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And It Started With a Phone Call Chapter 25
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"Always the witty one, aren’t you Alice," Bette said, not letting Alice’s mood affect her in the least.
"Tina, you are looking," Shane paused for effect before continuing. "mighty fine." She took a swig of beer from the bottle in her hand and continued to smile after she finished speaking.
"Shane, do you think she could get to know you a bit before you start trying out new lines on her," Alice asked.
"What? She does, I’m making an observation," Shane said defensively, looking to Bette for support. She saw the sober look on Bette’s face and realized she may have overestimated what her charm could let her get away with.
"Well if Shane thinks I’m looking good, doesn’t that mean I could pretty much have my pick of anyone in here?" Tina asked as she did her own mock scan of what crowd there was.
"I’m certain you wouldn’t have any problem finding someone to take you home," Bette said, more for Tina’s ears than anyone else’s. She was accustomed to women she was with being wrapped up in her presence. She was intrigued by Tina’s ability to alternately pull desire from her one moment and appear uninterested the next. Tina spoke, but only for Bette to hear.
"I meant what I said earlier," she whispered. "I’m going to wear you out when we get home." She then addressed the group. "What can I get everyone. I’ll get this round."
She made her way to the bar with their requests.
"Okay, Bette you need to get that dreamy doe-eyed look off your face, you’re freaking me out," said Alice.
Bette smiled and held her hands to her face for a moment before replying.
"She’s incredible. What’s not to be dreamy and doe-eyed about?"
Shane took a long draw on her beer at that comment.
"Hi Bette," a woman approached the table from Bette’s left and placed a hand on her shoulder.
"Cheryl, hi, how are you," Bette replied.
"I haven’t seen you around the last few weeks," Cheryl’s hand continued to linger on Bette’s shoulder for a moment before she let it fall to her side.
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Excellent as always. Tina is hot :) Can’t wait for more.
Reading this story is like, like, like…Supping at a 5-star restaurant on Chateaubriand accompanied by a fine, silky, smooth bottle of Pinot Noir. I venture to say it doesn’t get much better than that…except when you throw in fruit for dessert. Can’t be toooo kind, Swim. Perfection deserves praise.
Aniticpation is worth the wait. I have officially dubbed you as one of my favorite authors. I am loving where this is going. Please choose a very seductive song for their dance..I’m thinking Tina will be doing a whole lot of teasing on the dance floor. Just for my curiosity, what are Tina and Bette wearing? Please, Please continue!!!
Hi Fins,
I don’t know that Tina has to try so hard to keep Bette’s attention, but it is sure fun for us…I think it is so sexy that Tina said they were going to f*ck later…something that Bette will surely not forget.
Tina has Bette wrapped around her finger; amongst other things. Nice chapter.
I hope this dance is ultra sexy.. wait of course it will be cuz they’re Bette and Tina!!! Can’t wait till they get home hehe :)
Aw man, Hackgirl stole my thoughts. I too, looooved that line… all I could think was “what did she just say??” and of course I had to read it over a couple dozen times, each time my grin getting wider and wider. You really have a way with the keyboard.. you’re an absolutely fantabulous writer!!I’m completely hooked. Oh and Hackgirl’s right bout the cricket comment…you probably won’t understand it unless you live in England, West Indies, Australia,Pakistan where cricket is played with the same fervour Americans reserve for baseball.
get those girls home….mango is waiting. post soon
damn, i’ve been reading sooo many B&T beginnings that i can’t seperate them anymore :s now i was thinking “huh their first dance, what about the time they… ow crap that was that other story…”
but anyway good going ;) make the dance sexy and all the women in da club oogling at them :p
Tina is so smart…she knows what it takes to keep Bette’s interest only on her. Great chapter. I would like to see Bette a little jealous of Tina…maybe someone could hit on T. Kiitos!
LOL…I guess I’m following YOU tonight. ;) This was wonderful, as always. I’m wondering if we’ll be seeing more of Cheryl? And the Alice-Dana interaction should be quite interesting as well. Of course, I can’t forget the anticipation of what will no doubt be a masterfully written NC-17 chapter heading our way soon? Thanks for continuing this wonderful story, jks. :)
well this was such a welcomed relief from media blvd. i cant begin to tell you. jks posted. it could have been longer, tho. heehee. i love mangoes. *devilish grin* this so delicious. tina has got it going tonight. get typing girl. your have a dance and an NC-17 coming up, right? i dont really know, just hoping and a wishing. thanks for ths great chappy.
