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Angel Fire – 23
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Eventually they had surfeited themselves on good food and were all a little buzzed on alcohol.
Bette moved over to the double lounge chair and Tina joined her.
“Ok,” said Dana, “let’s see the presents.”
“I thought all this food and drink WERE the presents,” Alice grumbled.
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Most were joke, fun presents, not too expensive, but meaningful.
Then it was Angel and Stacey’s time.
“Well, first we cooked the main courses for you.” The girls grinned happily as another shower of compliments rained down on them.
Stacy had found a small blender that she knew Tina wanted. And Angel handed Bette an anniversary card. It had the usual sentiments, but there was a folded piece of paper inside. Bette opened it, read the contents and then looked at Angel with such happiness.
“What is it? Is it private?” Asked Dana.
“It’s Jely’s class schedule this semester. She’s taking a painting class,” explained Bette. Everyone in the room smiled at Bette’s happiness because they knew how much Bette had hoped for this.
“Ok,” said Angel, trying to sound casual, “one more thing.”
Stacy brought out a package which was really a fairly large picture of some type. She handed it to the Bette and Tina who opened it carefully. They looked at it, their eyes moving around the picture and then looked at each other.
“Well, let us see it!” Demanded Alice and everyone gathered around. What they saw was a work of art of Bette and Tina’s life. The center section was a painting of the women in their white wedding clothes. But all around the picture were scenes from their lives done in a variety of complimentary media.
“See, I told you so,” said Alice to Bette.”
“Hmm?”
“I said if you just left Angel alone about the art that she would come back to it,” Alice explained.
“Hmmm.”
“Are you pissed that I’m right and you’re wrong?” tweaked Alice.
Bette grabbed Alice in a tight hug.
“I forgive you for being right,” Bette said with a huge grin as she released Alice.
“Well, ok,” said Alice. “Shane is not the only one who has all the good advice, you know.”
They finished the evening with Kit and all their friends singing, ‘You’re my everything,” she song that had been sung at their wedding.
You’re my winter, summer, spring…
My everything
Bette and Tina’s bedroom
“Where should we put the picture?” Tina mused as they were getting ready for bed.
“I’ve been wondering the same thing,” answered Bette as she was brushing her hair.
“Maybe the living room,” offered Tina.
“Probably.”
They got into bed, turned off the lights and snuggled into each other.
Angel and Stacey’s bedroom
“I’m just so pumped, SO pumped,” Angel kept saying to Stacy as her girlfriend was out of the shower and getting ready for bed.
Angel was almost jumping up and down with excitement.
“They really liked the gifts, didn’t they? Really liked them?”
“Jely, they were crazy about them,” Stacy assured her girlfriend.
“I wish there was a pool at this apartment complex.”
“You can swim at your moms tomorrow,” Stacy pointed out.
“No, I need to swim now; I have so much energy. I’ll never get to sleep.”
Angel was still bouncing around as Stacy began to smile.
“Jely. Jely,” she said again as she put her hands on Angel’s shoulders to slow her down.
“Go in and take a shower,” Stacy ordered. “I’ll turn the lights down and be waiting for you buck naked.”
A huge smile began to form on Angel’s face.
“What should I wear?”
“If you don’t know the answer to that,” Stacy teased, “you’re getting’ nothin.’”
It wasn’t long before Stacy began to tap into all Angel’s energy. When they finished, they slept very well.
Bette and Tina’s bedroom
“You awake?”
“Uh huh.”
“I have an idea where we should put Angel’s picture where we would often see it.”
“Ok.”
“We could put it on the ceiling over our bed.”
A short pause.
“We could.”
There were a few moments of silence while the women were presumably looking at the ceiling.
“Come here.”
They rolled toward each other, undressed quickly with the practiced skill of long-time lovers. Soon they were sleeping together as peacefully as their daughters.
End End End
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Nice ending. Any new story coming up soon? ;)
I hope Health wise you are doing better. Love your stories and hope not to wait long for another one. Angie grew up to fast as all children do. but Alice never will. Do write when you feel up to it, our thought and prayers are with you thanks
Great update, sorry to see it end. Good luck to you with all your medical stuff. Prayers are with you. Come back to us with a story when you can. Take care of yourself. Let us know how you are doing.
Thank you for posting this wonderful story, you have a fan in me. I hope everything goes well with you, and we all hope you bless us with another story soon if allowed. Take care.
this has been such a good story, thanks for writing it and here’s hoping all your medical issues turn out well.
If they put it on the ceiling, they’ll have to take the mirror down first. But seriously, that was a sweet story, pancha. With your help, they did a great job of raising their kid. Godspeed. We look forward with great anticipation to your next.
all good things must come to an end. I’ll keep an eye out for new stories that you poost. Later Gater!
You have great skill as a writer. This story was at times delightful, always complex and enjoyable. Get your health issues straightened away and come back to us refreshed. I wish you a complete and rapid recovery. I’ll be looking for you on the flip side.
i really enjoyed this story cant wait for your next story….Thank you so much for this amazing read
Do get back to feeling 100% soon, as you’re not allowed to stay away from us for long periods of time. Nope, not allowed. So the girls cooked and no one got sick? Awesome. And the main gift was really sweet. I feel like a scrub now. My parents celebrated their 30th anniversary on the 14th and I didn’t get them a damn thing.
Wow wonderful ending and they all lovely. Hope you will have a new one for us soon. Thanks for a wonderul story and can’t wait to see you soon!!!!!!!!!
This is LONG overdue… GREAT STORY!!! ..Please take care of your self … good luck with the rest of your test!!!
Pancha. Thank you for a wonderful story and more importantly; take care of you. I wish you well and hope you come back to us feeling better than before.
Nice ending… What a brilliant story. Hope you will have a new story for us in the near future. Pancha, Get well soon and take good care of yourself :)
Excellent. Good luck with the medical stuff. Thoughts & prayers are with you. Come back when you can. Thanks for takin the time.
Such a nice ending to a sweet story. Get well soon p.
Nice ending. Best wishes for your health.
Great story! Any new stories on the horizon??? Let’s hope so!!
wonderful ending to see both couples happy and crazy in love…wonderful story…something else from you pancha? i’ll be waiting and i hope it will be B&T happy as well, i don’t think i can handle drama so well anymore ;)
thanks! beautiful ending to a beautiful story! i hope you continue to bless us with your wonderful writing! looking forward to your next! =)
Thank you so much for this wonderful and beautiful story, I’m really glad and grateful that you finished it despite your health problems. I wish you the best and hope you soon will be back with a new happy B&T story….I would really love that. Take care :o))