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At first sight
Story written on March 5, 2011 by kins40.
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They finally found the inner sanctum, a beautiful bedroom in the middle of which was a huge king size bed covered in snow White feather down quilt. As they fell on the bed, it felt like they had landed on a cloud.
The rest of that afternoon, the quietness of their surroundings was only disturbed by loving murmurs, delighted moans and breathless cries of ecstasy until it all fell quiet. They had fallen asleep, exhausted. They were facing each, Tina lay in Bette arms, her head resting snuggly against the brunette’s chest. They held each other tightly in a protective embrace.
Outside snow began to fall and covered all traces of their snowball fight.
When Tina awoke the next morning she was alone in bed. The room was bathed in the glare of winter sun reflecting on the deep blanket of snow which had fallen overnight. The room was warm and the bed so comfortable. She wonders where Bette had gone to.
She was about to get up when the brunette entered the room carrying a tray. She was wearing her pyjamas, Hugg boots, a scarf and a woolly hat.
"Good morning!" she started, "What’s with the outfit? Where you called last night?"
"Good morning to you too!" Bette answered with a huge smile, "Quite the contrary….I had my own little hot water bottle" she continued referring to the fact that they had remained entwined all night, "I have brought you your breakfast!"
Bette planted the tray down on the bed next to Tina. The blonde was about to thank Bette for her thoughtfulness but stopped short when she realised what was on offer on the tray. There in front of her, was a square shaped black cereal bowl containing one perfectly formed snowball resting on a bed of whiter than white powdery snow.
"Breakfast is served My Lady….as per the terms of our snowball fight yesterday!" Bette added cheekily, "Which you lost!"
Tina was dumbstruck. Bette really did expect her to eat snow! Her pride got the better of her. She looked up at Bette and looked back down at the bowl. Her hand reached for the cold offering and she lifted the snowball.
She was surprised when only half the snowball came away when she went to lift it. It had been cut in half. Her heart stopped when she saw what lifting only the first half had revealed. There nestled in the snowy cradle of the second half of the snowball, shone the most beautiful diamond solitaire Tina had ever seen.
She looked up at Bette who began to speak.
"Tina …" she started in trembling voice, "I believe that only once in a lifetime we are lucky enough to find our destiny and this special bond I feel with you, has written forever within my heart. Will you marry me?"
Tina recalled how she had practically leapt from her spot in the bed, knocking over the tray and landed on top of Bette with her arms round her neck.
"Yes…yes…yes..a thousand million times yes….Bette Porter…nothing would make me happier than to be yours forever!"
Six months later had brought them to today. They had got married three days ago in a small intimate ceremony and
The music had now stopped playing and Tina remained seated with her eyes closed. So many wonderful memories, new memories, ones which gave her life a purpose. How nice it was to be able to recollect and reminisce. She enjoyed that feeling.
"Hey" a sleepy voice interrupted her thoughts "what’s with the grin?"
"Hey…sleeping beauty!…did I wake you?" Tina crawled up from her seated position to cuddle up with Bette in the oversized chair.
"No….I think the music stopped and that somehow woke me up!…. What were you doing?"
"I was remembering!"
Tina’s statement took Bette by surprise. "You remember… You remember your life"
"No….not all of it…..just the bits that matter….you, me, us…but I believe that I need more memories and I would love nothing more than for you and I to create them together".
Tina leaned to her wife and took her lips in a manner that held no doubt that those new memories were going to be happy ones.
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That was awesome and beautiful, love it. So happy for them and love to see they are together. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us and hope to see you soon with a new one, thanks!
Thank you for this beautifully written epilogue!
Well that was a great story and ever so beatifully written… the music to go with it was actually a wonderful touch to bring to a story that included loss of sight. Well done and I hope to read more of your work in the not too distant future. once again thank you for a very good story.
This was beautiful story, one that I looked forward to the next update once I caught up. I do hope that you will continue to create new stories.
Amazing epilogue to an amazing story – Thank You.
Sigh! That was so beautiful and tender. Please don’t stay away for too long. You are amazingly talented. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Wonderful story. Written with love and beauty. Hopefully you will thrill us with another. Thanks
Epilogue impressive. I loved the war block of snow. I hope to read more of his story soon.
Thank you so very much for this beautiful, amazing story!
