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Bette and Tina: First Time Part 2
PART 2 OF 2
Tina let go of Bette’s neck and fell backwards on the bed and arched her back. Her mouth fell open in a silent scream. She cant believe the pleasure that is running through her body, it exploded from her centre and ran up her body and down her legs. It felt all too good, and Tina was frozen in place.
“Oh my god,” She stressed out. She opened her eyes as her orgasm was reeking havoc on her small frame and she could see Bette trying to talk to her, but all she could see after that was little black spots, and then everything go black.
“Shit, babe?”
A few minutes had passed since Tina passed out and Bette was kind of frightened at the fact that Tina just fainted. It was probably because she stopped breathing while she was cumming or that the orgasm Bette gave her was too much for Tina. Even though that last thought concerned Bette she had to smile at it too.
Bette lightly tapped Tina’s face hoping to wake her, but she decided it was best to leave Tina alone for a bit and let her body rest and recover. She moved off of Tina and lay beside her. She put her elbow on the bed and let her head fall onto her hand to hold her head up. She gazed at Tina. She looked so peaceful in her slumber of sorts. She didn’t move, and the only thing moving was her chest from her breathing.
Bette looked at Tina; she looked at her bruised lips, her breasts and her nipples that have gone back to their normal size, her toned flat stomach, her pussy and the soft blonde hairs that were still glistening, and her sexy toned legs. She looked so vulnerable just laying there. Bette decided to cover Tina up just in case she woke up. She didn’t want her too feel uncomfortable. She covered up herself as well but still gazed on at Tina as if she was day dreaming.
“Fuck you’re so beautiful.”
Bette started to get overwhelmed by Tina’s beauty and everything about her. She was just so amazing and she wondered how god could create someone so wonderful and beautiful and funny and the list goes on.
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(33 votes, average: 4.30 out of 5)
Thank you for the wonderful update. I love your writing :D PPS
awww that was just fantastic! …and hot lol. u have to keep writing more ff, we’ll be waiting ;)
Wonderful story. Very good first attempt, hopefully not the last. I found that both parts were well done. One can never get tired of B&T stories. I look forward to your next story.
loved it… and again you did a great job… please keep writing when ever you can… long or short… we will be here reading… thanks…pps
This freshman try at FF for you was certainly a great one. Talk about setting the bar for yourself! Great job, and a very pleasant read.
Wow, what a powerful union that Bette and Tina have forged together. Hope that you will continue to write.
Wow Shalla! I can’t say Chapter 1 was better than 2 or vice versa. You are an excellent writer and I’d love to see more stories from you. Thanks!
I have to agree, that was very hot! PPS!
Great Post!!!! Both chapter are wonderful!!! Can not wait to read more of stories. Thank you PPMS
Excellent. And like Tina I can’t believe this was your first time writing. 5 stars. BTW, NC-17 stories are difficult to write w/o them becoming cheesy. Yours was excellent and realistic.
This was so good. Thank you excellent writing. Can’t wait to read more your of your stories. Thank you again.
That was absolutely wonderful. PPS
Don’t be shy and have faith in yourself.This was incredible good.What other said already it’s difficult to write NC17 and you did it very good.I really hope you’ll write more.Thanks
Great story!
That was amazing and love it!
Just perfect!
Loved this story.
Deserves five stars.
Looks as though you wrote this four years ago in July and I don’t know why I didn’t see it then and read it but at last I’ve read and enjoyed it. Thank you for writing it.
why was that just so fucking adorable and beautiful but……………funny as hell hahahhahahahahhahahahaa