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Bette I am home 17
Alice was suspicious and her curiosity peeked. She must find out.
Alice: Dana where are you come here?
Dana: What, what is it Alice?
Alice: Bette has just called me and told me to take the rest of the day off and told me to tell you to take tomorrow off too.
Dana: Why whats going on, is everything all right?
Alice: According to Bette it is, but she wants to see us on Wednesday evening. She has a surprise for us.
Dana: What surprise? What is she up to?
Alice: I dont know she wouldnt tell me of course, but we are going to find out. Never mind that I am sure its a good surprise because Bette sounded really cheerful and happy. Now that I have all the afternoon free, why dont you come here and give me a kiss.
Dana: No, you come here and give me a kiss.
Alice: Ok then, you want me to chase you do you? Is that how you like it? Bad girl
Dana: Shut up Al come and get me.
Al started to chase Dana around the house, the furniture and from room to another. Finally she caught her and got hold of her ponytail and pulled her back onto her and pushed her backwards to the wall.
They were both out of breath. Al pushed her tongue in Danas mouth and began kissing her and licking her face and ears. Dana tore Als top and exposed her ample ***** and started to caress and stroke and tease her nipples. Al got hold of Danas shirt and tore at it too. She pushed it out of the way and started kissing and biting Danas ***** and sucking her nipples. Dana got hold of Al and pushed her in turn to the wall and started on her ***** kissing biting and sucking. Al wanted to be in control this time so she pushed Dana back and started kissing her and stroking her *****, her tummy and gripping her buttocks. She tucked her hand inside Danas jeans and ripped her little pants and started to ease her fingers in. Dana you are so hot and oh la laaa you are so wet too, Al whispered. Al shut up and get down.
Dana got hold of Als head and with both her hands pushed her down on her. Al face was in Danas crotch and her teeth were working on her zipper. She freed Dana from her jeans and ripped the rest of her thong with her teeth. Oh Baby you are making me so horny, get inside me woman. Dana pushed Als head as far as it could go between her legs she raised one of her legs and put it on Als shoulders to give her a better access to her throbbing velvet. Oh God Al this feels sooo good, come on honey lick me yes thats it, push your fingers deeper Al oh yah there, oh yah thats it I want to come so bad. Al hearing Dana talking and encouraging her excited her and with so much passion she thrusted herself harder into Danas velvet, gently biting and sucking on her swollen ***** and kneading her ***** with her free hand. Danas leg gave way and she crumbled to the floor with Al still cleaving onto her. Her breath became shallow and her body arched like a tight bow. Al I am coming she screamed, Al oh my god Al I am..
Not yet Dana hold on, here.
Al pushed her free fingers in Danas mouth. Dana licked and sucked on them. Al was shattering her insides and she couldnt hold any longer. She exploded and came all over Al face.
Al licked her lips and wiped her face in Danas tummy and made her way up to Danas mouth. She kissed her and made her taste herself on her. Danas heart was still pounding and her velvet was still throbbing from the fierce lovemaking. She wanted to get on top of Al so that she could love her back, but Al pushed her down gently and told her to relax.
Dana: Oh Al you are a fantastic lover, this has rocked my whole inside out, I felt the earth move. Is this is what you and Shane call cleaving, Al? It sure feels sensational, incredible and very intense, my God.
Al: I am glad youve experienced it first hand and happy to be your educator on the matter.
Dana: I am sorry Al for you know what, I cant help myself it just gushes out of me without control.
Al: What are your sorry for you crazy mare, it drives me insane when you come like that. It is so ***** Dana and it also mean that Ive hit the target, bulls eyes Wow, simply delicious.
Dana: You are delicious Al and I hope to God I never get enough of you, my divine Concubine.
Al: What did you call me? Where did you hear that name?
Dana: Ive heard it on the telly, why is it bad?
Al: No Dana it isnt, but only men can call yu a Concubine. It is the polite word for a *****.
Dana: Oh Al I am sorry, I didnt mean to call you that, its just sounded good.
Al: Dont apologise Dana, as long as I am your one and only Concubine.
Dana: Al you are, believe me, I love you.
Al: Ilove .I love you Dana.
Dana: Well its about time you said it Al.
Dana got up leaned over Alice and laid flat on top of her. She kissed her, teased and tickled her, and Alice retaliated, of course, until they were both screaming with agony from laughing too much.
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(49 votes, average: 3.57 out of 5)
Hey, Sasha is a Russian name indeed, but it can be a nickname for Alexandra and Alexander as well. Great fic, btw :)
great chapter! keep
up the great job,but dont leave us hanging for to long .lady
Been waiting for that…its about time…now hurry for the next chapter, I am on the edge of my seat! Good Story.
WOW they got back together fast and accepted each others kids fast.
Waiting for the next chapter.
glad to see some happiness…finally!!! love this story, ff is the only thing keeping me until 2/20, and i for one will continue to read as long as there are stories. this is the highlight of the day for me “searchin” for my fav stories!!!!thanks so much, oh wha possibilties you now have opened up for this family…..
i don’t know what to say, you left me speechless with that chapter, but, of course you did an excellent job again. keep up the great work. email me at gizmo3378@aol.com
Some thing just come so natural other you just take. They are taking each other at face value right now. Love this.
fantastic!! can’t wait for more. post again soon.
Constructive criticism seems in place: don’t exaggarate the !’a and the ?’s so much. It seems amateurish and it’s quite distracting. don’t be afraid of the comma’s. Sometimes the flow in the sentences seems all wrong.
Try to sway off the evil path of script-style fic, it’ll pay off even though it’s a bit of work in the beginning. You might also want to think about building the story a bit more, instead of everything happening right away.
I like the plot, keep writing, it’s the only way your writing will improve, read lots of other fics, and learn more about the particular characters. Sometimes you seem a bit out of sync with them. Keep it up =)
Yay! Loved it! Please please please please post soon!! Missin ur writing already!