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Babe
Unfortunately my doubts about your love for me grew after Angelica’s birth. I felt like I trapped you into being with me when you no longer wanted me. I felt unattractive with my sagging stomach and scar. You protested but I didn’t believe you. I was no longer confident of my ability to interest you. You are the sexiest woman I know. I saw the line of women wanting to jump into your bed when we split up. I did not see myself as any competition to all of them. The thought of you looking down on my naked ugly body and seeing all those attractive women lined up to please you was too much for me. It still is. How could I compete with Senator Grishom? Of course I cared. You never should have told me that she wanted to fuck you. Now the thought of her wanting you is in my mind.
Men are easy. They see a pretty face and the sex is straight forward, no pun intended. Josh and Henry made me feel attractive and desirable again. I left you this time before you could leave me.
Babe, the hardest thing I’ve ever had to do is give you up. You were everything to me. Now we have a new person in our lives. We have to stop using Angelica as a pawn between us. I know I started us down this road when I didn’t tell you I was pregnant and later when I hesitated to recognize you as her mother.
You hurt me so badly when you filed for sole custody. I reacted by threatening to withdraw the petition for a second parent adoption. I pushed you too far. You pushed me further by taking off with Angelica and making me fear that I would never see the two of you again.
Enough, Babe. I promise that I will never again separate you from our daughter. All I ask is that you do the same. I’m hoping that we can have a new relationship as parents. I don’t want your daughter to ever be without you. I am going to have my attorney draw up papers naming you as Angelica’s equal guardian no matter what happens with the petition you can be assured of your place in our daughter’s life.
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(51 votes, average: 4.69 out of 5)
Oh Wow, this is great. I am such a Tibetter and this story brings such hope to them as a couple. Please Continue.
Ditto.
I thought you did an excellent job especially considering this is your first effort in writing fanfic. You have a clear style of writing and make the characters empathetic.
This is very well done. Though I’m not crazy for Bette and Tina plot lines in general, I have to say this one here was a good read. Mostly because it wasn’t overly mushy but on that token I’ll also say that I got a feeling that Tina was using Angelica to …manipulate Bette. The hidden smile was also a flag to that effect. Well, I’d love to see where you take this. Keep writing!
WOW!!! GREAT START!!!! Please keep it going. I just hope Tina is not using the baby to get Bette back. Thank you PPS
Oh..I like this. It’s how it should be. Please continue.
This is great…really liked it…so hope you continue with more…thanks!
Guess we all will jump on this Bette and Tina train. Post soon thanks
I love your version. Send it to SHOWTIME!
Wow…it’s like you stepped into my brain and had Tina say all the things I am dying to hear in season 4. They need to have a conversation like this. Tina needs to own what she did. Of course this dosen’t mean they are back together…they have to work their way back…but this would be a hell of a start. Oh how I wish you were a writer for Showtime. Please keep posting….don’t leave us hanging
Great writing kelika! This is a really great story. I’m glad Tina is going to do what is best for Angelica, and for Bette. Tina pretty much laid it all out there in her letter, but I was so happy when she told Bette face to face “I want you to have the peace and security of knowing I will never challenge your rights with Angelica again…I think it’s important that we put something in writing now that will stand even if the adoption doesn’t go through.” Tina also needs to tell Bette that she is one of her other top priorities; but somehow I think Bette knows…maybe because of the way that Tina continuously calls her “babe.” I think it will take some time before Bette allows Tina back into her heart completely, but Bette knows she wants her there. They both have a huge amount of forgiving to do, but if they are open and honest with each other they can ‘fix this.’ It’s so sweet how Angelica loves them both so much – how she stretched her neck in search of her mama B when Tina went to get her from her crib; but it’s also sad as I can feel Angelica’s insecurity and how badly she has been damaged by her mom’s ignorance. Excellent chapter. More please!
Great start. Why can’t this happen on the show. Tina wakes up and realizes she’s been a complete ass, as has Bette and they agree to move forward. I don’t think Tina’s using Angelica, I do believe Angelica helps her to realize that it will always be her and Bette.
ROFLOL “She suggested I use my position as Dean to ‘Score chicks'”. This is great and quite believable. I am luvin’ it!
Wow this is great, like it!
This is very well done..I am not a Tibetter either but this is a good story. I think Tina is using the baby to manipulate Bette as well, and I hope Bette gets wise to that really fast. Rock on!
Very interesting beginning which gives B&T fans like me hope for the future – so keep’em coming :o))
great start! I love Bette and Tina stories. Tina’s letter was on point. good job.
i’m also on board… if only we get to see something as close to this on the show… great start… please continue
way to go Angelica…has T been schooling her up? really enjoyable read especially the first scene with Angel and her moms…hope Bette doesn’t resist Tina…PPS
interesting turn of events, keep posting because this tibetter is reading
Please continue. This is a great start and I think it will only get better. Thanks for posting for us.
I’m on board! Please continue.
ABOUT TIME U STOPPED BEING A DUMB ASS
T’is good. Don’t stop. Please continue.
Wonderful start!!!
Thanks for sharing this unusual twist. One question, in your story, did Tina have sex with Henry in their home?
This seems like a great, truthful way to bring Bette and Tina back together. I hope you continue.
I love TIBETTE and this is a great way to start out S4 ( don’t think it will happen in IC’s world) But that’s why we have fan fic! LOL! please continue….
I TOTALLY CONCUR ANDROID OF COURSE YOU WERE CORRECT.
I loved it! I hope you continue.
OMG!! I just found this story and it is truly amazing, so far. This SHOULD HAVE BEEN SEASON FOUR. Tina letter to Bette, was dead on how I felt about things. I always felt the fans gave Tina a raw deal and NEVER HELD Bette, ACCOUNTABLE for her actions, that started everything, ESPECIALLY, the part where even after Tin found out about Candace, and Bette actually had sex with Tina, Bette WENT BACK TO CANDANCE, FOR A FEW MONTHS. Tina had a right to be ANGRY. I would have killed Bette.