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I hang up the phone and fill my travel mug with some coffee and then grab my keys. Jumping in my Saab I head off to my gallery.
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Dana and I are walking along a strip of West Hollywood that has a bunch of shops.
“Is there anything specific that you were looking for,” I ask as how Dana seems a little off today
I see her eyes light up when she sees a jewelry store that specializes in rare stones. She grabs my hand and drags me into the store.
“I guess you are looking for something specific.”
“I think Al is going to propose,” Dana starts looking at various rings, “But she is taking a really long time. I talked to Tina yesterday and she gave me the idea of proposing to Al.”
“Now there’s a thought,” I remark with a smile
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There she is, the object of my desires and repulsion. How can I want her so badly and hate her at the same time? It doesn’t matter for soon I will have her and then I will destroy her. I smile at this thought. She and her little tennis player friend are looking in a jewelry store. Her friends are going to be completely bereft when they lose their precious Bette.
This gives me pleasure knowing that I am going to be destroying those that she loves as well, especially Tina, it brings my great delight.
Bette
I am listening to Dana ramble on when I feel a presence. I don’t know how to describe it other than a feeling ofevil? This is how I felt when Vircome or Meyers were near me. Evil. I look around the store and don’t see anything or anyone out of the ordinary.
Shrugging my shoulders I return my attention to my friend as she is going into hysterics at apparently finding the right ring.
Unknown
She didn’t even see me. It wouldn’t have mattered if she had seeing as how I am a ‘trusted’ friend. Well this trusted friend will soon put the plan into action, the plan to destroy the object of my dark desires. I smile at this.
I can’t wait.
Soon.
TBC…
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god damm it reba why you going to play me like that??
Wow Can’t wait to see who it is.
ok so the stalker is a “trusted” friend, but when bette looks around she doesn’t see anyone. Ok fine maybe stalker is hanging out acrossed the street or something.
But if bette is getting the bad vibe feeling, then wouldn’t she get the same feeling if see was around the stalker???
Which when I think about it the only friends see hasn’t been around have been alice and carmen. So it leds me back to alice, dana said she has been acting weird for awhile, it kinda sounds about like the same time the stalker started to come around. And reports are kinda stalker who get paid. I don’t know about carmen. Still thinking about how she ties into it.
ok, so WHOEVER this stalker is just don’t let her/him hurt Bette. Shes been to hell and back (OFTEN), and her and Tina are closer than ever. I love the monotony in the new them now. I can’t figure it out, but I have a strange vibe and i so hope I’m wrong. Great Story as always.
Good chapter, but HOLD UP WAIT A MINUTE, I have an issue rebkathy. Why is Bette always put in perial? Wasn’t a horrible attack and rape enough? I hope this stalker is caught before Bette is harmed. Maybe Yana can sniff her/him out for her and Tina. I thinking if it is a close and trusted friend, that it is Alice with a loose wire because she is envious of what B&T have. Maybe she is jealous that Tina could get Bette to settle down when she could not (I am sure that a lot of women in West Hollywood cried when Tina strolled in and took the prize they all lusted after.).
I really think that Tina should carry thier next child. It would really bond thier family more tightly together and it is an experience that she may regret not completely going through.
wow….leave us hanging why don’t you!!
Hmmm..”trusted” friend is a foe! Bette gets a bad vibe from this stalker, but apparently doesn’t sense anything when the foe is a “trusted” friend. Is Al the stalker? Dang Reba…you truly have me capitivated. ;-) Thanks for the chapter.
You gota stop doing that to me man!!!!!!!!!!!!
oohh, the plot thickens. i really love how yoy write this in their thoughts one at a time. i love bettes voice. this is great, but you really cant leave us hanging, can you. no no no
I have an idea it may be crazy…It’s Bette she has a multiple personality, she didn’t recognize that the evil as being in her(maybe it’s the old Bette trying to come back that would change everyones lives). Or when she looked around wouldn’t she still have noticed the “trusted” friend unless that friend is already with her so it could be Dana.
DAMN IT…….SOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOD……
S$%t, ggirl. How can you do this, A trusted friend. Great glops of whale shit. Bette has a feeling,let her act on this. Thanks I THINK
see i’m not worried. and i quote “collecting pictures of JB” “Jennifer Beals is my idol!” thats on your bio so i know you wont give bette another violent attack. despite the fact that your story started off like that but you brought her back to be someone better and stronger so i’m not worried about the stalker.
Hey RK,
You do like to mix it up.
A ‘trusted friend’ but someone who faded in the background because otherwise Bette would have waved and gone over to them for a chat.
Yeah, I do have an ominous feeling about this whole storyline. It has me completely enticed and desperate for your next post.
Brilliant narrative as always; each character has their own voice in your story and that little (or big) bit different from the show.
Please continue this fantastic and fabulous fan fiction.
Your Loyal Fan.
Ok so who is the stalker???? could be Helena, but that would be too easy. I’m thinking it would be weird if it were Ben…I mean maybe that’s why he has no leads or it could be his g/f the doc….hmmm. It is quite peculiar that they seem to think of themselves as a “trusted” friend but bette didn’t recognize them….maybe they’re so obsessed they actually imagine having a freidnship with bette. Ok enuff obsessing just let us know sooooonnnn!!!
ok what the hell is goin on i need to back track im totally confused
I’m putting my life savings on the first love of Bette’s! I meen does it take a whole year to get out of witness protection?!?!?!?!?! She’s pissed that she had to leave Bette and I bet she thinks Bette got over it all to quickly! Anyhoo don’t leave me hanging for to long buddy!
K
Great chapter. Can’t wait to find out who the stalker is.
NOT ALICE OR THE BITCH HELLY… could be james… he may have a crush on bette and wants her… but no… maybe franklyn… now he could be it… he might think he is a trusted friend… please Reba… don’t let us suffer too long… love your story…please continue
Damn Reba don’t play with us like with us like that, we need to know who the hell is that, oh I think I know who is that I don’t remember the name but she is Bette’s therapist, hope I am right. Post soon, thanks!