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Art of Love – Chpt 17
Previously
I splashed water at Bette wildly, and she screamed for me to stop, all the while splashing back at me, as we laughed and played and teased one another.
Taking a deep breath, Bette plunged her face down and took in a mouthful of water. When she raised up, she squirted it at me, and laughed uproariously.
“You are mischievous! Absolutely mischievous!” I exclaimed, leaning back, amused by Bette’s antics.
Bette crawled forward, slowly making her way over my body, to my mouth, and smiling slyly. She kissed me.
“Mmm. Take me to bed, and show me how beautifully bad you can be,” she whispered. “I want my hero’s reward.”
Chapter 17
We stood together in front of the bathroom mirror kissing, naked, except for the over-sized towel that we’d draped around us after drying each other off.
The candlelight dimly and romantically lit the darkened room.
“Mmm. Baby, let’s go fuck,” I breathed into Helena’s ear, before licking inside it.
As I held her tightly, I felt Helena squirm delightedly in my arms.
She found her way to my lips with her mouth and sucked my tongue. Then Helena dipped down and licked with the length of her tongue from my breastbone, up my neck, under my chin, and back to my mouth. She moaned and breathed ardently as she kissed me.
Completely and utterly exhilarated, and enraptured beyond imagination, I let the towel drop to the floor. Massaging Helena’s ass, I swayed my hips against hers. I was throbbing and ached to have Helena inside me. But her desire appeared to be even stronger than mine.
“God, Darling, oh fuck. I feel as if I could come at any moment,” Helena informed me softly and breathlessly. “My clit implores your touch. Feel me, Bette. Touch me.”
I kissed her, withdrawing my tongue with a series of lingering curls around hers.
Reaching around from her ass, I slipped my fingers between her legs. I held them there. Still. And reveled in the pleasure of her twitching, pulsating clit.
Drawing my face back, I looked into Helena’s eyes and smiled. The weight of her lust lured her eyelids closed.
I began to slowly stroke and massage her.
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Helena’s not very subtle, is she now? Excellent storytelling, zheese.
Wow, I love it. Bette seems like she was taken aback by Helena’s question. Oh well I can’t wait to see what happens next.
Yay! I love how you wrote ‘yikes’ as a summary- very apt! Hmm, will Bette say yes, i wonder. I hope she doesn’t pause tooo long, Helena will be totally crushed, no? :D Loved it as always zheese, don’t keep us waiting too long now, ok?
Wow. That took my breath away! I wonder why Helena asked Bette that question so suddenly. Anything to do with the Baracuda I wonder? hehehe… I hope they’ve an honest discussion about it – no heartache! Anyways, I adore this fic as always, do continue! You’re just so romantic! :D
Well, when Helena asks like that, how could Bette refuse?
Nothing ruins a moment like the “talk” of commitment…lol (that was a joke)
beautifully written as always…. you put the big bubble glass in there just to make me jealous, didn’t you? =P
You write such beautiful love scenes and you can send them to a screeching halt. I can smell the tires burning from here.Though it would be hot if they made this a little more permanent.
hey zheese- of course i’m still reading, i just love this story. uh oh, way to be subtle Helena. Now what will Bette’s reactio be? And my favorite line form this chapter is ” cuddle my kitty….” just great.
danggggg, didn’t see that coming…no pun intended. excellent writing…as usual!!
damn……damn…DAMN!!!!!!!! i leave my computer for a few weeks and i’ve missed the bomb?!?!?! man, i don’t believe it, tina’s gonna wig when she hears this and oh god………the honeymoon story……LMAO once again we all salute your brillance in writing zheese, so keep on doin it!!
wow, talk about a mood killer
mmm Zheese baby you are killing us here, you can’t stop there !!! I hope Bette will say yes but than again I don’t think she’s ready yet and I’m sure there won’t be any love making or am I wrong??? PPS
OMG! Talk aboyut HOTNESS!and then you ended it like that? lol So unfair lol!
I so love this story. Please let Bette say yes. Great Update!!! Thank you PPS
WOW….I was SOOO not expecting that to happen. Good for Helena to ask Bette; but I can’t wait to hear Bette’s response. Love your story!!!
Jeez Helena, verbal diarrhea much? LOL. Say yes, Bette! Can’t wait for the next chapter, I love this story!!
Wonderful!
I have to agree w/Rebelzz: “You’re so romantic!!!!” mmmm….Thanks for the wine. t can’t wait to see what happens next! ;-)
wtz the next step.?…itz too fast isnt it? they juz started dating, then they live 2gether for 1 month??? wat does helena want next?
Catching up with your two last chapters and I can say I really missed reading your story. I love the passion, the playfulness and the tenderness they show to each other. But what a question to ask on a moment like that tss tss.
so been away for a while but just caught up on everything i missed, i’ve said it before and i’ll say it again, i absolutely love the way you write! You have just got a such a fantastic way with words! Thank you so very much for writing! Looking forward to more!