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Ashes, ashes… Chapter 16
“Off the map is more like it. If you need a break, Bette, take a break. But don’t run away. And don’t flush your brilliant and burgeoning career down the toilet.”
“Such that it is,” Bette snorted.
“Nonsense. You could open your own gallery in this city and be turning a profit in less than a year. You’ve already done it. You could do it again.”
Bette shook her head and looked up into Peggy’s eyes. “No. Not now. I don’t I don’t want to be here anymore. I need to be away. From this city. From the memories.”
“Memories aren’t confined by geographic boundaries, Dear,” Peggy said gently.
Bette shrugged and took a swallow of wine, not speaking. Finally, Peggy broke the silence.
“Did I ever tell you about my husband Malcolm?”
“Husband?” Bette asked, raising her eyebrows.
“Oh, I was much more conventional, once upon a time,” Peggy said lightly, running her finger along the rim of her glass.
“I can’t even imagine it,” Bette said, leaning back in the chair.
“Malcolm and I met in
“Very romantic.”
“It was. We were married in less than a year. I got pregnant with
“So I take it you did more than tour the world’s art galleries together,” Betty said wryly.
“We did that, too. It was the happiest time of my entire life. Unfortunately, the bliss was far too fleeting,” Peggy said, her smile fading.
“How so?”
“My darling Malcolm was a daredevil. He was always off sky diving or mountain climbing or some such thing. His passion was speedboats. And one afternoon he got a bit careless behind the wheel of his prize craft. And suddenly he was gone,” Peggy said, finishing the last of her drink.
“Oh God,” Bette said softly.
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(33 votes, average: 4.76 out of 5)
i love peggy, she’s so right…bette, please stay and deal with the pain here and do it for tina and yourself…i think B&T really need each other right now even though they both are denying it…good for peggy
Wow, great curve there. Well done, as always.
Finally, baby steps in the right direction. Get moving Bette!
Excellent. Looking forward to more.
Soo glad that Peggy paid Bette a visit. Peabodys to the rescue! Veronica’s seeing a lot of action!! Is that a conflict of interest to counsel both Bette and Tina? *Scratches head*
hmmm…who bought the house??? Helena…Peggy??? Love where you are headed with this, although I still like H and Tina together…
Good ole Peggy! She’s definitely not one to beat around the bush. It’s about time someone had the guts to tell Bette what she needed to hear. Can’t wait to see how all of this unfolds!
Your story is like a nice soft bed (with flannel sheets) at the end of a long day. Your portrayal of each character is brilliant. I could hear Holland Taylor talking to Bette. Please cancel your holiday plans and write write write.
PEGGY IS THE BEST AND SO IS THIS WONDERFUL STORY GREAT JOB..PLEASE POST SOON.
Damn…..I love Peggy!
Yup, you gave Peggy a detached wisdom. Nice to see a character come through so clearly.
Peggy is right, Bette and Tina need to do this TOGETHER, great chapter as always, please post soon
Thank you. Again.
My hopes for a H/T ending have taken a dive. *g* You are a gem ffc.
Everyone should have a Peggy Peabody in their lives. A straight talking, straight shootin’ type of gal who can cut through all the BS and set a clear pathway. Sometimes one needs someone who can see the trees through the forest. Love your writing.
I shall now do the “I love Peggy” dance. ::dance, dance, dance:: Ah, that was great.
Expand your horizons Bette and THANK YOU Peggy!
Since Helena gave Peggy the nudge – I think we need to be thanking Helena if there is a reconciliation. To make Helena the generous and kind one a stroke of genius. but can Tina forgive Bette I wonder?
PEGGY RULEZ!!
Peggy is my hero
Love Peggy she can make Bette stop and think. If anyone can stop Bette Peggy will be the one. thanks Happy Holiday
Peggy is awesome!
finally a lil bit of bette
Yeah! Progress. It’s Christmas FFC, give us a present and allow Bette and Tina to have a conversation.
We haven’t seen a lot of Bette’s side of the story and I like this little chapter. It was nice. Really, really nice. I’ve always liked Peggy and I think I’m going to like Veronica Blyton as well. Kudos to Peggy for cutting through Bette’s denial and pointing to the way to recovery. I’m just wondering if Veronica Blyton was Helena’s idea or whether it was really from Peggy. Thank you, FFC. Merry X’mas to you and yours.
Go Peggy Peabody! I love this old dame about at much as I love B & T together. She may be a bit excentric, but she’s got a good heart and a wise outlook on life – she has too, she’s made a good life for herself.Please post again soon. Happy Holidays
don’t let bette leave let her do what peggy wants–don’t let helena win tina–girls need each other now more than ever-don;t let them be bullheaded they can only get better with each other
Thank God for Peggy.Great update.
I always have to psych myself up before I read this story. You always do such a great job though of portraying such a heart-wrenching story. Thanks.
Yay! I love the insight into Bette’s situation. Highly fulfilling.