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“I was with them this morning, I interrogated witness Morales and I have a meeting with my team tomorrow. Is there a problem Inspector? I can’t imagine any other reason for you calling me at home.” Dana realized she was pressing her luck getting catty with her superiors but she was known for her lip so she didn’t worry.
The inspector cleared his throat, speaking clearly.
“Agent Fairbanks, agent Jennifer Shecter was shot earlier this afternoon, while transporting Miss Morales to a safe house outside of California. There is a press conference tomorrow morning and we need to brief you tonight, how soon can you be here?” Dana hated that her presence was implied but this was a case that the media was having a field day with and every clean get away McCoutchen made meant a press frenzy the next morning. It was bad enough the bastard killed Witlen now Dana had to deal with this shit storm,
“Give me an hour…what happened to Morales?”
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Shane blinked slowly, the loss of blood causing her to become light-headed; she swayed back and forth still holding the gun to Carmen’s forehead. The bartender looked into her eyes then gazed at her various cuts and bruises that had already began bleeding through her white shirt. Carmen raised her hand slowly, grabbing the barrel of the gun and pushing it away with the back of her hand. Shane had no strength left, she knew what she needed to do but she couldn’t pull the trigger. Her finger jumped nervously on the pistol as the bartender came closer,
‘Just fucking pull it, pull the fucking trigger dammit!’ Shane’s mind knew what to do, but as Carmen came into her personal space, all rational thought vanished. The bartender stood only inches away from Shane who was barely conscious from the blood loss, the seemingly small cuts that ran along her stomach and arms where actually quite deep, and the adrenaline that kept the assassin going was wearing off. Carmen tilted her head up close to Shane’s ear barely touching her,
“Thank you,” Shane didn’t hear anything after that, it was over and blackness covered everything as she spiraled toward the ground.
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Woohooo!!! **Doing the cabage patch dance** I’m first…I’m first…I’m first…I am loving this. I can’t wait for kit to get involved. I wonder who the new shooter is going to be? Hmmm…it was love at first sight for Carmen, Or maybe she read some of Jenny’s Circus crap and wanted it to end quickly. Crikey, Dana was shocked, now wasn’t she? Oi, she knew that Alice was a reporter though. I can’t wait for the next chap…loving both fics. Cheers mate.
what plan!!!!? AH you’re killing me. Hmm…what’s going to happen with Bette and Tina eh? Something steamy I hope. And as for this carmen thing, you’ve really got me going here. I can’t wait to see what happens next. update soon! fabulous job!! :)
That crafty Carmen…I can’t wait to see what happens, excellent as usual.
gr8 update as alwayz : )
Aww so Carmen has something up her sleeve. Maybe she was sent to take care of Shane in a number of ways. Poor Dana having to break her date with Alice only to come fact to face with her at the press conference. And then there is Bette and Tina. So Tina swings both ways (already) and Bette is already having dreams about her. It looks like the games have already begun and I am in the stands. My problem is who do I root for?
ahhh… isn’t that sweet, Carmen is taking care of the killer hired to execute her. I just love those relationships that are bad for us. Bette kills Tina’s hubby… another classic example,lol. Well at least Alice and Dana had a moment till it turned into a big fricken mess…. but I’m getting use to your sense of humor. Who’s rubbing off on who? I’m still your prisoner… being held captive behind those imaginary bars of yours. Wondering what the hell I’ve gotten myself into by reading your story. Jenny… stable condition, NOOOOO!!! Let her be allergic to peanuts…shove a whole bag down her throat. You promised me a twisted story.. I know you can run circles around me, just give me the one thing I want… Jenny’s death. Use that imagination, baby! What is Carmen’s plan?! You better post soon… and give me another tidbit… it’s hell behind bars.
This is crazy!! What the hell was Carmen thinking?? She’s just making things worse for her!! What plan does she have in mind?? Poor Dana/Alice, hopefully they’ll work things out and everything’s all and well. As in for Bette and Tina, will Tina find out that Bette was the one that had her husband killed?? Thanks for the update and I can’t wait for more!!!
Ah what the plane is Carmen a undercover and want to catch Shane. This is awesome and let see whats next, thanks!
Is Carmen an assassin too? They’re both hired guns to take out each other? Did Shane meet her match? Bette better work her magic to get Tina, she has the perfect opportunity w/ this dinner. Great update.
I think Carmen will be able to warm cold hearted Shane :) Oh yeah
Bette is so devilish!!!