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Bette Forgets 60
I go over to the side of the bed and stare down at Bette.
“Bette.”
She doesn’t move or open her eyes.
“B look at me.”
She opens those eyes and turns them in my direction.
“It’s okay,” I say to her
“No it isn’t.”
“You had no other choice.”
“I could have done something different.”
I take both of Bette’s hands into my own, “That woman wasn’t Carmen anymore. She hadn’t been for some time. You had no other choice.”
Bette looks down at our hands, which are intertwined.
“I’m sorry.”
“I know you are Bette, I know you are.”
I let go of Bette’s hands and fall into the chair beside the bed.
“How are you doing Tina,” I ask raising my eyes to her
“Better now that I have this one here in my arms. I was so scared when I heard that gunshot go off.”
“Gunshot,” I ask, “What gunshot.”
“Took it as my last resort,” Bette said softly, “Wasn’t going to use it. Trying to get her to leave. She grabbed at me and we fought over it.”
“You said that she landed on something.”
“She did,” Bette said softly, “After the gun went off I tossed it away.”
“So neither of you got shot,” I say
Bette touches the side of her head above her ear, which is bandaged.
“Bette was damn lucky,” another voice comments coming into the room
Raul comes into the room holding a clipboard before him.
“That bullet grazed her scull. A little more to the left and it would have hit her.”
I look over at Bette and see Tina pull her in closer.
“Can we go home now,” Tina asks Raul
He nods his head, “Yes but I order plenty of rest for both of you, lots and lots of rest. You both need to heal.”
“In more ways then one,” I speak up
“Exactly,” Raul states
“We need to get these girls home,” Ben speaks up from the corner of the room
“I’ll do it,” I speak up
“Are you sure,” Ben asks gently
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(44 votes, average: 3.66 out of 5)
Totally awesome….everybody loves Bette…post soon
That was sad and ver awesome, amazing. So glad that Betteand Tine are Okay. sad about Carmen. Shane will always have a rough time but with her friends sshe will always come out on top.
Find no B&S lovin from you I can deal with that. Just as long as you promise to never end this story. LOL well shane rocks and I love B&S as that super hero team you have them as.
Great chapter, but I really feel sorry for Shane. She really deserves love, maybe you can pair her with Tatyana. It would be very interesting since she is not a member of the group of friends and therefore there will be room for discovery.
Bette and Tina will only grow stronger from this.
I have taken a little over and hour and a half to read the last like 25 chapters……..and this is an awesome fic……please continue soon…..
Wow what an awesome and amazing chapter. Love Bette more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
awesome chapter love shanes POV
Totally and completely AWESOME!!!! OMG I am serious. You know I love drama and that was excellent the way you had Shane’s POV. Wow I have so missed reading this. Thanks for the Post.
That was MARVELOUS,Your soooooooo Good…thanks
Amazing. That’s the only word that comes to mind. <333
K
Excellent chapter as was the last one. I love this. Glad B and T are both ok.
That was awesome!
Totally AMAZING!! Seriously, sharing Shane’s feelings through her POV was very powerful. How Shane sees Bette & Tina, and how she sees herself entwined in their lives was awesome. This was really a sad, happy, and loving chapter. Thanks for the excellent post…please continue. Let’s hope self forgiveness doesn’t come at too high a price.
this chappy was awesome. the bette goes over and climbs in bed with tina. how wonderfully beautiful was that. it melted my heart. and, im glad that bette porter continues to live and that she understands. deep girl. cant wait for the next one.
if ever you want to make me happy and pleasantly surprised, intersperce, a different beginning, with this story. im so there. its a story thats near and dear to my heart. thanks.
DAmn man that was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
beautiful.. and as much as i love shane … it is always bette and tina…together forever…reading on