Fan Fiction
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Bette Forgets 1
Winters sat down on the stool next to my bed, You were attacked.
Attacked?
Yes three men kidnapped you and attacked you. You were shot, beaten…raped.
Wow. Thats quite the shocker there but I feel she is holding something back from me, What else?
It was a hate crime apparently, Winters spoke after a moment
Because Im a *****?
Right.
I was silent after this answer. Running a hand over my face I felt something cold. Looking at my hand I saw a platinum wedding band.
Im married?
You have been for seven years. Tina is her name. A month before you were attacked she left you though.
Why?
You cheated on her.
Say what, Why would I do something stupid like that?
I couldnt tell you that Bette.
Does she know about this?
From what I understand no one has heard from her in the last four months.
By deduction of reasoning I figure, Ive been here the last three months?
In a coma yes, she agrees
Has anyone come to see me?
Your friends and your sister have been integral fixtures here.
My sister comes to see me, I asked in surprise
From what Ive seen of her you two seemed to be very close before this happened.
I just smile at this because Im glad. I had always wanted a close relationship with my sister but never seemed able to get one.
We can save more talk for later, she speaks getting right down to it, How do you feel physically I mean?
My head and chest hurt, come immediately
Winters nodded her head, Well up your dosages now that youre awake. Anything else?
I cant feel my legs.
Winters rose to her feet at this, Are you serious?
A smiled, No, and I moved my foot to prove my point
The woman before me scowled at me, Mindset of a twenty two year old, she spoke remind herself of that fact
I smiled at this but noticed the look in her eyes. She had something else to tell me that she didnt want to tell me. What is it?
Winters sighed and sat back down, I have something else to tell you.
Oh lord that didnt sound good.
Go on, I prompted
The Doctor folded her hands in her lap and with a breath looked up at me, Youre pregnant.
Aint I a stinker? TBC
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(80 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
can’t wait to see what happens next,I am apprehensive to see what happens when Tina finds out becuase I am a huge fan of Tina.
Whoa. I really like this. Please continue….soon =)
As long as you are having fun and the writing is so fun who cares if you are a stinker. Nice beginning.
Okay, you’ve got me, now don’t leave me hanging. This is going to be fun, Bette learning about her own life. And she’ll have to deal with the trauma that’s been suppressed in her coma. You’ve given yourself a great start — I’ll be checking for new posts!! P.S. As a true lurker, I have to applaud your bravery. Be proud of yourself – it’s a great start!
Yup Your a stinker! This is interestin’ Thanks for de-lurking, pse continue.
I really like this…please do continue!!!
WELL I’LL BE————– PLEASE POST SOON!!!
Great start I really like it, this is gonna be awesome. Bette was kidnapped, attacked, shot, beaten, raped, in coma three month and now pregnant, man this is bad and pity. I was wondering where the hell is Tina. Please post soon the next one, can’t wait to see what happen next. Thank you! 5 stars!
Intriguing intro. I like it.
Oh no.. you left me hanging, but i can’t wait to see what Tina has to say about this mess.
Pretty good so far cant wait to read the rest of your chapters
Yes, you are. Trying not to let the cop in me come out. My first thought was the Er would give her stuff to prevent STD and pregnancy tho. But this is fiction. :)It’s a good story and you have me hooked.
Love the way you started it with your story, so yes you have hooked me.Please post another chapter soon.
Great start please continue can’t wait to see Tina’s reaction to her pregnant…
yes, I like this story, like where you are going
oh yeah you must keep this one going!
well this is a new twist – Bette pregnant I cant wait to see how this turns out!!!
Great start. Like the cliffhanger. This will keep me coming back for more. Please continue soon.