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Awful
“Tee, you are breathtaking…” Bette said and she kissed Tina firmly on the lips. When she wanted to pull back, the blonde held her in place. She deepened the kiss and their tongues battled. Bette slipped her hands down until she reached the bare flesh of Tina’s thigh. Tina moaned into the kiss. Tina slipped her hand down also until her hand was on Bette’s bare back, under her dress. The brunette pulled the blonde closer with the hand that was on Tina’s thigh. They so into kissing one another that they didn’t notice Fabian walking in. He didn’t even know the two were still in here.
“Jeez, I’m sorry.” He said. Tina and Bette jumped apart and could help turning red.
“Why are you here?” Bette asked.
“Patricia, Nathaniel and I were playing hide and seek and I maybe thought they had hidden here. I didn’t know I would walk in on you two.” He was talking rapidity.
“It’s okay.” Tina said and Bette nodded.
“Hum, well, I guess I should continue looking for them.” He wanted to walk out but Bette said “Son, you have to change what you are wearing.”
“But Mom…” He whined.
“No, do it.”
“But I like this!”
“Fabian Primeiro Perez-Porter, if you don’t change right away, you won’t be at your own party. You get it?” Bette sternly said.
“Yeah, yeah…” Fabian said and walked out of the room.
“Wow, you can be strict.” Tina said.
“Pff, I don’t like it but he has the character of his mother… you have to be strict to get somewhere…” She said.
“Well, I have to get my kids in other clothes to.”
“Okay.” Bette replayed.
Tina walked out of the room.
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The party was going on for about 2 hours now. Patricia and Nathaniel where playing with a football. The Gang was sitting next to the pool while Fabian and Delilah where sitting under the tree that was a few meters away from the table. Where the adults where sitting Delilah was a tall, black haired girl with green eyes and an ivory skin. Fabian had his arm around her shoulder and Delilah’s head was resting on his.
“Look at Fabian and his lady.” Alice said pointing at Fabian and Delilah.
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(22 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
Well, It seems as though you NAILED IT!! Great job.
Hey JB, je viens de réaliser un truc: si t’es belge ça veut dire que tu parles français pas vrai?? Si c’est le cas (et je l’espère), j’ai adoré ce chapitre et je trouve que ton écriture est de mieux en mieux! Continue :D
In one of your comments you mentioned that were only 13 and that concerns me a bit since the rating for this story is NC17. I have not read the last 2 chapters because of your age in my opinion you are just too young for NC17 content. Am I alone in this thought? I don’t want to discourage you writing but it should be more in line with your age.
Shit, I have to remind myself not to read the sexytime fics at work. Wow. Very nice.
Thank youn for the update.Good job.PPS
JBtlw90, I can speak French and Iunderstand what you are saying. I’m from the Dutch part of my country so I’m not that fluent. I can speak English better than French but I think it’s ver sweet of you that you commented in French. :D THANK YOU!
ballent, I know I’m only 13 but I read NC-17 and I just know what happens when people have sex. I keep writing it even if I’m maybe too young in your opinion. I also see that there are people who enjoy me writing NC-17, so, I’m not going to stop. I hope you read the last 2 chapters. Thanks for your comment, JB_Loverke.
I like this story and you are doing very well, Post when you can.