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Bette Forgets 25
Breaking news, the reporter says over the screen as they show a top view of what looks like a prison, A number of prisoners have just made a daring escape from the Los Angeles maximum security prison.
Wow thats some heavy *****! Just then the phone next to me rang.
Hello, I state not really paying attention to the phone
He-ey, I hear Ben state rather too cheerfully over the phone
I know something is wrong from his two syllable hey.
Hey Ben, whats up?
Watcha doing?
Watching the news, I state, A group of prisoners just escaped the prison.
Yeah, of this Im aware. Say are you alone right now or is someone with you?
Im instantly alert at this, Im alone. Why?
Uh, Im coming over B.
Ben? Tell me what the ***** is going on!
There is silence over the line and for a moment I think he has hung up. After a few moments I hear him speak very softly.
Speak louder Ben, I cant hear you.
I said that they escaped.
Who do you mean by they?
In his silence after my question I realize who he means with a sinking feeling and an ever increasing heart beat.
Vircome and Meyers.
Yes, Ben agrees softly, I am on my way over to your house right now along with several other officers who are going to patrol around your house and neighborhood.
Ben! Im here alone.
I know Bette. Im almost there. Is the front door locked?
God I dont know, I exclaim and wince as I feel the babies kick, I dont know, I say more softly
Just as Im wondering this I hear the front door rattle in its frame as if someone is trying to break in.
*Ben*
Oh god I think someone is trying to break in, Bette exclaims over the phone
I notice that her panic level has reached a crescendo and I put the pedal to the max and watch the speedometer crest a hundred and ten mph.
Im coming Bette, I say loudly
In the background I hear the sound of shattering glass and then Bette scream. The line goes dead.
Bette! Bette!
TBC…Good lord I am evil. I’ll have the next chapter up today, sometime, woo!
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(44 votes, average: 3.34 out of 5)
I love when you’re evil, except in this instance. I need to know what happens, right now.
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holy shit, I would say that might be evil. But only if your holding your pinky up to your mouth when you say your evil. Trust me I know it works. LOL thank god you got over your writing block, I still don’t know about Julia, is she good or bad?? Can’t wait for your next chapter I hope it’s before 3pm PSt. cause I will miss it while I’m at work so post soon.
K
Yes you are evil lol. Great chapter, I hope Bette is ok.
OMG you are evil, but I’m sure you will fix it and in then ext chapter everything will be okay, right?????? please hurry up with the enxt chapter, I can’t take it, I have to know
Yes, you are evil. But we appreciate that.
Evil is not the word. Please make Ben arrive in time I don’t think our lovely lady could take much more pain or trauma
You are evil!!! You had better post soon or I will be forced to be evil too!
you are so bad….
Damn what the fuck, I hope Bette ok. Post soon please, thanks!
Oh no hear we go again!
Definitely evil, yep, although I’m a bit worried about Bette’s mother living with them… Are they moving to Southfork Ranch??
you more than evil…lol..
I hope you know that I just hurt the hell out of my broken ELBOW/ARM jumping out of my chair cracking my cast on my head. I KNEW IT…! I knew this was coming. ABSOLUTELY knew… GREAT JOB. Rebakathy. Freakin’ FAN0DANG-TASTIC. Now i am off to the next. WITH AN ICE PACK ON MY HEAD thank you very much. ROFLMAO…….
OMG YOU ARE EVIL…..WOMAN….U CANT DO THIS TO US……CONTINUE TONIGHT PLEASE……THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY AND THE DRAMA IS WONDERFUL PLEASE..POST TONIGHT…..??????…………….
Yes you are evil but I love your stories the 3 of them. Thanks
YOU ARE SO BAD AND I LOVE IT…EXCITING CHAPTER..PLEASE POST REAL SOON
Reba….you really are evil. This is just two times wrong. Such suspense. Poor Bette.. :(
Holy cow Reba…you are evil but I forgive you since you have already postet the next one. This is really excellent.