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Awful
Eric: You can’t tell me what to do bitch!
He wanted to punch Bette in the face but Tasha was faster than Eric. She grabbed his wrist and turned it so it was almost breaking. The man was crying out.
Tasha: Are you going to behave or do I have to break your hand?
Eric: Ah… just let me go…
Tasha: Excuse yourself to the lady… Right now.
Eric: Sorry, okay. Now let me go!
Tasha released the man. He rubbed his hand and looked back up to Bette.
Eric: Did you really have to bring all these people. Couldn’t you do it yourself?
Alice was getting angry. Before Bette could respond she stepped forward. She was the only one who knew the full story because Bette had to tell someone.
Alice: Okay, you stupid piece of crap, we can kick your ass with ease so I would consider keeping your mouth shut for one fucking minute. You raped your wife and molested your child and we don’t really like that. So just let Tina see her son or we will call the police. And just to give you some information Tina already filed a complaint so, you have two options. Or you will get arrested today or tomorrow. You can choose…
Eric was stunned.
Eric: What?
Kit: Can you really not figure that out for yourself? You are going to jail for a long time.
Eric was silent for a moment.
Bette: Let Tina see her son. Now.
Eric: I have no choice. I will get him; Tina can take him with her. He doesn’t need to see all the policemen tomorrow.
Eric turned around and walked into his house. All the women looked a little surprised. That had been too easy. Suddenly Eric ran back out with a gun in his hand.
Eric: I’M GOING TO KILL YOU ALL!
Eric walked closer to Bette.
Eric: YOU TOOK AWAY MY WIFE! FUCKING WHORE! I HATE YOU!
He wanted to pull the trigger but he had gotten too close to Tasha, who kicked the gun out of his hand. She took him in a hold. Suddenly 2 police cars drove into the street. They stopped and got out. Eric was still screaming and cursing.
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(20 votes, average: 4.30 out of 5)
Oh mY…!! You seriously left us there?? Man that’s harsh, come on bring on the rest! Good cliffhanger though^^ :D
Oh the suspense!! Okay, I’ll be patient. Thanks for getting Nate out safely. I love the both Dana and Tasha are represented. Good job as always.
I am so glad that Tina got her son, however you’ve left us hanging girl! LOL. :)
Thank your for a quick update!;)) Loved the intensity of this chap, can’t help to wonder….who came??:)) Update!!!
already a cliffy… just as long as it isn’t eric… what a story… please keep them safe…pps
Fucker needs to die. Put him down like a rabid dog.
Not very nice at all. Great story bad cliffie go to your room for a time-out
Oh Lord! My heart is stopped, so you need to hurry and post before I die lol. Wow. What suspense! PPS!