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Bette Exposed Ch. 32
Melvin: Well, if you are sure that it is okay.
Bette: Absolutely, daddy. Here, let me show you the way.
Bette looks over at Tina, who gives her a seductive wink as she is licking her lips. Bette quickly gets up and shows Melvin to the nursery. As her father is making himself comfortable, Bette checks on Katalina, who is out like a light.
Bette: She will probably sleep at least another hour if not more, daddy. Dont worry about her, well hear her if she stirs. Just try to get some rest. Is there anything you need, daddy?
Melvin: No, I am fine. A short nap and Ill be refreshed for the evening.
Bette: Okay daddy, Ill leave you alone then.
As Melvin gets settled for a nap, Bette returns to the living room to check on Tina only to find an empty sofa. She decides to check the bedroom, but once again comes up empty. What the *****, she thinks to herself as she looks around the rest of the house. She decides against calling out for Tina as she doesnt want to disturb her father or the baby. She is not sure what game Tina is playing, but she figures she will turn up eventually. Bette heads to the kitchen to get a glass of water. As she reaches up to get a glass out of the cabinet, she feels Tinas arms engulf her waist.
Bette: There you are, I was wondering what happened to you.
Bette goes to turn around, but Tina moves in behind her and whispers in her ear.
Tina: No babe, stay right where you are. Keep your hands on the counter and dont turn around. Okay, baby?
Bette: Well, that depends on what exactly you have in mind, T.
Tina: Dont you trust me baby?
Bette: I dont know, should I? I mean, you do remember that my father is just down the hall?
Tina: I am well aware of that babe. And since Im not sure just how much time we are actually going to have, why dont you work with me here, baby.
Bette: And what exactly am I working with you on?
Tina: I thought I made myself perfectly clear earlier babe. I want an up close and personal viewing of your spectacular *****..where we go from there, well, I guess that will depend on you and how well you can follow orders.
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(52 votes, average: 4.19 out of 5)
Ummm….I’m throbbing…just a little…
This is a Divine Comedy! Ha-ha!
That was HOTTT and funny, now to wait and see if Melvin did hear anything!!!
If Melvin had caught them, i dont know about Bette having a heart attack i know for sure Melvin would have.I think seeing them two going at it i would. LOL.Hot chapter Shades. Cheers mate.
wow that was awesome..hot and huh funny!
Wow that was worth the wait!!! Very HOT! Can’t wait to see what Melvin heard??
OMG Shades where have you been? Ok I will forgive you this once because that was so HOT!!!.. I am going to jump right inmy a cold pool. No wait, I don’t have one. UGH.. OK cold shower. Whew… Maybe the doggy pool is big enough. lol… WOW, dang, golly shades. Please don’t disappear like that again. My ah… Heart that’s it, my heart can’t take it. :)
Shades!! What’s gotten into Ms. Tina. She’s mighty randy these days. Whatever it is, you weave it into a wonderful mix of sensuality, humor, and suspense. Even with your racy material, the story is still well-crafted and well-written and just draws me all the way in. It was HOTT and wild and still loving at the same time. Can’t wait for your next post!
those close calls are sooo erotic…..omg…..just the thought of maybe bein caught…….aaaaaahhhhh……..what an awesome chappy ………i freakin love this fic…….
OMG shades…you surmount yourself this time..gezzz..that was un fucking believeble so very HOT..i´m so sorry but i cant type anymore and thank God im home and not at work…God bless cold showers..lol..and Bette is so funny when she freaks..lol…amazing chapter as always and please dont take so long to post… ;-)
Hey shades Whoa! that was so Hot I’m still reading shades I’m just got caught up of all the fanfic Story Whoa! I’m missed a lot of this but anyway I’m back posted soon!!
K
So glad you are back. And WOW what a chapter this is. SO hot. Love this, can’t wait for the next one.
Wow! Tina’s a little horn-dog.
Tina is soooo bad! and Shades you are rally good..This is beyond HOT! Morre please
Boy do you come back with a bang. I thik I am as aroused as the girls.I love this story.Tina has to calm herself down.
fuck…that was close.. and CamTurn is right…we are all throbbing…and not a little …a lot… love this Shades…please continue
I also agree w/ CamTurn… lots o’ throbbing! Love the line “We do this my way or we don’t do this at all.”
Damn that is so fucking hot and sexy, love it. Damn that was close and Tina got everything under control just pretend they just went to swim, that just so funny and cute, love it. Please post soon, thanks! Great chapter!
Glad to have you back shades and DAMN what a return. This was so HOT! and i love this Tina. please stay around and post soon.
This is just too funny. It’s definately hot, but funny as hell. Poor Bette, Tina’s going to give her a heart attack. Melvin probably feels like he needs to get out of there, because things are just too steamy for him, and he doesn’t feel like the house is big enough for them to all be there, while those two do their thing!
God Tina is going to Kill Bette. I like this side of Tina its hot
Holy cow Shades – that was hot. Would have loved to see Melvins face if he chought Bette and Tina. Amazing update. Post soon
wow…hot…
Hide…go hide, Bette…hide ur head into the sink…
dude…you’re going to give Melvin a heart attack. (Yeah, but it’d probably be worth it.)
this is going to be so funny
Haven’t read this yet – but, very cool you’re back! Great!
Well Shades, that was well worth the wait girl. I loved it and Tina is on FIRE!! Gotta luv her.
HOLY COW! Gulp…nicely done, Shades! Uh, Happy 4th :)