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Bette — Plan B; pt. 64
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“How’d you know she was there?”
I think my look would have wilted most who asked this question, but not Shane. “Well, there was the door banging open. There was the scream of ‘Oh My God! They’re naked!’” I started ticking all of these things off on my fingers. “We had the sound not unlike a herd of elephants running into her room, the bedroom door slamming shut, and then, moments later, a second herd running in the other direction. We figured out where she’d be.”
While I could tell that Shane was trying really hard not to, I knew she was ready to burst out laughing. “Go ahead.” As if my assent was going to make a difference one way or another.
I must say, this does appear to be one of the most amusing thing she’s ever heard. “I thought you had a date tonight.”
She took in a deep breath. “I put her on standby.”
“Standby?”
“Well, yeah. I kind of wanted to see how this resolved,” she explained.
Shane nodded her head towards the closed door. “Wish you were in there?”
I closed my eyes and wished that the pounding headache that I’d recently acquired would somehow subside.
Things were so amazing. It was like a dream, but it really happened. I was dreaming of Tina, and of making love to Tina. Suddenly, there Tina was. We did make love. It was all, well, incredible doesn’t begin to sum up what it was.
We’re going to have to make an exception to Tina’s ‘no locked doors’ policy, I think, for adult-only time.
*****! Is there going to be an adult-only time? Any time? What if Jess is so freaked that it scares off Tina. I mean, I’m not the one who jumped her and ripped her clothes offnot that I hadn’t thought itbut I’m not.
Not that I won’t take responsibility for that glorious timeand it was simply glorious–
“-early?”
“Hmm?” I sort of missed whatever she was saying. How long had she been speaking?
“I said, I guess Tina didn’t warn you that she was coming in early.”
“Tina didn’t give me warning on many fronts.”
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great post….that was funny….please post soon!
can’t wait to see what tina says to jess… love this s tory… please don’t make us wait to long
And next…the difficult talk? Looking forward to it.
albeez…how you make #1 (pushing you off) * THUD *….oops…sorry girl! +_-
I can’t go on to the next chapter without doing my duty of responding to this one….
It would have been nice if they, (B,T&J) had all sat down together to have this talk. Oh well, since Bette gets to nap, she has gotten a reprieve. I don’t think she would have been able to handle anything Jess would have thrown at her anyway.
I love it when Tina takes charge. She just might have to tell her daughter that it was NIT Bette who initiated anything; considering Jess ran thinking that this was all Bette’s doing.
Ok, I end this post hoping that Tina pleasantly wakes Bette from her nap much like she enveloped her dreams…..
GOOD CHAPTER!
hopefully ill be first. “standby”. i almost spewed my drink on that one. but the one that got me was “Tina didn’t give me warning on many fronts.” yeah baby. that did it for me. *wiping monitor off*. but not nice to leave us hanging like that. poor bette is gonna have a stroke wondering what went on in there. and tina did start it. this was just great. made my night. thanks.
Still love it keep posting!!!
Ah, the pitter patter of little feet – or elephants.
Leave it to Shane to have a date contingency plan. I can almost envision her date circling in a holding pattern.
The John Lennon and Yoko Ono reference was priceless! That got a true belly laugh.
I can only imagine that Tina’s talk with Angelica is akin to the Peace Talks from the 70’s. Tension and angst with all parties concerned. But, will detente be reached?
I can only imagine that Bette wishes it were all a dream. Well, some parts at least.
Nice interaction between Shane and Bette. Nice to see Bette opening up to her about how she feels about it all.
Bette letting Tina take the lead is a good idea. If she pushes Tina too hard it might strain the tenuous relationship they both have with Jess at the moment.
Hopefully, Tina can assuage any fears that Jess has about being replaced.
Fantastic chapter. You’re getting quite good at these cliffhangers, aren’t you!?
oh, pseud, this is such a heartwarming story! I just love how you have the three of them coming together and providing the story in their voices.
Needless to say, I wish you post everyday; but if you post everyday, then I would wish you post every hour; so I am going to say “Thank you so much for posting” and sharing your story.
Have a great weekend.
another great chapter Shane is such a good friend now lets wait for some storm or family union???..lol..cant wait for next one
So Jess wasn’t as stealth as she thought she was. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Ditto everything everyone else said. This story is so good, I’m so happy you came back to it.
I always log in and look for this story so I was so happy that today you posted! It was great – I love this Bette and can’t wait to see how Tina handles the talk!
great as always! Love this story!
Great chapter, I hope Jess is cool with everything.