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Bette and Tina’s first date
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Tina heard the doorbell just as she was fastening the clasp on her necklace. She glanced in the vanity mirror as she walked by, closed the bathroom and made her way to the front door.
She opened it to see Bette greet her with a smile that left her momentarily motionless. She regained her sense of propriety to invite her guest inside.
“You’re right, it was easy to find,” Bette said as she entered and slipped off her shoes. “Your directions were excellent.”
“Come on in,” Tina said. “Can I offer you a tour?”
“I’d love one. Seems like a unique floor plan,” Bette said, glancing around the room. “Not your typical California condo.”
“That was what sold me on it,” Tina agreed. “I didn’t want to live in a box.”
“A real sense of space,” Bette looked up and marvelled at the height of the ceilings.
“Come with me,” Tina started up the short staircase. “I’ll show you the kitchen.”
“It’s huge!” Bette commented as they went through the doorway. “This place is great!”
“Oh but I pay a price by having a small bedroom,” Tina said. “I’ll show you.”
Tina opened the bedroom door, but halted abruptly when she hit the end of the queen size bed that took up most of the room. She edged along the side of the bed to allow Bette entrance.
“You really took the term bedroom literally,” Bette smiled. “Not any room for much else.”
Tina laughed.
“Well, all I do in here is sleep, so I thought I’d focus on making the rest of the house suitable for living.”
“Nothing but sleep hey,” Bette teased. She turned away, missing the flush that rose in Tina’s cheeks.
Tina chose to ignore Bette’s comments.
“Oh, I brought a little something for you,” Bette said. “In lieu of flowers.”
She reached into the pocket of her suit jacket and withdrew a long velvet jewellery box.
“That’s so sweet of you,” Tina reached forward and let Bette place the box in her hand. “Should I open it now?”
“Yes, you should,” Bette laughed. “The gift is kind of time sensitive.”
Tina pulled the spring-loaded lid up slowly before turning the container sideways to read the tickets.
“The symphony this Saturday at the Hollywood Bowl,” Tina smiled. “That’s lovely, thank you.”
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Thanks for the great story. ANy snippet from you, Fins, is a treat!
thats cool, anytime you can write, we will read Thanks
Aww that was sweet. Thanks!
Oo..how fun! Thanks for this little snippet and your time. Much appreciated!
wonderful first date…anything from you is a gift, so whenever and whatever you can, i’m reading
so did they lose their innocence??? I’m not quite sure what you meant by that remark….love your writing anwayz.
Nice story. I always look forward to your posts. Take your time…not too much though LOL. Thanks.
swimmie….This is great. Instead of writing a new one chapter of another story can’t you just continue w/this? OK, whatever you say. I’m just happy to have this.
… I certainly wouldn’t mind a first date like that…
anything from you is wonderful..ongoing or not. Thanks.
I second NYGayLady’s sentiment with a resounding Aye!
This is good and like it, take your time and we all will for you to continue this, thanks!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the post,we will take what you have time to give. Maybe in the near future you will have more time. we will wait thanks
Thanks for making time to write this for us. I always love what you write, so whenever you have time, feel free to do so.
Always enjoy your stories…and this was lovely….look forward to whatever you may come up with in the future…one offs or otherwise!..always a great read…Thanks
loved it and thanks for the IM concerning the confusion of similar names. hope to read more from you soon- as time permits.
Awesome, none the less. Thanks for taking the time and sharing your great talent. Always look forward to a post from you.
Thanks for writing. Hope you have a great weekend too.
Loved this…as I do anything you write. Thanks for sharing!
Long or short, I will love it.
great to hear from you – this was fun and anything you write and post is appreicated.
Swimmie, those two short stories were great and sweet, too. Enjoyed them. Anything from you Swimmie, whether short and sweet or long and oh so loving, whatever, just great. Thanks.
Always amazing JKS. we’ve missed you and i hope you take time out to do what you do best. Beautiful date,Hot ending. (sigh) I love B&T.
Thanks for the post…we will take any bone that you throw…
I come late to the party as my motherboard decided to be a real mother. You call that innocent?
Great, I love your writing. More please….
That was gooood!
Love it. So sweet and real. :)
Mmmmhhhhh… ;-)
Great story JKS! Whatever you write, we will be reading it, so keep writing! ^_^
My heart went out, this was so good. Come back soon.
Swimmie, great to have anything written by you. As long you promise to start again when you have time…
I’ll take fifty first dates like that one please. So playful and sexy and you can really feel the connection between them. I totally understand that you don’t have time to write an ongoing story, but it would be kind of fun to have a few chapters that picked up after this one. Maybe a few more dates as they round all the bases and head for home plate.
That is one date I’d like to keep repeating. Great story, when you have time could we maybe have the second date, and so on and so on.
What a beautiful vision of two goddesses. Can’t wait for the next installment of what ever you write.