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Maleah blushed a little. “Her name is April. She’s 11 almost 12. She has long, dark brown hair that kind of looks like yours but a little less curly. She has a lighter skin than me and brown eyes. She’s a little taller than I am. She plays basketball and does Kung-Fu, which is very awesome. She has a great sense of humor; she dares a lot and has the style that kind of looks like Papi’s, Tasha’s best friend. I like her a lot…” Maleah had a goofy grin on her face and Bette asked herself if her daughter was really only 10.
“How did she react when you two kissed?” Bette asked.
“She reacted very chill. She stayed calm. I was more shocked than her. She said that if I wanted to date her or see her again I could just come to her but that she wouldn’t push me.”
“Are you going to go to her?” Bette asked.
“Yeah, I think I am.” Maleah said.
“Okay, then. Are you going to talk to Mommy?” Bette wanted to know.
“Maybe, I am not scared of how she will react or something but I don’t know why I would tell her. I told you now.”
“Yeah, but she will feel left out, baby doll.” Bette said.
Maleah looked down. “Oh, yeah, you are right…”
“I always am, Leah.” Bette said smiling. Maleah rolled her eyes.
“Yeah, off course…” She sarcastically said. “I’m going to go my room again. Can you please keep this a secret until I tell, Mom?”
“Yeah, as long as you promise me you will tell her this week otherwise I’m going to have to tell her.”
“Okay then. Thanks for listening Mamma.” Maleah-Odette said and kissed her mother on the cheek.
“I’ll always listen to you, Maleah.” Bette said to her little girl. Maleah-Odette jumped of the couch and walked inside. Bette exhaled.
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Today, Patricia would go to the movies with Sky. This was their fifth date. Patricia had been going crazy about what to wear. She would always have the same problem when she had a date with her boyfriend. Tina and Bette were used to it now. Nathaniel just thought that his sister was acting crazy. Maleah loved to help her sister pick clothes and the other two children just didn’t care.
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I think tina’s reaction is rather out of character for her. but hey! Thank you
I think it’s because she doesn’t understand how somebody can know when they are so young and that she is shocked because Maleah is such a girly-girl…
WHO IS THE ************ That always gives me a bad rating but never says why? It’s so lame!
The more you react go the ratings the more that person is going to keep it up. Take pride in the words that are written than an a rating which has no name. Your writing is getting better and better Nd I enjoy your stories. It takes Ot of guts to put your stories out there for everyone.e to read. Keep up the good work.