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Bette Exposed Ch. 33
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Tina looks over at Bette who has panic written all over her face. Tina leaned in, kissed Bette on the cheek and whispered into her ear.
Tina: Lighten up babe or your father is going to see right through us.
Tina reached down and took Bette by the hand leading her straight towards her father.
Tina: I feel much better after our swim babe. That was a great idea and it was so nice out.Oh, hi Melvin. I hope we didn’t disturb you.
Melvin: No, not at all. I had a refreshing rest. So you two decided to take in some sun I gather.
Bette is speechless. Her mind is on overload. She didn’t hear a word that Tina or her father said. All she could think about was how close they had come to her father catching them in the act. Melvin looks at his dismayed daughter.
Melvin: Are you okay Bette?
Bette doesn’t respond, so Tina quickly jumps in.
Tina: I think I kept her out in the sun just a little too long. She gets this way sometimes when she is a little overheated.
Tina chuckles to herself thinking at least it’s only a partial lie.
Tina: Bette baby, you should go and lay down for a little bit to try and cool off. Melvin, why don’t you make yourself at home. I’m going to make sure Bette lies down and then take a quick shower. I won’t be too long.
Melvin watches as Tina leads Bette down the hallway towards their bedroom. He is a little concerned about his daughter. He doesn’t ever recall the heat bothering Bette as she was growing up. But then again, he probably hadn’t spent enough time with her to notice. Oh well, Tina seemed to have everything under control, so Melvin made his way into the living room and turned on the news to pass the time.
Meanwhile, Tina leads Bette into their bedroom and closes the door behind them. They walk over to the bed where Bette takes a seat and stares at the floor. She has yet to utter a sound.
Tina: Baby, are you okay?
Still no response. Tina is getting a little worried. She takes a seat next to Bette and reaches over to brush the hair back away from her face. She then takes her hand and lifts Bette’s chin so that she can look into Bette’s eyes. What she saw worried her more, as Bette’s eyes appeared so lost and distant. Tina gently caressed Bette’s face and spoke to her softly
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(61 votes, average: 4.21 out of 5)
Missed you and your WONDERFUL STORY…Great job..POST WHEN YOU CAN….
Hey Shades Thanks for writing back We missed your Story for a while it’s still Wonderful writing Story I Love it Please continue Thanks.
Oh my God! How weird is this…just last night I came online, and wanted to read your story again, from the beginning. I looked up your name and it only showed six chapters of the story!! I couldn’t figure out where the other chapters went and was looking for an email address for you! Now, here you are this morning with a new chapter, and when I go into your name, all the chapters are there. That is spooky! But, I am so glad that they are there, cause now I can settle in for some nice Sunday reading! Thanks for coming back to us!!!
very very good. Thank you so much for posting.
GOOD CHAPTER AND PLEASE KEEP COMING, THANKS!
great chapter as always..hope see more soon thanks :o)
welcome back… i missed this story… and i know how life gets in the way of Fan Fiction… love the way tina takes charge… waiting for the next chapter
K
Great chapter. Glad to see this back. Can’t wait for more.
WELCOME BACK!!!! I’ve missed this story. Please don’t make us wait too long for the nest chapter!!!
Wow, it’s great having you back. Hope all’s well with you. Love these two and their little dilemma. (smile) Wish I had those things to deal with. But, since I don’t, I’ll just keep living them through your story. Post soon.
It’s great to see you back, and posting…
Loved the update, and love this Tina!!!!
i just started today and now im cauht up. i have a hugh smile plastered all over my face. im really glad i stumbled onto yur story. its great. as is the writing and dialogue. i too understand about life but not the writing. i do other stuff. but glad you have come back. keep on going.
Where have you been? That had to be the longest orgasm in history!
Ha – ha!
Poor Melvin, I hope his eyes don’t fall out!
nice update
Gotta love the girls. They are so good 2gether. Great post.
Thank you! I know I’m hella late, but this is a great update. So glad Mevlin didn’t catch them. But what’s up with Tina’s Mojo? She’s rather randy these days isn’t she?
Shades,
At last you are back.
And a big hug and sloppy kiss hello.
Liking this story alot so please don’t leave it as long next time.
A loyal fan.
Yes, we have missed you and your story. It is good to hear that you are doing well and woking hard:) Great chapter, I love your story and all of the interaction between Bette, Tina Melvin and Kit. Please continue, and yes you where worth waiting for, this is really a great story.
I have missed this story and glad you found time to update, don’t wait so long for the next. Has Helena rub of on Tina or is Bette being peranoid? Please post soon.
Great update..Love this story….Post soon
great to see you’ve returned. Have missed your updates!!!!
Still love the fic tho.
We sure have missed you Shades. Glad you are back. Excellent update as always. Keep going we want more….lots more. Post soon