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Bette Forgets 19
I need you to help me alleviate some of this pressure.
Right here, Bette asks
If we hurry we can make it home before I explode.
Smiling she grabs my hand and we head to the car. Once strapped in we drive away into the night. About halfway home I cant take it anymore and with one hand I reach across the distance separating us and stick my hand down the front of Bettes black linen pants. She swerves slightly at me doing just this.
Good lord T, she exclaims, Warn a person before you do that!
I just smile as I realize she isnt wearing any underwear. My favorite, Just watch the rode baby, I whisper, We dont wan to get pulled over.
I watch as she swallows hard.
With ever so much care I push two fingers into her wetness.
God you are so wet for me babe.
Have been ever since the first kiss, she responds in a low tenor
I see the death grip that she has on the steering wheel as I start thrusting my fingers in and out of her slowly. After a few minutes of this I add a third finger as she makes a soft strangled noise in the back of her throat. I smile at this. She was so ready for me. With a devious smile I reach out for the wheel with my free hand as I push yet another, fourth finger within her. Good thing Im holding on to the wheel because she almost lets go as her head rolls back in pleasure.
Oh god, what youre doing to me T, she manages to choke out as I feel her inner wall starting to spasm around my fingers
Good thing its dark outside or people would totally know what Im doing to my wife. Not that I care at the moment. As I feel her walls tighten Bette cries out my name briefly closing her eyes as I continue to pump with one hand and hold the wheel with the other. When she comes back down I still my fingers and remove them from within her and lick them clean as she takes the steering wheel once again.
Its a few minutes before Bette regains her breath, Feel better, she asks of me
Not even close.
She gives me a sidelong look and just shakes her head. Oh what a night she has ahead of her.
Tbc…I have no idea how female viagra works so if I got it wrong, don’t blame me. Lemme know what ya think!
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(64 votes, average: 4.22 out of 5)
Ok, it’s probably just me – but I like your story because of the story and character development moreso than the sex stuff. Once you go down that path, your story starts to resemble many others on the site. So, don’t forget to keep going with a strong story.
I agree with you Jean, the female viagra angle is kind of weird. I would think Tina would be the one who needs the release. Maybe she cums from getting her lover to cum. Anyway, I love this story, viagra aside, I can’t wait for the next installment. It’s your story rebakathy so I won’t be too judgemental. Any sex scene with Tina and Bette is hot!
Well…I guess I am a dissenting opinion. I’m not just saying this because I’m biased towards your writing. But I actually like the diversion of the viagra thing. It’s just like Alice to mess this up and gives us a brief respite from the drama. I don’t think you veering from your character development at all. We get to see the fun-loving 22-year old minded Bette Porter and the connection she still has with Tina even though she can’t remember their past. I think it is important to remember to keep up the development of the characters against the backdrop of their intimacy. I trust you as a writer and think you will keep the balance going.
That said, and this isn’t directed at anyone, it is sometimes difficult as an author because no matter what you do, someone wants something else. If you are working on character development…someone is screaming for hot bnt lovin’…if you have hot bnt lovin’ someone is screaming for character development. I guess in the end, you just have to write your story as you envision it and hope that others will see where you are going and enjoy your offering.
In any event, you know I’m along for whatever ride you take us on. Thanks for sharing you Writing Machine you. =)
LMAO!! You never cease to amaze me Reba!
““This is the phone of Bette Porter,†says Bette in her imitation of her voicemail, “My shrink deemed me psycho and has institutionalized me. Don’t know when I get out. I’ll try to get back to you. Beep.†“
That up there is a knee slapper!! And female viagra…you just think of everything! The love scene in the end was HOT!! More please, can’t wait for the next chapter…NC-17…woo-hoo!!
You are a Genius! This story is amaaazing, I really love the way you write.
I am eager to see where you will take us, damn excellent work reba! keep up the good work!
THIS IS AWESOME……WOW……I REMEMBER HAVING ONE OF THOSE RIDES HOME ONE NIGHT….SHE SHE SHE…..IT WAS THE MOST AWESOME SEX I HAVE EVER HAD…..WOW….
I agree with MTS on the character development. It is what set your story apart from others. I did laugh at the female viagra. And, hmmm, I really like the sweet and thoughtful phone conversations between Bette and Tina. It reminds me of when I was at the beach. See, I had some fun phone conversations with a friend while I was there. I really looked forward to those phone calls. :-)
Dont know how female viagra works either but im pretty sure you shouldnt be driving lol great tho
Just got caught up again. Love this story. Will be waiting for the next chapter. Thanks!
GREAT CHAPTER…ALICE IS A CRAZY LADY.BETTE & TINA WERE HOT AS USUAL..PLEASE POST SOON
This is so fucking hot and funny. Oh man Alice is crazy and funny. Ok back to Bette and Tina, post soon. Thank you! Great chapter!
Pretty sure noboby cares, as long as HOT sex scenes are involved. Good Job.
lol! (but I feel compelled to mention that that’s not safe driving — for the baby’s sake.)
i don’t care if you got it right or wrong either, it was great and funny and hot, more please
Sooooo ready for the next chapter:))))
Whew OK i’m trying to come back to earth. Thanks for the long chapter. I can never get enough.
Well well well I’m told a good writer does some background research before writing a story, I wouldn’t be able to tell any different though! Great chapter, can’t wait till the next.
OMG…what the hell are you doing to us. This was pretty HOT and so FUNNY. I can´t stop laughing. I think we all need to try this out…what so you say. Post soon
great story, you really have a knack for writing..keep it up, I enjoy all your stories!
haha that was comedy n hot 2..dont stop
“This is the phone of Bette Porter,†says Bette in her imitation of her voicemail, “My shrink deemed me psycho and has institutionalized me. Don’t know when I get out. I’ll try to get back to you. Beep.â€
Best line.Very hot chapter btw, can’t wait for the next one. I know what lies ahead, hell yes. One of the privilages of being engaged to such a fantabulous writer haha.
I don’t care if you got it wrong or not…this is soooo HOT! Next chapter please….Hurry!
DAMN that was HOT!!! WHOOOHOOOO! lol.. hahah Alice is crazy… but thank god for her right now!.. great job! post soon
i don’t either, but if it works like that… sign me up!!!
The night will be long… I love this Bette, I love this story.
I liked it, it was hot and funny. Post soon please :)
wow that was a good one
every fan fiction writer makes Alice so funny. I love it. And Tina wow