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Tina contemplated Bette’s words and nodded, “Sure, Babe. I’ll give you time. Unlike you, I will be waiting while you make up your mind.”
Bette reacted instantly, her anger surged to the surface. “I’ve seen you make up your mind before. It lasted what six months?! If that!”
“God, you’re beautiful when you’re angry.” Tina responded without thinking. She took a step closer and took Bette’s hand in hers. The touch was electric. Bette snatched her hand away as if it were on fire. “Sorry, another throwback. I just have to say this and then we can talk about Angelica. I’m not hiding what I feel anymore. I know that you are who I want. I have been so afraid to love you since Candace. I surrender. I want you in my life. I want you in my bed. I will wait as long as it takes. I have committed myself to being honest with you no matter what. I’m not willing to lose you. I have no more pride to save, only my heart. No matter what you decide you will always be Angelica’s other mother, that chip is off the table. I won’t use Angelica against you ever again.”
Bette met Tina’s eyes. The honesty and openness she saw there took her back to another time. This was the Tina she had originally fallen so deeply and hopelessly in love with. She saw something else that had been absent for a long time, desire. Desire banked and waiting. Tina had that ability to pour out her heart and hold out her desire at the same time. Bette knew that if she reached out Tina would consume her once again. It was a secret that they closely guarded and had never spoken of even between them over the years. Publicly Bette seemed to be the one in charge of their relationship. In reality, Tina was the flame that Bette could not resist.
Bette hesitated remembering it all. She could not walk down that road again. Except for Angie, Kit and their close knit group of friends, Bette didn’t let people into her heart. Bette was a player before she met Tina. Bette was always honest with her sex partners and ended it before any emotional entanglements developed. Alice had come close and the depth of the connection led to their being friends even to this day. Bette enjoyed women and the sex but was always in control, until Tina. She realized that she liked being in control of herself once again. She had surrendered with Candace but only with her body. She was not sure she could allow herself to be that open again. Tina she recognized was her kryptonite.
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Oh Wow, this is great. I am such a Tibetter and this story brings such hope to them as a couple. Please Continue.
Ditto.
I thought you did an excellent job especially considering this is your first effort in writing fanfic. You have a clear style of writing and make the characters empathetic.
This is very well done. Though I’m not crazy for Bette and Tina plot lines in general, I have to say this one here was a good read. Mostly because it wasn’t overly mushy but on that token I’ll also say that I got a feeling that Tina was using Angelica to …manipulate Bette. The hidden smile was also a flag to that effect. Well, I’d love to see where you take this. Keep writing!
WOW!!! GREAT START!!!! Please keep it going. I just hope Tina is not using the baby to get Bette back. Thank you PPS
Oh..I like this. It’s how it should be. Please continue.
This is great…really liked it…so hope you continue with more…thanks!
Guess we all will jump on this Bette and Tina train. Post soon thanks
I love your version. Send it to SHOWTIME!
Wow…it’s like you stepped into my brain and had Tina say all the things I am dying to hear in season 4. They need to have a conversation like this. Tina needs to own what she did. Of course this dosen’t mean they are back together…they have to work their way back…but this would be a hell of a start. Oh how I wish you were a writer for Showtime. Please keep posting….don’t leave us hanging
Great writing kelika! This is a really great story. I’m glad Tina is going to do what is best for Angelica, and for Bette. Tina pretty much laid it all out there in her letter, but I was so happy when she told Bette face to face “I want you to have the peace and security of knowing I will never challenge your rights with Angelica again…I think it’s important that we put something in writing now that will stand even if the adoption doesn’t go through.” Tina also needs to tell Bette that she is one of her other top priorities; but somehow I think Bette knows…maybe because of the way that Tina continuously calls her “babe.” I think it will take some time before Bette allows Tina back into her heart completely, but Bette knows she wants her there. They both have a huge amount of forgiving to do, but if they are open and honest with each other they can ‘fix this.’ It’s so sweet how Angelica loves them both so much – how she stretched her neck in search of her mama B when Tina went to get her from her crib; but it’s also sad as I can feel Angelica’s insecurity and how badly she has been damaged by her mom’s ignorance. Excellent chapter. More please!
Great start. Why can’t this happen on the show. Tina wakes up and realizes she’s been a complete ass, as has Bette and they agree to move forward. I don’t think Tina’s using Angelica, I do believe Angelica helps her to realize that it will always be her and Bette.
ROFLOL “She suggested I use my position as Dean to ‘Score chicks'”. This is great and quite believable. I am luvin’ it!
Wow this is great, like it!
This is very well done..I am not a Tibetter either but this is a good story. I think Tina is using the baby to manipulate Bette as well, and I hope Bette gets wise to that really fast. Rock on!
Very interesting beginning which gives B&T fans like me hope for the future – so keep’em coming :o))
great start! I love Bette and Tina stories. Tina’s letter was on point. good job.
i’m also on board… if only we get to see something as close to this on the show… great start… please continue
way to go Angelica…has T been schooling her up? really enjoyable read especially the first scene with Angel and her moms…hope Bette doesn’t resist Tina…PPS
interesting turn of events, keep posting because this tibetter is reading
Please continue. This is a great start and I think it will only get better. Thanks for posting for us.
I’m on board! Please continue.
ABOUT TIME U STOPPED BEING A DUMB ASS
T’is good. Don’t stop. Please continue.
Wonderful start!!!
Thanks for sharing this unusual twist. One question, in your story, did Tina have sex with Henry in their home?
This seems like a great, truthful way to bring Bette and Tina back together. I hope you continue.
I love TIBETTE and this is a great way to start out S4 ( don’t think it will happen in IC’s world) But that’s why we have fan fic! LOL! please continue….
I TOTALLY CONCUR ANDROID OF COURSE YOU WERE CORRECT.
I loved it! I hope you continue.
OMG!! I just found this story and it is truly amazing, so far. This SHOULD HAVE BEEN SEASON FOUR. Tina letter to Bette, was dead on how I felt about things. I always felt the fans gave Tina a raw deal and NEVER HELD Bette, ACCOUNTABLE for her actions, that started everything, ESPECIALLY, the part where even after Tin found out about Candace, and Bette actually had sex with Tina, Bette WENT BACK TO CANDANCE, FOR A FEW MONTHS. Tina had a right to be ANGRY. I would have killed Bette.