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And it started with a Phone Call Chapter 3
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“Not much, what’s up?”
“Alice said you were hanging out at home all mopey, why don’t you come out with us and get some cheer,” she suggested.
“Shane I know you can keep a secret…”
“Of course, Bette, is something wrong?” Shane’s voice became serious with concern at Bette’s words.
“No, nothing’s wrong, it’s quite the opposite actually,” Bette smiled. “I just got off the phone with Tina and I’m presently on my way over there. I’m just exiting to the 101 right now.”
“Now that’s the Bette I know and love,” Shane said with admiration in her voice. “So when are we gonna meet this girl? Sounds like she’s certainly captured your attention.”
“Alice suggested coffee with everyone this weekend sometime, but we might be… busy.” Bette laughed.
“I’ll make up a good excuse why you couldn’t come tonight Bette,” Shane was pleased to note the unique timbre of Bette’s voice, which she inferred meant her friend was smitten. “And I’m sure you two will have to come up for air at some point. Besides, now I’m really curious to meet her…”
“Okay Shane, we’ll see how the weekend unfolds,” Bette considered herself lucky to have so many close friends looking out for her.
‘Thank God it’s 11 at night, I can’t imagine doing this trip at rush hour every day,” Bette thought. She was definitely speeding, but didn’t have too many concerns considering the late hour and the sparse traffic.
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Tina set the phone down. Her hands were trembling slightly.
“Okay, 40 minutes. What should I do to keep from losing my mind for the next 40 minutes,” she spoke to the room around her, seeking a solution to her anxiety. “Clean. That’s it. I’ll clean.”
She noticed the photograph of her and Eric on the dresser.
‘*****, that’s just got to go for so many reasons…’ she said as she picked it up and deposited it into the top drawer. It wasn’t that Eric was a bad person. She really felt as though he was very much part of her past at this point and removing his picture solidified her intention to move on to what she perceived would be a new chapter in her life.
She tidied up the room and made the bed before deciding to jump into the shower in an effort to clear her mind and pass a bit more time.
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Can’t….breathe…COLD SHOWER RIGHT NOW.
F**K!! WOW!!
Damn!
Oh my god!!!
That was amazing! Sexy and tender and wonderful! 100 stars is not enough!
Holy Smokes! That was HOT! I think we all need a cigarette! And I don’t even smoke!
You can’t stop now, Excellent job–that was incredibly hot!
JKS, this is fantastic! Love it! Please keep going…
K
Wonderful chapter, VERY hot! Glad you are feeling better. Hope all is well. :)
Gulp…still waiting for my heart rate to get back to something vaguely normal. I’m not sure that ‘hot’ does this justice! I’m just about done with my next chapter but am sorry to say it’s the last. I’m on a jet plane to LA this Friday. Going to spend some quality time at the Getty, Venice Beach, Melrose, etc, etc.
Hope you’re feeling better soon!
Hey Fins, I think you should definately continue this story, I look forward to Tina meeting all the girls and I think it would be interesting if you could bring thid story to the beginning of season one. Perhaps you can explore why they were so great in the beginning to sitting in Dan Foxworthy’s office. I think you would do a brillian job, so I am looking forward to your next post…
yes, yes, yes, don’t stop!!!!!
No, don’t stop!!! This is to great a story to end it. Great job!!!
SWIMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great chapter!!!! love the slipping her hands in Bette’s back pockets…and loved how Bette raced over for her booty call!(ok, i know is was more romantic than that, but it was funny how she got there so quick!)
I’d love to hear about that ‘Perfect Weekend’.
Feel free to proceed at your own pace…or not…but I’d vote yes.
with writing like that- please feel free to use 6 Months as well. thanks for this- just back in town and catching up. nicely done as usual!
Hot!! more really,really soon
OMG…that was soooo good.
FUCKIN HOT AND SEXY, LOVE IT!
Great ! I want more … but then I am very greedy ! lol – The passion is delicious – a pleasure ! Thank you ( I flatter myself that I make an appearance in your story ….. as Bette speeds along in her car ! lol ) x
I can not believe that two months have went by and I never saw/read this story. Here it is 12:27am West Coast time and I am now making a pot of coffee to read all of the recent fan fic winners.