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Bette Forgets 61
I was running my fingers through Bette’s hair as she spoke. I understood where she was coming from, I really did.
“You know why Carmen did what she did.”
“Yes. Do you?”
Bette lifts her head once again.
“Carmen told me.”
Bette nods, “What did she do to you Tina?”
“I already told you that she didn’t hurt me.”
“Not physically. It had to be hard being in that house, in that basement.”
“I would imagine that it was harder for you Bette.”
She only nods her head.
“She tried to get me to believe that your attack was my fault.”
Bette furrows her brows in confusion at this, “How would it be your fault?”
“If I hadn’t left you would have had no reason to be out that late.”
“Even if you had stayed they might have just taken me during the day. We’ll never know for certain. My attack certainly wasn’t anyone’s fault other than those that committed the act.”
“That’s what I told her.”
My mind goes to the conversation that we had about children. Well she talked and I listened mostly, but it was still bothering me.
“What is it T?”
“Carmen said something to me that has been driving me crazy ever since she said it.”
“What’s that?”
“She told me that I didn’t know the true pain of losing a child.”
“I would think that you do.”
“No, she said the truest pain was to have your child grow within you, watch them be born, watch them have a life only for them to be taken from you.”
I can tell by the look on Bette’s face that this intrigues her as much as it does me.
“What does that mean?”
“That’s what I’ve been wondering. Carmen never said anything about having any children.”
“And if this child was taken from her did she mean death, kidnappingwhat?”
“I guess we’ll never really know.”
“I suppose not.”
Bette rests her head on my shoulder.
“Ben said that if he has to tear that house down himself it is going to be gone by the end of the week,” Bette comments to me
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(46 votes, average: 3.87 out of 5)
DAMN…that was sad, loving, and hot. It’s so sad that Bette lost a part of her innocence and that she feels a little lost. But it’s lovely how both Bette & Tina will be there for one another during this trial. This too they shall overcome. Love the story Reba…please continue.
Reba, as far as I’m concerned, you can “unintentionally” write a love scene any time you want….I most definitely dont mind reading them. -_-
Damn this chapter is so awesome and amazing, You are an amazing writer and whatever you write for us, we all love it. Please post soon, thanks!
Oh good lord that was so sweet and well written. You certainly out do yourself some times. That was so loving and so omg awesome K.
Damn! that was deep and beautiful!! your writing is great..post soon!.
you keep ignoring me reba. and im gonna keep asking, nicely. ;) please keep this story going and do the other one also. *begging*
this was tender and so full of love. thanks and post soon.
Well girl you go wherever that muse takes you and you wont get any complaints here …lol that was beautiful really it took my breath away im off to read it again…. just love it
that was sweet. love how hot B&T are. keep it coming. love your story
Hey Reba I’m still catching up of your story I missed this Whoa! that’s was so HOT I Love it Please post soon.
OK! I just caught up. You have too many stories and chapters for me to READ!!!! First chapter, way too much drama, but that is how you got me attention. Just trying to figure out which story to read next. What do you recommend? I am so hooked on this story that I stayed up knowing full well that I should be sleeping. You are a really good writer.
Loved the story and loved the gentle lovemaking at the end. What a nice way to start my day. (Smile)
Intentional or not that was great!
Great chapter. It made me happy and emotional at the same time, does that make sense?
K
Excellent chapter, just perfect. I love how in love they are.
wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!!
oh cm on plz post agen its been ages now love the story xxx
oh yes we enjoyed it very much… thanks Reba.. and always show us the love these two have for each other…