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Are you the one? Part 2
"Here I come LA" Dana said happily as she drove away.
3 weeks later
Upon stepping out from the LA airports, Dana was more than happy. Although she was tired due to the long journey, she wanted to meet her fiancee almost immediately. Waving at the taxi, she asked the driver to send her to the hotel first. She wanted to look presentable. Maybe a bath and change of clothes will do. Dana looked out the window throughout the whole journey. She smiled as she remembered how her parents reacted when she asked for Alice’s details, like the place she liked to hang out, her house and office address, her favourites and etc. She told her parents that she would like to see her fiancee and try to work things out. But she stressed that it should be a secret. She didn’t want Alice to know it and she also didn’t want to know how Alice looked like now. She wanted to figured it out herselt by using her six sense.If they were meant to be together, then she would be able to find and figured out who her fiancee was anyway. Her parents was more than happy to see that Dana wanted to take the first step of knowing her fiancee. They called Alice’s father right away to ask for details. Alice’s father was dumbfounded when his buddy Irwin explained why they needed details on Alice. He was more than happy to comply. When he hung up, he had this shit eating grin on his face, which made Alice curious. She asked, but was given a winked by her father. She laughed at her father and actually felt a bit happy because this was the first grin she saw since he told her about her engagement. She still hated the arrangement, but she was the straight forward person and she knew she would tell Fairbanks to fuck off when they meet. And she waited for this day to come.
Now Dana was standing in front of the Planet, well William told them this was her daughter favourite hang out spot. And now it was exactly lunch hour, and Alice would come for lunch almost everyday. Dana was breathing fast. She was now clean and dress smartly in a pair of loose fit jeans, a white shirt tucked in, and a pair of dark brown boots. She exhale loudly and slowly made her way inside the Planet. She prayed hard that she could feel Alice there.
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(26 votes, average: 3.65 out of 5)
Another post? Cool! Don’t burn yourself out, though. I was a little scared when I saw Gabby, but, she seems like she will be supportive here. Lara. Sheesh. Love that Dana has an excuse to go to LA. Dana was being so cute about the whole thing. Dana is making a good move to scope things out first. The reactions of the two on seeing each other were just classic. Absolutely loved this: “she was going to claim it under all circumstances.” You go get her, Dane! Excellent update! Thanks so much for the quick post!! I am looking forward to what happens next.
I am so glad that hear that you wanted to write this long time ago This is going to be one hell of a story. Nice touch with Gabby as a good friend to A.. No need to worry about the annoying Lara for now. Somehow adding the title Dr. to Fairbanks really sounds perfect. Love the fact that she was a heart surgeon. So cute that D was all excited to go to L.A. The gang all being at the planet was fantastic. I wonder if D would conceal her identity for the moment. Again, I have a very good feeling that the story will feature plenty of Danish happiness. Two thumbs up, uhhuh!! btw, please take MaGoose’s advise seriously. It is does not take long to get burn out. We want to see you around for a long time. Thank you very much.
HEY AGAIN! Im going to just echo MG and HD…anytime you comment after them they really dont leave any rocks unturned. Another great post uhhuh, really enjoying this. Thanks so much
Really interesting start. I look forward to reading more!
great update… this story was in my head all day… it really is a great concept. keep up the good work -A