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Awful
Fabian saw what happened and ran up to the man that was now lying on his mother ready to stab the woman again. Fabian kicked with his foot on Eric’s face. He felt something cracking under his footpad but he didn’t care. The police men had knocked on the door but nobody opened so the burst through the door. They saw Fabian banding over his bleeding mother and a man, lying with a knife in his hand and a messed up face.
Policeman: What happened here?
Fabian was crying now. Bette was in so much pain she couldn’t speak to calm down her boy.
Fabian: That man stabbed my mother.
Tina ran out of the bedroom. She saw Bette lying on the floor bleeding.
Tina: Bette?!
Fabian: He stabbed her.
While all this happened two other men had handcuffed Eric and taken him to the car. Another one had called an ambulance. Tina kneeled next to Bette. Bette had her eyes closed.
Tina: Bette, Bette can you hear me?
Fabian: Mom? Mommy?
Bette: Ugh, It… hurts…
Fabian: The ambulance is coming; you will be okay, Mommy. You will be okay.
A policeman had gone to the kitchen to take a towel. He returned and also kneeled next to Bette. He bound the towel around Bette’s arm. Bette had pain written all over her face.
Police: This will help to stop the bleeding a little.
Then luckily the paramedics arrived. Fabian opened the door and 4 men rushed through the door. They got Bette on a stretcher and rolled her out. Suddenly Tina realized that her kids were still on the couch. Crying.
Tina: Fabian, you go with your mother. I will come after you with the kids okay?
Fabian: Okay.
Fabian ran out of the door and Tina walked to the couch.
Patricia: Mommy, I’m scared.
Nathaniel: Me to.
They were both crying.
Tina: Oh, babies.
She hugged both of her children. She lifted them up and rested each of them on one of her hips.
Policeman: Do you want us to drive you to the hospital?
Tina: Yes.
Tina walked with two crying kids to one of the white and blue cars. She got in and the police man drove them to the hospital. The drive wasn’t that long but it was way long for Tina.
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LMAO, luckily, me being ff freak – learned once you’re supposed to be infested with hiv it’s from 2-6months until they can determine did you pick it up..but well, guess you want to finish this story fast??:)) Anyway, A LOT of drama in this chap, a lot! And I like it, keep them coming!;)))
Well, this is fan FICTION so everything can happen. Maybe my story takes place in a time where it can be detected from the first day? x
Hopefully the HIV+ blood is Eric’s….Is that mean to say?
So the question is where did Eric obtain HIV blood? If it is his own that would mean he gave the disease to Tina and her daughter. Man that hurts to say. Also it might mean there son is HIV positive as well. Eric needs to fry.
wtf, how could this happen, oh poor Bette. I hope they support each other. bring on the next part.
Gosh, eric is such an ass and now that he has committed attempted murder pre-meditated, he will be going to prison for a very long time. This was intentional, he had planned her murder by the stabbing and with the virus, so that is a double whammy in the eyes of the law and he should not ever be eligible for parole and should get a life sentence in the penitentiary. They should also check Tina he may have aids himself from playing around on Tina and may have given it to her, and of course, she didn’t know about it, that would be a bitch. Very interesting chapter. Thanks for posting.
That was cold, back to your room now you sit in the corner
Wow what an unsuspected turn. This truly is Awful. Poor Bette, I hope things turn around, maybe a nurse mixed up the blood tests? Ugh, sad day. PPS!
Romance, Angst, Violence, now Drama!!! This story has it. Thanks for the fabulous story and quick post.
Wow, didn’t see that coming. Great update.
Oh God, that’s horrible…Now go ahead and crash a plane on their house why don’t you?^^ I’m kidding, but they really didn’t need that :( Well at least it gives Tina a chance to support Bette too