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Because You Love Me – Chapter 3
Tina’s house
Tina pulled her SUV into the driveway surprised to Eric’s car there also. She walked up to the front door to find it unlocked.
“Eric?” Tina yelled.
“Hey babe!” said Eric coming out of Tina’s bedroom.
“HuhEric,” said Tina a little annoyed by Eric’s presence. “I gave you that key in case of emergencies, not to just come as you please.”
“Oh, sorry,” Eric said a little disappointed. “I just hadn’t seen you in a while, so I thought maybeI don’t knowyou’re right, I should not of just let myself in like that-”
“No, Eric it’s okay, really,” Tina started feeling a little guilty. “Can I maybe meet you for dinner tonight? I already made plans with Bette for lunch.”
“Yeah sure, sounds good, can I pick you up at seven?”
“Okay, see you then.”
Eric grabbed his jacket and headed toward the door. Just before he reached for the *****, be turned around to look at Tina.
“I love you,” he said.
Tina couldn’t find it in herself to say it back. She hadn’t been able to since the month ago when he first said the three little words. She gave him a soft smile and said, “Bye Eric.” With that said, he left.
Tina glanced at the time realizing it was almost two o’clock. ‘*****, it’s 1:35 already.’ She went down the hall to her bedroom to get changed. She quickly threw on a pair of Seven jeans, and a black tree quarter sleeved shirt. After a quick check in the mirror, she grabbed her favorite North Face zip up and was out the door.
Back at Bette’s
The food had just arrived and she was setting it out on the table when she heard the knock on the door.
“Just a second”
Bette did a final once over making sure everything was perfect. She walked to the door and opened it to a smiling face.
“Hey T!” said Bette bring Tina into a hug. She wanted so bad to feel Tina’s lips on hers, but she knew it was not the time.
“Hey Bette,” said Tina pulling away. “Sorry I’m late-”
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(34 votes, average: 3.82 out of 5)
oh, so beautiful … you truly have a way with your words . so looking forward to you next post!
Beautiful! Post soon
This is such a great story. Hmmmm when friends become lovers. Their so sweet. Looking forward to the next update.
Great story can’t wait for more!!!
I love this story! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Great chapter, please post again soon
Awww, sweet! That was nice. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
that was powerful!!! thank you for the feelings and I can’t wait for more.
wonderful your words painted a beautiful picture
This is so freaking good…I’m lovin all of the emotion in this story
AWESOME awesome just great really love it id say more but im in a hurry shouldnt be reading this during the day keep it comeing thanks
Awww this is so sweet. It just shows that love may be right under your nose but isn’t always so obvious. It actually gives me some hope. Please post again soon!
Great story. . .please post again soon!
I so caught up today. This is such a wonderful story. Your Bette is so calm and understanding. To be off the side like that and waiting is so hard and she has such a sense of balance Thanks.
This is realy, REALY good, please continue as quick as possible
EXCELLENT!! Please more… Post soon TRrime to tell Eric to hit the curb….
WOW!!! what a bantastic start to a story. looking forward to more!
Amazing and wonderful – this is so great and I really like the way Bette used the painting to open up their communication….she is a clever girl :o)) By the way – don’t be nervous about your writing Damien, it’s such a kick to read and always put a BIG smile on my face. I’m sooo looking forward to you’re posting again.
Ha! the comment above should have said FANTASTIC! not bantastic! …sorry!
Ok that’s odd? I just posted a comment but after refreshing, I didn’t see it. Hmmm?Anyways, I’ve been a long time reader and commenter of the pages but time has been scarce and I’ve had to ration it as need be. Well I love you story. I enjoy the angle, i.e. Bette and Tina being long time friends and soon to be lovers(?) That’s a risky jump to make. It raises the argument, is being ‘in-love’ worth more than just being ‘loved’? I’d like to think so but then that’s just me. Also, the way you helped Tina to express her feelings using the painting as a segue was masterful and bodes well for your story. I’m really looking forward to how you handle the changing dynamic of their relationship.
Wow. That was excellent. Looking forward to more.
aww sweetttttttttt
hey Damien, this story is great and I hope you post soon. you Bette is amazing, so sweet. I like how your Tina seems to know what she wants, eventhough she may be fearful of what is to come. she doesn’t seem to be as flaky as she is sometimes portrayed.
this is very touching and wonderful and romantic…now it’s bette’s turn…this love between them is amazing….thanks
AWESOME and beautiful. This is so great. Love that strong cannot be rushed…it needs time to breath — like a fine wine. Please continue…
Amazing and wonderful… please post again sooooon!!!thank you!!!
Damn awesome and wonderful, love it. Let them talk and tell each other how they really feel. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
D how could u end it like thagt damn!! haha luved it continue soon
sweet!!!!!!!!!!! make the post longer
that was so good…I love this story!!!