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Apogée 20
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“Couldn’t be, this bill is dated almost two months before the fight.” Dana said leaning back and playing in Alice’s hair as she thought.
“What about Shecter? Has she woken up yet?” The writer asked, the agent shook her head again,
“As of Monday no, she was conscious for a few moments but she was only speaking gibberish…something about a carnival.” Dana said, Alice sighing,
“She could really piece a lot of this together for us, if we know how this whole thing went haywire maybe we could get a fucking clue where McCoutchen is.” The writer said frustrated,
“Well what about the worker at the orphanage when are you going to see about that?” Dana asked yawning, Alice’s brow furrowed,
“Well never, because I haven’t heard anything about it until now. I thought you told me the orphanage burned to the ground.” The writer said, her eyes closing to rest, Alice yawning right after Dana.
“Yeah Shecter was following some lead and the guy called I guess, Sonny something…oh yeah his last name was Dalson,”
“You never told me about the orphanage,” Alice said, her brow furrowing, Dana nodded.
“Yeah I left a post it on your computer telling you to check your messages, and in your voicemail there is a message giving you the details of the call.” The agent said in her own defense Alice scoffed.
“Why would you go through all of that, post it, message, middle man stuff when you could just tell me?” The writer asked, Dana shrugged,
“Well I guess I’m forgetful and leaving messages usually saves me from arguments, but I guess this is an exception to my theory.” The agent said; Alice pursed her lips leaning over to give Dana a kiss.
“We’re not arguing baby, it’s just weird…I’m wiped, I’ll look into all of these medical terms tomorrow when I go into my office at the Daily.” The writer said sweetly, Dana pulled her in for another kiss deepening it and wrapping her arms around Alice. The writer moaned into Dana’s mouth and the agent smiled pulling away from a disappointed Alice.
“So am I going to get the rest of my back rub tonight? If not, then you’re not going to get the rest of this kiss.” The agent said smiling smugly, Alice sat with her mouth hanging open as Dana stood up from the couch walking in the direction of the bedroom, stripping off her shirt as she went. The writer sat frozen, a small smirk plastered on her face.
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Holy Shit!! This is a great chapter and congrats on 20 chapters!! anyways, I’m loving this story more and more as i read it!! This is amazing…This is one story that I come back for more and more..Thank you ClosetDana, you make it worth the read!!!
Congrats on the award. Haven’t comment on your story b4 but I do keep up with reading them :) Very cool & interesting story.
Congratulations on the Fan Fic award – it is well deserved as you are an extremely talented writer. Delighted to hear you are so happy – it’s wonderful that she gives you so much inspiration, long may it last – we need more writing from ‘both’.
Awesome job ClosetDana! Congrats on the award and 20 chapters. I must say that I have enjoyed all 20 of them. The line about Jenny and the carnival was hilarious. I was, however, hoping to read about Alice finishing that “back rub”. I still enjoyed the chapter though. I hope that Alice digging around in Dana’s past isn’t going to stir up any problems. Hopefully Dana will just open up to Alice about her past, and Lara. Who shot him? Was it Tina? Bette? Helena? I can’t wait to see who did the dirty work. Keep up the great writing. You have a wonderful gift.
Hey! I almost forgot. It wasn’t that I was expecting YOU to say a comment about domestic violence so much, but it was what I expected Alice to comment on. So really, you just write her character very true to the original. Believe me when I say that you still suprise me. It’s a great story.
When I opened up your story and saw the official fan fic award, all I could think of was how proud I am of you, sugar. I can’t think of anyone that deserves it more then you, when it’s so clear how hard you work. You are amazing in so many ways and it would take forever to make a list of the things I love about you. I’m honored to have you dedicate all your chapters to me… makes me feel so warm and fuzzy. I love the Jenny gibberish… the carnival, lol. I LMAO on the part where Gomey kisses Mark… so hilarious. I don’t know where you come up with the things that you do, your creativity is off the charts. I can feel all of this coming to a head. I even love the Tibette. I want to know what happened to Candace but I’ve said that before, lol. In a story like this I don’t expect a happy ending but that doesn’t stop me from wanting to read… I hang on your every word. The Sharmen was hot…. even with the clothes on. I know what I’d prefer though, lol. I like that Alice is doing her research on Dana… and that she’s really curious about her past relationship with Lara. Well I guess I don’t have to worry about what Josh is going to do… since he’s dead now. And no I still don’t know who killed him but I’ll wait for you to reveal that to me. I’m doing my best to practice patience… not an easy thing for me to do. At least I am patient enough to wait for your next chapter, lol. Congrats on your 20th chapter and the award. I know I’m not the only one who knows just how talented you are… it shows in your writing and the response you get. I know I’m the luckiest woman to have your love. I’m glad that I inspire such greatness in you. You are my silver lining, sugar. I love you!
