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Appreciation (FINAL)
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“I knew you would remember it baby,” Tina said smiling.
“Excellent, now before you go, why don’t you do one more check, just to make sure you got everything,” the hypnotist said, “just ask your brain if there is anything that it would like to say.”
Bette nodded and did just that.
Flashback
Bette drove over the bridge rapidly. She had been fighting with Tina all night about the situation with Kelly. Why couldn’t she believe her when she said that she was innocent. At the other end of the bridge she saw a solitary bar with neon lights. It was just the place she needed. She would sit down, get drunk, tell the bartender all her problems, then sleep herself sober in the car.
She parked the car and walked over to the bar. It was at the moment she noticed it was raining. So she ran to the bar. She hated when her hair got all frizzy because of the rain.
She was surprised to see that the bar was full of women. There were women all over the place: chatting, drinking, dancing, and making out. Bette had walked into a gay bar, and as usual with gay bars, it didn’t take long for the brunette beauty to get hit on. After politely declining, Bette made her way to the bar to order the strongest scotch the place has to offer.
“Scotch on the rocks please,” Bette said waving at the woman who was reaching up to grab some bottle of alcohol from a shelf, “make it a double.”
“Coming right up,” the bartender said. Her Italian accent was thick, and the recognition for Bette was instantaneous.
She snapped her head up and said, “Marina?”
Marina turned around in shock and exclaimed, “Bette! Oh my God, I didn’t think I’d see you here! What are you doing in New York?”
“Tina, Angie, and I live here now,” Bette explained.
“Wow, I never thought you two would leave LA you know with the gang over there and your house and your jobs,” Marina said tapping another bartender to take her shift and walking around the bar to sit beside Bette.
“Well our friends were being to fucking nosy and throwing all their problems on our shoulders,” Bette said, “I mean Tina and I had been broken up for almost three years! I didn’t want to lose her again and all the pressure was putting a strain on us.”
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wwwwoooowwww that was amazing too bad it’s the end thank you soo mutch for this amazing story!!!!!
LOVED IT SO MUCH. Thanks for giving us this story!
great ending! have been enjoying this story very much! thanks TB24!
Great ending!! I loved how u mixed those memories, the promise in the car, the proposal in bed and ofcourse the kiss.. Oh my that kiss *sigh*.. You did a great job on this, thanks!:-)
nice tibette ending
Thanks for the story. I tried to read it on Halloween Night but it seemed that any story posted on that night was not able to be opened. But now I have to go back to read the beginning because I thought that they were still in LA. And secondly I thought that Bette had the accident after leaving the house and driving around for an while and not knowing where she was going, so she couldn’t have been on her way back home to talk to Tina. Sorry but I like continuity in stories even in FF or it just reminds me of IC and her flawed story lines.
Thanks for this wonderful story. Loved every word.
Great story,thank you.
Amazing! That was a great ending, I’ll miss your story!
So sorry to see this amazing story end..thanks for sharing!