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    And Then There Were None, Ch. 3

    Uh-uh, I disagree, Kit said, shaking her head, causing her curls to bounce. I dont think it was poisoning, but something else happened.

    I agree with Kit, Dana spoke up. And I dont think it was poison, considering the rest of us are all okay.

    For now, Mark suddenly said quietly. This caused everyone to stop and stare at each other.

    Shane took a deep breath, deciding to restore order. I agree with Kit and Dana. I think we also know where Jenny stands, as well.

    Ah, yes, but majority rules. More of us say suicide, Helena pointed out.

    This isnt a ***** election, Dana muttered softly.

    Helena glanced at her, but didnt say anything. Jenny stamped her foot angrily. Look, I dont care what any of you say, she didnt kill herself! And if you keep listening to that dragon over there, she added, pointing to Helena, were all going to end up dead!

    Are you going to listen to her? Shes obviously distraught and insane? Helena said with distaste to Carmen, who shrugged, eyes flickering back and forth between the two women.

    Ill show you distraught! Jenny shouted suddenly, charging toward Helena. Shane reached out to grab her, but missed. There was a rumbling sound and a sudden crash, and they all cried out as a large piece of cement suddenly fell from the ceiling, crushing Jenny where she stood.

    Oh my God, Dana intoned quietly, hand over her mouth, as stared at the huge concrete that sat atop Jennys crumpled body.

    Mark let out a yell and ran forward, pushing at the rock in vain, his muscles straining and sweat breaking out on his forehead. The others ran to join him, except Helena, who stood back.

    *****, its too heavy. It wont move! Kit shouted, kicking at the rock.

    It doesnt matter anyway. Shes dead, Helena said from behind them.

    They all turned to see her studying them quietly, and then turned back and looked down, realizing she was right, as only Jennys legs were sticking out and a huge pool of blood was spreading across the floor.

    Tina shrieked and leapt back as blood began to run over one of her feet. Everyone moved away and silently watched the red liquid run out from underneath the huge slab of concrete.

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    1. OK, before Jenny got bloodily crushed by rock, I thought she was the murderer (ya know, “weird Jenny finally snapping” scenario). So definitely neither Jenny nor Kit (severed body). Marina… just because she was the first to ‘die’… doesn’t mean she’s actually ‘dead’. She could have possibly taken a pill that slows down her heart beat, making her appear ‘dead’ (and be ruled out as a suspect)…It’s Marina! Mentally, she snapped. She came back to get revenge. The HIT LIST 1. Jenny first – crime of passion 2. Kit – bought her beloved Planet. Marina wants it back. Bette’s NEXT – because Bette judged Marina. [I still say it’s Colonel Mustard in the living room with a frying pan!] Time to bring in Matlock/Jessica Fletcher/CSI.

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