Congrats on the award. Mark and Gomey kissing was a delightful hoot. Maybe Mark is into Gomey. So Kit took care of Shane for awhile. Too bad now Kit is trying to end Shane’s life. Alice and Dana go good together. Always seeming to get themselves into hot water. When I first read the part about Josh getting shot I thought immediately of Bette but when I re-read it, it is sounding a lot like it was Tina or maybe even Helena. But my guess it was Tina.
Good chapter. Damn this is so good and I think that is Bette killing josh or maybe Kit. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Congrats on chapter 20!!! That’s just awesome … keep them coming. The bit about the carnival just completely cracked me up. Loving all the tension.
Thank god that Josh was the one to die, at least for now. Still really hoping that my fave couple Danish will make it out okay. Also, congrats on the much deserved award and your 20th chap! I love this story and I hope that you post again really soon!
WOW…. I really hope that was Tina who pulled the trigger… getting more and more interesting by the post, that’s for sure. Can’t wait to see more!
Hoorayyyyyyyy! First congrats on the 20th chap and of course congrats to the award! it was long over due! Sorry it took be a bit to catch up! Your doing a fantastic job! :sheds a tear: 00Lword has come so far! oh and im really glad and wish you and your girl the best of the best luck in your relationship! oh and to add in my 2 cents i thinkkkkk it might be Helena? perhaps? lol or Bette/James oh hell i dont know! so dont leave me hanging for much longer PRETTY PLZ! :)
Such a good chapter! Congrats on your beautiful relationship, and congrats on your 20th chap. I have been following from day 1 and I am obsessed. I am loving this chap for all the explaining that is done. It makes me feel like I understand the characters better. I just love this!
Hey babe!! I’m so sorry I didnt comment last chapter! I’m so bad about that sometimes! Anyways, I really loved how this story is playing out. I love your writing style, and I’m sure you hear me say it way to ofter, but you are excellent when it comes to these characters! Congrats on the award babe! You deserve it so much! :-)
“She was only speaking gibberish.. something about a carnival…” That was my favorite chuckle line. Love how you throw those in! Gotta love Bette, she’s a take charge woman. She did what had to be done, or did she? I still look forward to your every chapter. Belated congratulations on your fanfic award. You deserve it! Thanks for writing!
Congrats ClosetDana! All things goin good hey? Even tho im Danish forever im still lovin this story and you write all the characters really well.. which is keeping me interested. Alice delving into Dana past is good, [i hope]. Maybe Dana will open up to Alice about Lara? Great story, post soon. Thanks.
‘Tuesday’s were usually the day that shit goes wrong…’ Ain’t that the truth. I freaking hate Tuesdays. And yeah the carnival line was classic. lol You said B&T would have a slightly better ending than I had originally thought. I’m predicting they will be together but in prison. =p
Well, what can I say?Firstly congradulations on the award! I have to say I was so happy to see one of my fave writers get a mention in there amongst all the tibette people. You’ve done us all proud!And the latest chapter was no exception, it was really really great. well done.
somehow i don’t think that was bette , im thinking tina and she isnt so innocent i think theres a past great story closet congrats on your good relationship can’t wait to read the next chapter
Congratulations on chapter 20 and the Fan Fic award ClosetDana. As always a very, very good chapter =)
This story is uber exciting – I’m completely addicted. I think I’m going with the least predictable candidate in the Josh murder – Helena – I’m probably totally off but she’s a bit suspicious.
Congrats on 20 chapters and of course on the well deserved award. Long overdue if you ask me. Oh and I loved this chapter as well, hope you keep it up. Ah and more are in order, never apologies for being in love, enjoy the feeling, but tell your girl to start updating I’m suffering from withdrawel from her great story! I’ve always enjoyed the banter between you two!
great update 20 chapters… whoa congrats on the award 3 pages good how about 6 longer
congrats on the award! i know you deserve it! and am i crazy in thinking that it was tina who shot josh? who knows, i think i am just a little bit nuts! post mores soon please!
First of all, I’m glad to hear everything is going so well for you! Some congratulations are in order! :D And as usual, a fabulous update! I don’t have any questions left..I know it all. :D I think that Bette and Tina need to run off and live happily after in some place where nobody knows themand can track them down. And see, Tina can be called Robin Hood. Josh did it. ;) The orange tinted cream did wonders to Carmen’s fingers. What brand was it? :P I would like to have Alice’s job and her boss. Just pop in whenever I want (an that being accepted). I could do the whole working at home thing…I wouldn’t be distracted at all. :) And again, one reminder…rub down. I know you said Dana won’t forget to mention it to Alice, but I thought I’d help a little bit.