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    Bette Forgets 21

    Say what?

    He hit you?

    Just once, but it was enough. I was knocked back into the wall cracking my head on a marble table on the way down.

    How come you never remembered this or what that just something you told everyone to protect yourself?

    Bette frowns, I really didnt remember for the longest time, she explains, I had a major concussion from both the punch and hitting my head. You see the coma I was in after my attack wasnt the first coma that I was ever in.

    Dear God!

    You were comatose? For how long?

    Five months.

    That seems really long. Bette must have seen the look in my eyes.

    It was very long. You dont think that if someone can keep someone locked up in a mental hospital that they cant bribe a few doctors and nurses?

    My eyes widen at this.

    How…how did you know that he bribed the hospital? When did you figure this out?

    Bette sighs again, Not till a long time later. I got a letter in the mail one day from one of the doctors that Melvin had been blackmailing. Apparently he was on his death bed and wanted to confess all of his sins. One of his greatest regrets was that he had helped a man he despised cover up the attack on his fifteen year old daughter.

    I really didnt know what to make of all of this.

    So Melvin payed the hospital to keep you in a coma longer than necessary, I say trying to grasp my brain around this subject

    Right.

    But what about the memory loss?

    Bette raises those gorgeous orbs of hers to me and I see tears shining in their depths, Its an amazing thing what certain combinations of drugs can do to a person.

    Your memory was erased?

    It would appear my poor brain has been scrambled many times.

    Then wouldnt you have lost more memories than you did?

    She nodded her head, I lost a good couple years before the whole ordeal. Those memories slowly returned as did the memory of what my beloved father had done to me.

    You never told him?

    If he could hit a fifteen year old what do you think he would do to me when I was older and was able to do more against him.

    Comments

    1. REBA…you have to get writers block and kick her ass to the curb…. we all have been there…and i am glad your back… i have missed this story… and i can’t wait for you to continue with it…i am so glad that bette keeps opening up to tina… please keep them talking…. thanks and please more soon

    2. Rebakathy thank you thank you thank you. I can’t believe how great that was. :) Please don’t wait so long to post. Godd luck with Jury duty. Maybe they won’t need you and you can post again. Having been a cop they never want me. LMAO….

    3. woooooohoooooo your back with this story this one is one is my favourite from all the ones I read and I almost had given up on you writing it anymore it was like leaving a good movie right before you find out what happens glad to see your back.

    4. Thank you that
      posted again I’m been waiting for this Story I’m so happy that you write back again really glad that we really LOVE IT your Story it’s really Awesome and very good writing Thank you
      Rebakathy you are Amazing writer Please post soon.

    5. Damm thats some drama, and I LOVE IT!!! thank you, I have been waiting, it’s so glad to have you back, so I quess we will be reading lots more of this story??

    6. Damn that is a horrible thing that Melvin dit to Bette is just sad and poor Bette that her life is just so much in pain. Anyway awesome story, post soon. Thanks!

    7. Wow is right, that was deep stuff. That sick asshole kept his daughter in a coma for five months coz he hit her!!!!! That’s story was well worth the wait mate, keep it up and post soon!

    8. REBAKATHY THANK YOU THANK YOU,SO GLAD YOU WROTE A BETTE FORGETS EVEN THOUGH I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES….WONDERFUL CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON….

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