The perfect ending. Hope you come back to write another story…surely a classic. Thank you.
kins40 Thank you for the shoutout but even as a ‘seasoned writer’ as you put it I have to bow to your amazing talent. Not only was this storyline new and different and beautifully written but I also loved your portrayal of Bette and Tina. You gave them character and integrity which we rarely see in TiBette stories. The subtle way you wrote the love scenes with the imagery instead of graphic detail was respectful, intimate, private and sensuous as it should be between lovers who cherish and respect themselves and one another. The courtship, the thoughtfulness, the fun, the proposal; just the right mix of everything. I hope you do come back soon with a new story or a sequel, but regardless of what else you write this story is one I will treasure and likely read again. Thank you.
Fantastic story, you had me hooked, beginning to end! Beautifully written! Thanks for sharing!
Wonderful epilogue to a truly beautiful story! Thanks, and hey, please come back soon if you can, I love your writing! Thanks again. K
Soo great! A really wonderful story and thank you soo much for sharing it with us. God Bless and please post a new story soon. We love ya!
*sigh* thank you kins for the wonderful story i was in awe after reading your story..thank you, thank you :)
Thank you for this amazing story.
Thank you so much for your beautiful, intriguing, romantic story. And thank you for not missing out any part of their developing relationship in your epilogue! Their first meeting (when they were both conscious that is!) was SO romantic. I hope to read more of your work in the future.
loved it… and now you have another beautiful begining for another story… we all hope you run with it… thanks for this and looking for more from you…
Everyone has said it all,and beautifully, as befits your wonderful romantic story; this epilogue was perfect.
Bravo!!!Love the epilogue, just perfect. Thanks a bunch for sharing hope to see something new soon :)
That had to be one of the most beautifully complex stories I have read on this site-it had me a little confused at times, but you your writing was amazing, you can never tell that english was not your first language. LOVED, LOVED, LOVED IT.
Wow!! …. Thanks Kins40!! Kudos to you for this marvelous story! Grateful for this sweet tender and romantic epilogue! :-) the way you wrote it just beautiful and heart warming (even though lots of snow there! LOL :-p) You are an amazingly talented writer, I hope you’ll have more inspiration to share in the future as I will looking forward to that! :-) thanks again!
How wonderful was that! Thanks you for an excellent story.
That was so beautiful. Thank you.
How beautiful this story was.. And how wonderful a writer you are!.. You took us in many paths, some are bumpy. And you even gave us some NC17. [Wiggling my eyebrows] But you tied it up with your epilogue that only you can deliver.. I’m in awe of your skill to write, so without being Desparate… PLEASE WRITE MORE STORY. HAPPY, CONTENT
That was beautiful and your descriptions of their lovemaking were breathtaking. Thanks for such a lovely epilogue but now we hope you continue on to a sequel because the story desperately deserves it. Afraid I am a stickler for detail, they make the story complete and fully understandable. I’m totally detail oriented, comes from my own personal likes and also the legal background. Epilogue was fantastic and the choices of music were perfect. Thanks for posting.
Hey Kins, your story has been a pleasure to read, an absolute delight! Please continue maybe a sequel as I feel like only just now have I started to uncover these beautiful characters through your compelling narrative. Thank you for writing this wonderful story!! :D
Amazing.Thank you.
Beautiful ending to a wonderful story. The epilogue could have been twice as long and would still not have too much or enough. The snowball fight was adorable and I loved the way you tied it into Bette’s proposal. Hope to soon read another story of yours….or perhaps a sequal… Thanks so much!
Wow, that was beautiful. I love how you presented all of their experiences through Tina’s memories and that her memories were sparked by the music that was playing and the vision of a sleeping Bette. So sweet. Thanks so much.
Just awesome and tender and beautiful. The interweaving of the musical pieces w/the descriptions of their relationship was simply amazing.
You are a freaking genius! I could read it a thousand times over and I’d still be blown away. The perfectly executed twists of this story are brilliant! I will still be wrapping my brain around it in the years to come. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you!
Great Epilogue thanks for this. Great story particularly the way you wrote the chapters concerning blindness and the heightening of the other senses – Thank You!
This entire story was absolutely amazing! I almost lost my senses with the time of death chapter and then flip flopped between confusion and elation as the revelations of the story evolved. An absolute masterpiece, beautifully written. So incredibly creative.
So glad to have discovered this after so many years after it’s publication.