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    And The Winner Is! Chapter 21

    Story written on February 21, 2007 by Succulent1.
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    B&T continue to fight there attraction towards one another, while Shane and Carmen gives in. But will Helena get in the way?

    Somewhere along the line tonight, Carmen had confessed to her that she was just as scared as Shane was. The fact that she had admitted this to Shane made her feel special.

    There was no way that she was going to let this trip be a waste. Just when Carmen was coming from the bathroom wrapped in a towel with wet hair, Helena called Shane on the phone.

    The first thing that she heard from Shane’s mouth when she answered was,

     

    “WOW!”


    Helena: Wow what?

    Shane was captivated by Carmen’s beauty. The bronze tone of her skin was amazing.

    She noticed the way her wavy hair tightened when wet and how water slid off her gorgeous body in rivulets down her legs. She wanted to lap up every drop.

    Helena: Shane, did I interrupt something? Do you have one of your freaks there?

    Shane: (snapping out of her trance) Sorry, Helena, there was something on TV that had my attention.

    When Shane spoke Helena’s name, Carmen’s whole body began to shake. The thought of Helena had a big effect on her. For so many years, she’d wanted and needed answers.

    Carmen needed to know how Helena could make love to her the way she had and then push her away. She wanted to know if she felt any remorse for breaking her heart.

    Carmen sat and dried off while she listened to Shane and Helena’s conversation. Helena called to have Bette place her name on the list so she wouldn’t have a problem getting in.

    Helena wasn’t prepared for what she heard. The news of someone shooting at her client and the one woman she loved was unexpected.

    Was Bruce so desperate to win his wife back that he shot at Tina? Or was it Cheryl, the bitch, who almost took her brother’s life?

    She was furious about not knowing the source of such intense evil.

    Helena: Is Carmen ok?

    Shane: Yes, Carmen handled the whole thing like a pro.

    So she asked about me, Carmen thought. Why? Carmen thought long and hard. Helena wouldn’t have come here for nothing.

    If it were only the case she was worried about, she would have just been on the phone. It had to be Mark. He had to be the one to have sent her.

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    5. Not good that Helena is on her way to Bette trailor. Now we will have Dana and Alice Shane and Carman, then we hopefully will have Bette and Tina. But who will Helena be with. thNKS

    6. The plot thickens! If it gets any thicker it will be concrete. By any chance did Tina’s doctor examine any other portion of her anatomy besides her head?

    8. What is Tina thinking? Pushing Bette away isn’t going to keep her safe. And wait did Tina ever go the doctor after that wacky night w/ Cheryl? Does she hav eany idea she may be pregnant? And now Helena is about to walk in on Carmen and Shane…..NO, can you say drama. Please post soon. There is so much going on. And what about Bruce, what is he up to? Did her really try to have Tina killed or was thta Cheryl trying to off Bette??? I’m dying to read what happens next so don’t keep me waiting, please.

    9. THANK U, THANK U, THANK U!!! Hate that Tina is pushing Bette away. Hopefully her plan involves bringing down Cheryl so her and Bette can be together. Also, Please say that Carmen and Helena are two find their way back to each. Shane is going to find hers just not with Carmen PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!

    13. Oh crap… not good. But hopefully B&T can get in a little something something too before anyone comes looking for them. Shane and Carmen are just screwed.

    16. LOL guess I didn’t have to worry about you not posting soon, thanks :o)) Again a great post – B&T alone, Dana in the game and Shane/Carmen making out with Helena on the way phew!!!! More, more, more….

    20. Suc, Sweet to see that Tina and Bette received minor injuries from the shooting but this was a warning and did not intend to kill. Sad to see Tina walk away out of love for Bette rather than talk things through and try to get a handle on this mess of emotions and feelings. The physical pull was great although the head is stronger. Can’t wait to see what transpires now that Helena is on set. Troubling times ahead but just want to keep Bette and Tina together puh-lease. Thank you for this intense tale. Your Loyal Fan.

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