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Bette Exposed Ch. 21
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Bette: I just want to make sure you believe how serious I am about making this work T. I intend to prove to you that I have changed and that you can trust me again. I broke your heart once Baby, but I swear on my own life that I will never do that again. I will do whatever it takes to earn back your trust.
Tina: Awww, Baby. I do believe you. I do not doubt that you are being completely honest and sincere in everything that you have said and everything that you are doing. I just want you to know that this is not all on you. I am just as much responsible for what happened between the two of us as you are. We both carry some blame Babe.
Bette: How do you figure that T? You are not the one that cheated.
Tina: No, Bette, but there were plenty of other things I did that sure didnt help matters. There were so many things that I could have done differently that could have brought us closer together. There were times when you reached out to me and instead of meeting you halfway, I pushed us farther apart. There were times when I was so focused on myself, that I forgot to take into consideration your feelings. There were times when I knew something was going on with you and instead of trying to get it out of you I chose not to make the effort. And then theres the baby. If I had just told you sooner that I was pregnant, maybe it would have drew us closer together at a time that we were so far apart. I was just so afraid to fail you again. I was so afraid that I wouldnt be able to carry it to term. So I tried to convince myself that I was doing it for your sake, that I was protecting you from another heartbreak. Then you had the affair with Candace and our world was suddenly turned upside down.
Bette: T, this was not your fault. You didnt fail me. I failed you. I was the one that did this to us. I am so sorry I let Candace into our lives, Baby. I am sorry I caused you so much pain.
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I love this, these are all the questions that I have for Tina and Bette. You have put them all so wonderfully and I love that Tina is so patient. Thanks
That was very realistic, i can really see the two of them having that conversation. Great Story!
Ah that twas beautiful. You must continue.
I’m off to write a paper for school. Grr! I’d rather write fanfiction!
How can Bette think that Tina didn’t love her as much? She’s the one who did the jailhouse rock w/Candace (as well as the B&B Boxstep and the CAC Cha Cha). Even after the affair was revealed, Bette took her own sweet time to kiss Candy good-bye. I think she’s gotta cut Tina some slack on this stuff. (nicely done.) Psst…Bette — stop being a poopy head.
Great chapter yet again Thanks
for sure these are all questions that need to be asked and maybe more than once. Like the way you show how they both need time to come to terms with everything. Continue – continue!
I think Bette has hella nerve saying ANYTHING to Tina about Helena after she was the one to cheat with Candace. She started it, and she should just woman up and shut up!
Okay then.
Bette needs to focus her mind on that baby and give Tina a rest – but figuratively and literally – she went into all that drama while Tina was feeding the baby Then she got up and took a shower, never offering to burp the baby, change a diaper or anything else?
She oughta be with me! I’d have her a** changing diapers so much she wouldn’t have time to dwell on Helena or anything else but whether she could get a nap before the baby woke up again. Breast pumps were made for partners like her – to get her a** involved in the process instead of navel-gazing while the real work of childcare goes on!
Wow, you can tell this chapter got me pretty worked up, huh? Well, you got to this audience!
I’m cranky and I think I need to be put down for a nap.
Thanks for posting another chapter!
I love the way they are talking to each other and getting to the heart of their problems
Great chapter. About time they talked it out. now on with the putting things back together. more soon please.
Techgal, u crack me up !!! roflmfao
Great chapter. I’m glad they talk about their problems and try to understand each other, love it. Post soon, thank you!
I really like this story. It shows the real life of a relationship that is trying to get back on track. Thank you!
Shades i think you are exploring Bette’s emotional state so well. Its good to see Tina be supportive. Now Bette needs to start helping with the baby!.
Another wonderful chap, shades!
Wooowwww shades! That was a great chapter and I am so glad that Tina and Bette will be okay. Hopefully Bette will change her work life and work at home so that she will be will both her girls. Post soon shades and can’t wait for the next chapter. LOVE YOUR WORK!!!!
Get over it bette,she says she forgives you..SO stop streesing..LOVE YOUR STORY.POST SOON
i love this shades…..You are exploring the heart of their relationship with such realism, and i would have to agree with Jwet, asking the questions that i have had for the two of them….I think that in your capable hands these two can build a much stronger, lasting relationship…..Extremely well written…..More soon please?………Thanks shades:)
Shades!!! I love this. Thank you for making them talk. I just read this chapter and the previous. N i must say you are one hell of a writer!!! I lvoe your work!!!
Just wonderfull Shades – and yes you are right..we all need answers on these questions and will we get them in the show – let´s find out.
Great update on your story ……keep up the good work. Post soon
Just read this one….I’m like 2 weeks late. But I have to say that this is totally plausible to me. I mean…Bette was away on a soul searching journey for months, her mind filled with images of Tina moving on with her life WITH HELENA. She’s only been back a short time. She hasn’t had a chance to really process everything. Her mind is still stuck in “Tina hates me and wants me out of her life” mode. Which is really how things were when she left. So, I totally see her fears and doubts as believable. And from what we have seen on the show…Bette did have an affair. But Tina started a relationship with someone. That is a very key point that isn’t really touched on very much. I understand that the affair was wrong…but Tina is not innocent. She was still “married” to Bette, yet she carried on a relationship with another woman. That’s hella shady to me. Just my humble opinion. Man…these are not real people. Why did I just take up so much time ranting about fictional characters?? I don’t know. In any event, great post with insightful dialog and realistic emotions.