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Bette’s Beginning Ch 4
At 4:45 in the morning Bettes alarm clock went off with a vengeance. After failing to turn it off by throwing it against the wall, the disgruntled brunette dragged herself out of bed and stumbled across her room to turn off the relentless clock. Bette grabbed the bag she had packed the night before with a bathing suit, towel and her school uniform and stalked out of the house in her pajamas.
The horizon was just turning gray with the impending dawn when Bette pulled into the St. Marys parking lot at 5:00. Just as Bette settled into the seat of her BMW with an exhausted groan she spotted Erin walking towards her holding two coffee cups and one bag. She covered the last twenty feet to Bettes car in a few bounds and Bette couldnt help noticing the way her beasts bounced under the material of her tank top and the way her pj pants sat very, very low on her hips, revealing a small strip of her toned stomach.
Bette closed her eyes to prevent herself from staring and allowing her thoughts to continue on the track they had just been following, when Erin reached her car.
Good morning, sunshine!
Erins cheerful salutation was greeted by a groan from Bette.
I have cooooooffee, teased Erin as she waved the cups under Bettes nose and slowly pulled them away. Erin managed to drag Bette out of her car this way and the two leaned against Bettes car while they drank their coffee.
We arent going to the main pool, the one I showed you yesterday, today. The schedule is that the guys get the main pool for the afternoon practices and the girls get it for morning practices. The guys use the old pool in the mornings, and we use it in the afternoons. But so few of the guys are motivated enough to come to morning practices that there is room enough for them to practice with the girls in the main pool. So, the old pool is always open in the mornings. I assumed you wouldnt want whistles going off and people screaming and girls sprinting over you when you gave racing you first shot, so I thought it would be best if we practiced in the old pool this morning.
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(44 votes, average: 3.48 out of 5)
As long as you enjoy writing it, I will most certainly enjoy reading it ! Please continue and thanks for the great story!
I’m glad you enjoy writing this. Because I’ve certaintly enjoyed reading it and I’ve been looking for this update. I’m patiently waiting for more. This is extremely welll written thanks for sharing!
Oh, yeah! More, please……….but, please don’t tease too long……….we want the raunch, oh yeah! ;)
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Good chapter, I really like your story and can’t wait to read more so please post soon. Thank you!
Having just so much fun with this it shouldn’t be allowed! Poor quivering Bette! How to get through the day?! Yo, Erin, what’s on your mind? That’s a whole lotta caring and concern for a high schooler! I loved the familiar feeling of being checked out, and what to do with that swimsuit. Very nice touches in an engaging story. Thanks.
enjoying this story very much so keep it comin thanks
Loved it! Poor Bette. She is really going through it. Please continue soon!!
Please come back soon I miss this story. I know real life tends to get in the way but this story has already become 1 to follow it’s really good story telling and extremely well written please come back soon!!!!