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    Before the Fall – Two

    Story written on November 2, 2006 by Speed_Racer.
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    If you loved someone how far would you go, to get them to love you back? What if they never loved you?

    She dialed a number she knew from heart on her cell phone.

    “This better be fucking urgent!”

    Bette winced as she heard Alice’s crude answer. She knew she was waking Alice since it was almost two in the afternoon in L.A. Alice was writing a series of articles about the habits of “night people”, who slept during they day and worked at night. She’d taken it to heart and now slept during the day and worked at night.

    “It is I swear! Alice I’ve behaved abhorrently! I’ve really, really fucked up here! I don’t even know what I was thinking. I guess I wasn’t. I mean when she told me I was in shock. Completely shocked. And I laughed. It was shocked laughter. I mean I would never laugh at her like that. She knows that I wouldn’t laugh at her, right? Not like that. I wouldn’t laugh at anyone like that– it was just… you know nervous laughter and–”

    “Bette? What the hell are you babbling about?” Alice interrupted.

    “Helena told me she loved me. I laughed. Then I ran away.”

    “Let me put some coffee on,” Alice mumbled.

    “I completely humiliated her, Alice.”

    “Where did you run off to? I mean why did you even run? I get laughing…maybe I guess, but to run? Bette that doesn’t sound like you at all.”

    Bette nodded and groaned.

    “I know. I ran to her mother and got a ride back to London.”

    “Mrs. Peggy P. was there? She saw you run away like that? I bet that was an interesting ride. What did Helena say exactly?”

    “She said—well we were fighting. She was upset because I didn’t tell her I was coming to town. And so she was angry and just sort of blurted it out. She said ‘This is me in love with you, Bette.’ And then she waited for me to say something. Which of course I did while I laughed. After which I ran away.”

    “You know the usual thing to do when someone tells you that they love you and you don’t feel the same, is to say thank you. But then I forgot…you don’t do that. You like to pretend you haven’t heard them and act like it never happened. You took this to a whole new level. Laughing and running away. You sure as fuck know how to treat a girl right, Bette.”

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    2. This has got to be my new favorite Peggy Peabody line!!…….”Don’t make me pull you out of bed, Helena. You know how I detest physical labor. Sit up. Now.”…….Fabulous! Thanks!

    3. my my Ms Porter all of 26 thinks she’s a grown up??? maybe at 52 she will be!!! and is Helena 19 or 20 and what is the legal age in the USA for sex??? is it 16 or 18?…..besides my queries…this is shaping up to be a good story…

    4. Amazing… I GET this story on so many levels… now let’s see if I can learn something from Helena :) Do post soon, really loving this and your writing. Thank you

    8. Rau age of consent in the UK is 16 yrs old. And I meant to post that Helena is 19 yrs old, but she’s known Bette since she was 17 she was legal then too. Thanks for the reviews.

    10. Oh man! Come on, Bette! Hell, you’re breaking MY heart. I can SO feel what Helena is going through right now. This story just started, but I already know that it is going to be really good. These first couple of chapters just grab your attention and doesn’t let go until you run out of words to read… because the chapter has ended. LOL! I was so disappointed to see the end of this chapter. Take that a compliment, because it is one. Please, post again when you can. I am very anxious to travel on this journey with Bette and Helena. And, I LOVE Peggy. My goodness, that woman has to be the coolest person to have as a friend. I could definitely hang around with Peggy… if only to hear her talk. She is very direct and I love that!

    11. Amazing how some people can blind themselves to their own feelings… and how far they can get to prevent themselves from seeing the truth… Bette sure has feelings… and sure does not WANT to have… a long long way to go…Keep it up…

    14. *rolling my eyes at Bette* Git a grip woman!! So afraid…to love and be loved! I am thoroughly enjoying this and am anxiously awaiting the next installment of both stories.

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