances of new love that you so wonderfully depict that make this such a fun story to read.

    37. What with the ? mzrk. Just keep on writing. A lot of people reads but dont have time to comment. Sometime I need to do something and come back later to comment Love the love scence. You should them more often. Thanks

    39. Look, I’m not easily impressed. Pure and simple. But I am in total and complete awe of your writing ability. If I had half your talent I’d be beating down the door of some highly acclaimed publisher.

      You make me laugh; you make me remember; I swear, in this chapter, you’ve taken words I’ve spoken in the past almost verbatim out of my mouth; you make me feel. And, then, not that I’m looking for them, I don’t even notice any glaring grammatical errors or anything blare out to me. I gotta say it again, this is just sheer perfection. Please don’t stop writing this story any time soon. Just trust your instincts and do what you want to do with it. And while I’m extremely shy and don’t communicate with women on this board, I’m sure if you follow your writer’s heart, you’ll find you have a bevy of admirers you didn’t know you even had (such as myself), ’cause I just started commenting a little over a week ago. I hope this all doesn’t sound ridiculously saccharine, because I’m trying to be as honest and sincere as possible. I gotta go listen to some music now. You just keep writing and posting. I love this story!

    42. I’m hoping the (?) is Bette asking Tina what time to be ready on Friday!?! LOL Thanks for another perfect chapter….just enough to satisfy us for the moment, and plenty to string us along for the next….I love it, keep up the fantastic work! p.s. I just watched Finding Nemo again last night, I think I’ve finally figured out what your “swimming” i.d. is all about? am I right???

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