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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 8
ALICE’S APARTMENT
Shane walked into Alice’s apartment carrying the last of Alice’s stuff, after placing the box on the floor she had to laugh at the sight of Alice trying to fit her peach colored fitted sheet onto her mattress. Alice would hook one end in then climb over the bed to hook the other end in, only to have the first end slide up and become unhooked. After watching this happen three times and wondering how many times this scene had taken place before she walked in, Shane decided to help Alice out of her misery. “Al, why didn’t you buy sheets with deep pockets?”
Alice just look at Shane a little surprised she would even know the difference and thought if she starts talking thread count then she knew Carmen had truly domesticated her friend. “Because they didn’t have this color with deep pockets when I bought this set. Besides fitted sheets were made this way, so it would take two people to put them on, you know make the bed, use the bed.” She wiggled her eyebrows up and down at Shane loving to flirt with her, and knowing it was all just fun.
After finishing with the fitted sheet, Shane continued to help Alice make her bed. “Al, are you sure you ready to move back home? I know you’re healing great, faster then I would have thought possible. But it really hasn’t been that long, and you and Dana seem to be able to make the other feel safe, so why not stay with her for another week or two?”
Alice stopped and looked at. “Shane, I had to move out because it is Dana, and I don’t want us to get so depended on each other that we end up in a sick co-depended type relationship.” Shane walked over and sat on the bed beside Alice. “Al, you and Dana have always been very depended on each other, what makes you think it will start to become unhealthy?” Alice replied, “Because I know myself.”
ALICE’S APARTMENT LATER THAT EVENING
The group had decided to meet at Alice’s that night, knowing she still didn’t feel comfortable going out to public places. Shane and Carmen were sitting together in the overstuff chair. While Bette, Tina and Dana sat on the couch, Jenny had chosen a spot on the floor near Shane and Carmen. Alice sat on the floor in front of Dana’s feet, with her back up against the couch and her laptop on her lap.
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(13 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Loving your work as usual, you capture feelings and emotions so perfectly, cant wait for the next post! xx
I, personally, don’t mind that it took you so long to post this chapter…It was put together SO well. I hope the next chapter will be enough to close the story out with…Take your time writing it. I’m sure your delivery will be something unique and special. Good on you for posting such a dark subject matter…cause really, life isn’t ALL fluff, there’s sadness and despair too…You have done a wonderful job..Thanks
Hi Deb,I’m enjoying the pace of the story, unrushed and you let the story unfold with delicate care. Love the gentleness of the story despite the subject matter. Good Job!
I’m luving this story. Sorry to see it so near the end. :( Great storyline and one that hits home to most people in one way or another.
SO happy to see your post!! i love your style Debs! this chapter is so hopeful while remaining true to the process that has to happen. beautifully told- i loved the therapy scenes, both together and privately- that touch at the door!? so sweet and telling.
but only one more chapter?? i may have my own dependency issues- as much as i’ve enjoyed watching their healing process…. i have looked forward to watching the relationship unfurl in the same way!! are you thinking sequel? hint-hint
I love it and i hope that they both get over there fears and I hope that dana will one day be albe to tell alice how she really feels please post soon