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Angel Fire – 9
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“Get your fucking hand off my girlfriend,” Angel hissed.
Before they realized what had happened, the two couples were separated by a tall and moderately large woman. She spread both arms out and smoothly separated the foursome. As she held one arm up to keep Angie from moving, she spoke to the other couple.
“You ladies need to leave now,” said Red, the bouncer, in a voice that was both polite and menacing. “Your last round of drinks is on the house.”
The older couple looked up at Red and then turned and walked to the door. She turned toward the two astonished teenagers, took each by the arm and led them to the back room.
“Sit down,” she said.
The still amazed teens remained standing as they looked at her.
“Do. It. Now.” Red ordered and the girls sat down in unison and watched the bouncer pull out her cell phone.
“Are you calling my mom?” Angie stood up as she asked this question.
“Sit. Down.” And Angie sat down again.
Bette and Tina picked up the girls and took them home in separate cars. Bette drove Stacy home. The trip was silent until Stacy said, tentatively.
“Ms. Porter. Those women teased Angel. They said she wasn’t woman enough to…uh…They said that they could service me in a way that my wussy girlfriend couldn’t.”
Bette carefully pulled the car off the road.
“Stacy. Listen to me,” Bette said quietly but firmly. “Are you listening to me?”
Stacy nodded.
“I want your word that you and Angelica will not go to Milk again until we have all talked about it. Ok?”
After receiving Stacy’s assurances, Bette drove her home.
Later at their home
“Are you going to lecture me?” Asked Angelica in a voice that was part angry and part frightened.
“Am I talking?” Said her dark mom.
They were sitting in chairs out by the pool, but Bette had been ominously quiet. Angie would rather have her Mama yell at her than be silent. Tina had already weighed in.
“I’m disappointed in you.”
That’s all Tina had said and that was bad enough. Angie realized that her mom was furious and couldn’t say any more. So she sat quietly and waited for her other mom to come home. And now she and Bette were sitting by the pool.
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beautiful and beyond sweet
Such a wonderful chapter and the young lovers to be are so sweet and the mommas are cute too. What oh what does Bette have in mind? I think they need to tell Angelica that she and her girlfriend will find their way together – I’m not sure they need this much coaching but I am impressed to see the folks trying to be supportive. I also really liked the MILK scene – those predatory lesbians were funny and dealt with quite well.
My first thought was that Bette was gonna tell Angel to go screw around with a few girls. O.O LMAO! I wanted to see Bette haul off and knock those women into next week. Or rather Tina would’ve been even better to see. Maybe B&T could suggest the first time be in that airstream so there’s nowhere to run and they can be REALLY close. =p
I like the way you have Bette and Tina talking to Angie. Calm and truthful and also filled with concern. It’s a real partnership.
Pancha I love the way that you are telling this story and the way that you have everyone interacting, especially Tina and Bette. Those women at Milk should be very grateful that the mothers were not in that club that night. It would have been a very different story and someone would have had their clocks cleaned by Tina and Bette, they should be very grateful that Red was there. However, I feel that if those two show up at Milk again and Bette and Tina find out who they are, it still might be very touchy for them. What in the world is Bette thinking now. Did Tina give the story of Adrian and Vanessa to Angelica, if not, when will she? Thanks for such a loving and concerned story for all involved.
This is such a lovely story! Will you continue with “Lifetime”? I really miss that story!
Surely, Bette is not thinking of getting a film,for the girls to watch, Omg I would die if that happens. Tina will have two kinds of fit. That is her baby Glad that Red was at Milk,s to stop. and none of the gang was there, OMG. Tina and Bette are trying so hard to help the girls. Trail and error it would be for mine. Tomorrow nite Hope 2-0 for the Mavs Have a nice week-end and root for the Mavs. Thanks
what does bette have in mind?
now i hope bette and tina go to milk and find these two bitches and pick on them the way they picked on the girls…with your last statement… i don’t know why this can to me but i hope bette is not going to put on a “SHOW” for angie… for sure tine will be pissed… love this story… love the young and innocent love… please continue
hmm, what’s bette thinking? 2 thoughts came to my mind and i hope it won’t be it…1. make angie watch them making love LOL, 2. tell angie to fool around with somebody who’s already experienced but it would be wrong…i hope whatever bette is thinking will be good and won’t create any problems for B&T and angie and stacy
You’d think 10 years additional experience would have given the 2 at Milk a smoother line of patter. Good catch on Red’s part. If she’s is not an aunt, than a guardian angel. What’s Bette got on her mind? Surely not to put on a clinic as has been suggested? Maybe an old tape of her and Tina? Still kinda creepy. “Creepy” Geez, I sound like the Beaver. Hey, Wally!
Very good chappy and it was to see Red. Hmm, what does Bette have in mind, porn, a tutorial from Shane, a visit to a respectible sex toy shop for some books and an instructional
I wonder what Bette has up her sleeve. Hopefully it will not cause to much strife and drama in their life. Great post and am waiting to see what Bette is going to do.
wonderfull as ever angie s lucky to have moms who are so understandin and so supportive of her and understand her so well its not a easy thing most of the time but she is definatly blessed
Bette is amazing and sweet!!!!!!!!!!
With friends like Red, you cant go wrong; would have been hell to ay if Shane & Alice had been there. Cant wait to see what Bette has in mind; I’m sure whatever it is, it’s gonna B good!!
nice dialogue. love it!
I think it is a wonderful story that gives insight on how Bette and Tina would teach their kid 20 years later. Questions on sex and all make them seem close as a family – without barriers. Very sweet. Thanks for writing.
Oh no..what are you going to do? Pancha…that was very sweet and I hope I can talk to my daughter like that some day. UGH!
Enjoyable story. Can’t wait for more post.
I knew big Red would come to the rescue! BTW, is your Milk a dive? Why do the Porter women always manage to get into fights there? Oh- they’re high-spirited, aren’t they? I’m wondering what Bette has in mind for Angie, something to help her get some ‘experience’? Surely not! Thanks!
thanks for Red that was in Milk! i like how Bette is understanding and support with Angelica. this was a very good chapter
Yeah… I kinda think Bette is gonna suggest that Angel sleeps with other women first for experience…. regardless, still loving it!
I realy enjoy the dialogue between Angie and her moms. Bette must be thinking of having Angie be with someone of experience first before hooking up with Stacy. Or….she wants Angie to watch the two of them???? Watching your parents have sex is beyond crazy!!! Great chapter.
This is so sweet and loving, but you really got me thinking about that last line…what is Bette up to??? More please I love your writing :o))
This is such a good story. Love how you keep the communications open between, Bette,Tina,and Angelica. She’ll be fine, but I so want them to go back to Milk and have Tina and Bette show up if trouble brews. Bette would have kicked some butt. Now, what are you up to?