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Battle Of The Brunettes
“Well, Bette has just said that you have been touching her muffin, care to tell me something?” Alice arched a brow, trying to appear straight-faced.
Dana being Dana didn’t get the joke, “What? It was only for a second Al and if you hadn’t noticed, Bette didn’t seem to like it. So I won’t be touching her muffin again.”
Bette bit down on her finger, stifling the laugh that she knew was going to spill from her lips any moment now.
“Did you want to eat her muffin Dana?” Alice questioned, softly nudging Dana in the side, pushing her for an answer.
Dana looked between Alice and Bette, completely confused, “I was tempted to have a taste, but I didn’t, isn’t that what counts?”
“Alice stop being mean,” Bette scolded playfully, “Dana, she is just kidding. A muffin is another name for a woman’s genitalia.”
Alice snickered under her breath but Dana was far from amused. She swatted Alice on the arm before standing up and drawing a chair to the table, not wanting to sit on Alice’s knees any longer. Alice and Bette exchanged looks, still attempting to contain their laughter.
As they calmed down to drink their coffee and to give her time to eat her blueberry muffin, she started to look around at the people in the café. It wasn’t as busy as normal but there were still quite a few people there today. She was happy for her sister. At first she thought Kit made the wrong choice by buying The Planet, but obviously she hadn’t.
Bette looked towards the windows, watching a brunette and blond holding hands pass the windows. She sighed miserably, why couldn’t she meet somebody and have a relationship? As much as she hated to admit it, she was getting lonely.
Upon further inspection, she noticed that the brunette was actually Helena Peabody, somebody she’d recently sent her grant proposal too. Bette put down the remainder of her food and clasped her hands together. She paid no attention to her friends bickering beside her, but instead, she focused on the couple now entering the Planet.
Maybe if she could have a word with Helena about the grant proposal, it would help? Since the CAC is depending on her and she could feel herself crumbling under the pressure – something that had never happened before.
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(45 votes, average: 3.56 out of 5)
Interesting beginning.. Even if you did change T’s eye colour ;-P It’s ok.. What’s fan fic for if you can’t fiddle with a few details, eh? I like your writing style, and I’ll be watching for an update. Thanks for sharing :) x
Chyeah, by habit. Anyway. I edited that. :)
Hey Rickman…I like your story. I actually prefer Tina with Helena. Let Helena and Bette fight it out for Tina. I look forward to the next chapter.
good start. let the battle begin!
i love it. it’s great! tina and helena are my favorite uncharted territory–not nearly enough folks go there, and i love it when someone does it as well as you have. which is rare. so keep it up, and i’ll try to keep up with the reading part! :) pps
I like the start and the possibilities. I’d be annoyed at Bette’s interuption if I were Helena. Here she is trying to have a meal and she is disrupted to ask about some grant. Well let teh competion begin.
I will always be a TiBetter at heart, but if it is a well written, entertaining story then I’m open! Welcome to the site, and thanks!
Hi Rickman and welcome. I liked your story its going to be better if you turn it into a Tibette story! LOL Nah, Im kidding, go on with your idea. Thanks for posting.
Rickman, good start!!!!! I can to wait to seee where you take this story. Thanks PPS
I’m liking it! I usually prefer Tina with Bette, but am always open to her with Helena as well. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Excellent beginning although it’s not typical but it’s good, at first i wasn’t sure about this Helena Tina thing to begine with but now after i finished reading it sound promising thank you looking forward for the next chapter.
interesting beginning :-) I just feel something wrong about Helena’s behaviour, but can’t put my finger on it, really… just hope I’m wrong ;-)
I’m sure I had read this some wherez, did you get half way with it?, coz as Im readin this, suddenly its triggerin back memories, altho they could be for another story, as I do cram about twelve to fifthteen diff tibette stories in a day lol!
I hope you will not break up Tina and Helena. I like to read more about them togather. Thanks.
IN..TER..RESTING!! CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW BETTE CHARM TINA RIGHT FROM HELENA