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Betrayl in the First Degree – Chapter 9
Summary of the previous chapter: Bette insists that everyone stay for drinks. Once again music elicits emotions.
They all sit as the song plays. It ends and Alice reaches up to turn off the stereo. No one speaks as they process their emotions.
A knock at the door interrupts. Once again Bette goes to see who has come calling.
She opens the door to a petite figure clad in garments that have obviously been worn longer than most garments are worn before they are laundered. The womans feet have no shoes, but are covered by dirty, torn stockings.
Hi Jenny. Bette smiles. What can we do for you.
Your noise. It interrupted the Raven. It woke her sleep.
Given all that is happening, Bette doesnt even have the ability to react to the oddity.
Im sorry, please apologize to the Raven. Would you like to join us for a drink?
Only if the Raven is welcome also.
Of course.
Jenny walks into the room. Everyone stares at her.
What ***** raven? Tonya asks confused.
It was one of those rare moments where one has to be grateful for a Tonya.
She is perched on top of my head. Jenny replies as if Tonya is the crazy one.
Despite everything, or perhaps because of everything, Tina reflects on the irony of Jenny, with an invisible Raven perched on head, acting as if Tonya is a fool for asking. Tina bursts out laughing. She cant stop herself. The laughter continues until she is struggling to breath.
Shane watches Tina, who is by this point totally hysterical, amidst Tonya and Jenny who are both looking totally confused. Alice and Dana get caught up in the moment and begin to laugh hysterically. Finally broken by the looks on Tonya and Jennys faces, Shane can take it no longer and joins the melee.
It is many minutes later when Tina, Alice, Dana, and Shane have fallen onto the couch holding their stomachs from the pain of the laughter. All four have tears in their eyes. Tonya again has her face buried in the Godiva chocolate. Jenny has opened the cookies and is holding one above her head offering it to the Raven.
Hey, Jenny. Maybe the Raven would like some Nutella on that cookie. Shane suggests which sends the group into another round of hysterical laughter.
Ive tried before Jenny says oblivious to the fact that they are laughing at her. She avoids chocolate. It is bad for a Ravens complexion.
Oh, no. Im gonna wet my pants. Alice protests as she runs toward the bathroom holding her stomach with one hand and her abdomen with the other.
No one has noticed that Bette has again disappeared.
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Evermore!
5 stars for the story! Ok, first of all we are little sad for Bette and Tina, and then I read this story is make me laughing so hard I couldn’t even stop, when is Jenny come and all the Jenny’s thing and all the girls start laughing at Jenny and going crazy! It’s just so funny and Jenny is a little wierdo! Anyway where is Bette? Wher did she go? Please keep continue the story, can’t wait to see what happen next! Thank you! I’m still laughing!
All the gang is crazy, Poor Jenny she has got to be on something. Where did Bette go? Still laughing . thanks
Great way to cut the dramatic tension with lol humour. Jenny is wacked and it was cool to see Tina release some of her anxiety. But write soon so we know where Bette went. Great chapter. THanks
Oh girl you write Jenny as I’ve seen her from day 1 in S1…wacko!!! OK where has Bette gone this time…pet store for bird seeds???
I can totally understand where you get this Jenny from. LOL! Funny chapter yet forboding–where is Bette?