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    And It Started With a Phone Call Chapter 27

    Story written on September 4, 2005 by justkeepswimming.
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    What makes a house a home?

     

    She felt sore as her arm reached out ahead of her to pull her body through the water in as smooth a fashion as possible.

     

    ‘My God,’ Bette thought to herself. ‘I am sore in places I didn’t know I had places.’ She quickly fell into her pattern and let the thoughts of the previous night overtake her.

     

    ‘She loves me back,’ Bette thought. ‘But then, what’s not to love?’ She let that thought stew for only a moment. ‘Who am I kidding? She’s completely kicked my legs out from under me, and I think she knows it.’

     

    The minutes slipped away as she lost count of the number of times she had covered the length of the pool. She didn’t notice Tina standing on the deck, shoeless, her chest rising and falling hopeful of replenishing the oxygen that her body continued to demand, even after her run had ended. Tina stood at the edge of the pool for a few minutes, but when Bette didn’t notice her, she stripped off her socks and waded into the shallow end with her shorts and t-shirt clinging to her.

     

    When Bette’s smooth stroke brought her back to the shallow end, she saw Tina had entered the pool and stood to greet her.

     

    "45 minutes already," she asked. "Really?"

     

    "Really," Tina replied. "You must have been enjoying your swim."

     

    "I was enjoying thinking about you during my swim," Bette said as she walked over to where Tina stood at the edge of the pool.

     

    Tina’s arms moved up around Bette’s neck as the space between them diminished to nothing.

     

    "What would you like to do today?" Bette asked, moving in to kiss Tina’s lips lightly.

     

    "I’m going to make us brunch," Tina announced after pulling away from the quick kiss being proffered by her love.

     

    "So you’re not going to make me last the day on a protein shake then?" Bette inquired.

     

    "No, I’ll make you a healthy complete breakfast," Tina said. "We did get groceries yesterday after all."

     

    "Am I getting a cooking lesson today?" Bette inquired.

     

    "If you’d like," Tina replied. "But if you prefer, you can relax at the kitchen table with the Sunday Times while I make you breakfast."

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    2. aka Just Once

      I love the way they decided to each exercise their own prefered way – running vs. swimming. I much prefer swimming myself.

      This was a wonderful chapter and I so enjoyed the easy dialogue you created for our favorite couple.

      Thank you so very much for sharing this beautiful story of yours. I will wait patiently for the next post. I hope that life continues to be much more friendly to you.

    3. ah pitter pat goes my heart jks. i love this so much. and remember what you wish for. if its comments you like well then your gonna get them often. your in my thoughts. peace back at ya.

    5. hey JKS thanks for making my day. just cant get enough of your story. u make B&T a wonderful loving couple. what will bette do with tina away? hope all goes well for you. keep the faith

    9. JKS, I am sorry that you feel this way. “Fewer comments tend to delay the posting process, because it feels like I haven’t presented something worth commenting on.”

      Please know that because more people tend to read vs. comment, does not make your story any less valuable. You have a lot of fans whether you know it or not.

      Now, about the story…I also loved how the excercised in a way that worked best for the both of them.

      I could almost picture the long on Bette’ face when she thought she had to go running with Tina….. P-R-I-C-E-L-E-S-S!!

    11. I’m with SnQQpy all the way. Well said. I always read your beautiful award winning writing, yet I don’t always post a comment. I will make a greater effort to comment more often. I enjoy your storytelling and want you to continue.

    13. Hey JKS Thanks for posted WHOA! I think I need to go swimming too LOL! Oh! Gosh Hey I Love it this is gonna be a long day for Bette and Tina Please continue Thanks.

    14. Another beautiful chapter.. Comments don’t mean everything. Yes they are wonderful to get but in the end as long as you are satisfied with your work then what other people say or don’t say doesn’t really matter. And you should definately be satisfied because this is an amazing story. I still love it and I can’t wait for more!

    15. Of course we want the story to continue! Not every one comments because not everyone feels comfortable doing that…but look at your numbers, girl! People are interested!

      Oh, the idle promises we make that come back to bite us in the butt. Bette’s slight look of fear will remind her to not do that again. Nice that they were able to compromise. Having separate interests will keep them from becoming homogenous.

      It’s funny, when we’re in love we want to shout it to the world, and Tina is no different than anyone else. She’s just shouting it in a different key is all.

      Their back and forth conversations and negotiations was very cute. Bette is wrapped around Tina’s little finger, big time.

      I like how Tina didn’t cave into Bette’s request to stay the night. She needs to know that Bette will respect her boundries. That will build a strong foundation going forward.

      I like how you incorporated the ‘sexual soreness’ that often times accompanies romantic hijinks. Something that we can all relate to, but the pain is so sweet.

      Amazing how we can forget to get to know each other when we’re having fun getting to KNOW each other. Glad you brought that up. It’s fun to watch them get to know each other either way!

      Wonderful chapter as always. More, more, more!

    16. Swwwwiimmmm! What are you doin? Set up? That’s very frightening! But okay. I know all is good.

      “Not that there’s anything wrong with that”…Crackin’ me up again! Do you, did you watch “Seinfeld”?

      Later, gator! I gotta think about some things. Cheers!!!!!

    17. Fins…thanks so much for posting…I was fearful that you were going to fall into the void of GiaSony and Flairforthedramatic(?I think that’s her name)after your last comment…yea! you are back!!!

      So, I also think it is cool that they each did their seperate exercise routine because while running, or walking, or swimming, that is when you get to maul over the important things in life. I love doing that. I like how Bette and Tina obsessed about each other because it is so true and realistic. One of the reasons I love walking is that it is all about me, my thoughts, and my daydreams.

      Hmmmm, about them being apart for so long. It’s going to be tough…I know when I was first getting together with my sm, I went away for a week and it nearly killed me. To the point of ruining my family vacation because all I really wanted was to be with her. B and T are in for a rough week…might make sense for B to suggest moving in…just a thought.

      I’m interested in your take of Tina’s mom. So many people have written about it, yet nothing, as I know, was ever mentioned about her family on either S1 or S2.

      Well, it was a pleasure seeing you pop up…hope we see another post soon!!!

    22. As a long-distance swimmer myself I’ve often said, “no one looks good in goggles”. Of course, that proclamation never before included Bette Porter. Hmmmm…..

    26. “Fewer comments tend to delay the posting process, because it feels like I haven’t presented something worth commenting on. “

      Please, don’t even think of interrupting this story! My potential separation anxiety is so great, you’ve got me nigh onto hyperventilating at this moment!

      You capture the nuances of new love so well, reading this story could be the perfect exercise for one hoping to experience the thrill of love without the messy side-issues that inevitably come about.

      Love is much better the second time around, particularly from the comfort of ones computer chair.

      I could say more in depth – and I will again soon – I need to keep you posting. Thank you for this wonderful story.

    27. Thanks for the suprise chapter. You know you have a lot of fans and the number of comments prooves it.

      Bette is so much in love with Tina. She is changing her schedule to be with her.Maybe they should move in together.

    29. Hey JKS:) that was a really nice surprise to find your post. and thank you for PM. I’m glad you havn’t disappeared without a word to us like flairfordramatic *hope she’ll be found soon* Please don’t feel so insecure about your writing ability. I like this story a lot and I’m always looking forward to next chapter so please, post soon!

    30. Can’t imagine the day when I wouldn’t find that smile appear on my face because you have posted nor the absolute satisfaction and awe I feel once I’ve finished reading your words. Your ‘world’ of B&T is worth visiting and savoring…you ‘have it’ jks – just keep writing, okay? Thanks for resurfacing with this post! Much appreciated.

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