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    Before the Fall – Six

    Story written on December 15, 2006 by Speed_Racer.
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    If you loved someone how far would you go, to get them to love you back? What if they never loved you?

    Before the Fall

    by: Speed_Racer

     

     

    Alice was telling one of her funny stories about L.A. magazine and keeping an eye on Bette as she did so. The fact that she Alice Pieszecki was talking to Bette was not a new thing. No it wasn’t. But the fact that she was talking to Bette alone, well that was a new thing. A damn good thing in her opinion. Because having Helena as her guard dog had been somewhat insulting. Not that Helena wasn’t hot and nice to look at but still.

    Alice wasn’t about to jump Bette’s bones. Those days were long gone. The lust had faded. Truly. Absolutely. Okay, really who could deny that Bette wasn’t a gorgeous woman? She was and hell Alice was only a red-blooded woman who had eyes in her head. Bette was damn fine and Alice could and would not deny that.

    So she was in the middle of a great story and Bette even looked amused. She was too busted up to laugh properly, but Alice knew she was kicking ass. And Bette was warming up to her, which had been the whole point.

    “You’re pretty funny,” Bette said as Alice concluded her story. Bette studied Alice for a moment and then continued. “Your hair’s cute too even though at first I thought it was pretty ugly. And you should wear your glasses more often.”

    Alice couldn’t keep the surprise off her face.

    “Thanks ”

    Bette nodded slightly before she turned her attention to the television.

    “So you wanna ask me anything?” Alice asked after a moment plopping down onto the couch in Bette’s new and improved private room.

    “I’m a little tired,” Bette admitted. “ I don’t really have any questions right now. You can tell me something if it’ll make you feel better.”

    Alice watched Bette as she flicked rapidly through the channels. Another new thing she had noticed. Bette liked to watch television now. Before she really hadn’t had the patience to watch anything, hating the commercials and the fact that shows were really only forty minutes or less. False advertisement she’d been known to say.

    Now it seemed Bette couldn’t keep the television off even when she had guests with her. She would put it on mute and then when the conversation was done or when she just felt like it she would turn the volume back on seemingly fascinated.

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    1. Wow…Tina has a point. When Bette finds out what is going on that’s it…I love this story. Thank you for the 7 pages…I still want more. Keep posting.

    2. this is so intriguing…i wonder who will win, tina or helena or neither…it seems a coma can change a person’s enitre personality…maybe bette will chuck them all in…please post as soon as possible

    3. You know i love this story… and I can’t help but feel a little sorry for Tina. BUt everyone is talking like what if BEtte doesn’t get her memories…blah blah…BUT what if Bette does get her memories back…she will not be a happy camper knowing that she was quite literally taken advantage of…time will tell…

    4. Woah, emotional overload! lol. I think the Bette Porter we all know and love will come back in full force if she finds out that they’ve been lying to her. No wonder they’re keeping schtum! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

    5. Speedy, you’ve been one busy racer! ;) – 7 damn pages…oh mah goodnezz! I couldn’t read it all at one time. But, now that I’m done, I think that since Bette has just been awakened by Amanda, Tina’s on her way out the hospital, and Bette is not leaving until tomorrow afternoon means that Helena needs to march her pretty azz right back into that room, sit down, and tell Bette the truth. Memories or no memories, Bette is not detached from reality – she can tell that everyone is keeping something from her. Helena, along with the truth needs to tell Bette the reason behind the lie. I’d much rather see Bette pissed off now than pissed off later.

    6. I watched a TV drama before, where the husband had an affair with the mistress for YEARS. But then when he met a car accident, he completely couldn’t remember the mistress at all. Even when he saw the photos. Kind of sad really… although that can happen. In this case, I think that’s how Tina feels… I feel sorry for Tina, being the girlfriend and all that, but forgotten. I sense a war here.. It’s exciting, but I do root for Helena and Bette to be together… :D

    8. I’m with Pandamel I love this story.. God what a mess our girls are in. Perhaps Helena can tell Bette that they broke up and she was with Tina lately. So sad the Tina has known for years that Bette had feelings for Helena, everyone knew. Perhaps now is finally the time when no one is lying to Bette. Helena has always been Bette’s love. Its a part of her “embedded code”. Everyone is just finally admitting it. What a great story. Thanks for the early Christmas gift

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