Bring on the fruit!!! Woo Hoo
I just want them to hurry up and get back home….(insert wicked grin here)
Swim,……….. “O” swim, ……… lol ….. I have a big bloody grin on my face.
Your too wicked for me, I may have to retire from reading your story !?! Very good, I do believe Bette has Tina shaped blinkers on, …. could one ask for a better view, I think not.
Your writing is reminiscent of mangoes too you know, its warm, fruity, silky smooth in its transitions, and has slight ridges – so you can get a good grip on it. Just Keep On Swimming girl, I personally think, you rock.
OK, you knocked me for six with this line…“Rather than make love with you, I’m going to fuck you until we both pass out from exhaustion,” Tina said. HELLO…Ladies and Gentlemen Tina is in the house!!! Damn it’s like I’m happliy reading away and then wham! You sneak up behind me and whack me over the back of the head when I’m least expecting it. LOL it’s great! I’m thinking that the phrase “knock me for six” mightened make too much sense as it’s related to cricket. I guess it’s kinda like saying you hit it out of the park – if that makes sense…anyway, it’s a good thing. Thanks for writing.
‘She’s going to have me thinking of her all night long.’
Way to go, Tina! You already know how the game is played! Are you sure you haven’t done this before?
I’m looking forward to their return to the house, but in the meanwhile, I’m loving Tina’s first trip to the bar. Hope no one (Nadia) gets grab-assy with Ms. Kennard. Ms. Porter might not take it nicely!
Love.This.Story!
Oh, Tina was setting the stage for later alright. Dang, foreplay is going to be all night long. Nothing like insecurity to bolster your confidence!
Again you did a great job of capturing that uneasiness that happens when a friend begins spending time with a new ‘other’. Alice’s jealousy was very apparent. No one that has held best friend status likes to feel like that position is being usurped. But given time, Alice will begin to see that she has not been replaced. The circle has only expanded.
Well, if Tina wanted to keep Bette on a short leash because she was anxious…I think she’s accomplished her mission. Bette is like a hormone plagued teenager. Tina is workin’ in like a pro.
Bring it on…next chapter, please!
jealousy should be fun around the bar.. is cute. great update! :) love your story..
hehe, so Bette is really wrapped around T’s little finger. I like it a lot. I’m wondering what song they’re dancing to? thanks for update!
JKS,
Oh gal you got it all going on here.
Tina is the wolf in sheep’s clothing and looks like Bette is Little Red Riding Hood. Difference is she knows that she may get eaten and is looking forward to it.
Having Tina be so direct is giving this tale a real edginess and desire that this was transferred to Season 3 of the show. I like the fact that Bette may be the Alpha female outside but Tina is taking on the dominant role in the bedroom.
A worthy installment to this marvelous melodrama. Brilliantly plotted and observed.
It brightens my day to see a new post from you as it means that I get to see more of you terrific writing.
Fabulous cliffhanger to taunt us all with.
Please post soon and put me out of the misery of not knowing what the night will hold. Loads of hot, sensual, sizzling and sexy lurve making, is my hope.
Your Loyal Fan.
“I am in so much trouble….”
Bring it on Tina!
Tina rocks! she is so smooth…loved this chapter (love all the chapters) i’d love to see Bette jealous. thnx for giving us all something exciting to read i yearn for the next instalment!
Nice chapter, I would like to see both B&T deal with a little jealousy, and maybe Tina can show what she is working with on the dance floor. I would like to see her stake her claim to Bette on the dance floor, thus sending a message to all of the other woman–TAKEN, look else where.
wow i love this tina. so agressive. lol cant wait for them to get home. will there be any drama in the bar, perhaps someone trying to cut in on them dancing.
very good chapter! i like how tina is so at ease with everything.ur next post should be evry very interestin ;) please POST SOON!!!!!!!
This is getting more excited and let see what’s next, thanks!