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    Bette’s Beginning Ch 9

    Story written on May 20, 2005 by lostinreality.
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    Sand and fun, but no sun. Bette and Erin are still at the beach

    We were wondering how much it was to rent the boards and when we would have to return them by.

    The boards you have are seven dollars an hour, we dont close on Friday nights, well the shop does, but the guy that owns this place owns the bar next door too, and that stay open all night, so you can bring the boards back there whenever you want. Oh, and you need to leave something here, you know to guarantee that you will actually return the board.

    Bette looked at Erin to see what she thought of this set up and mumbled, Only in LA

    Now, Erin stepped forward and leaned forward to read the boys name tag, Daniel, dont you think you could maybe give us a better deal than that?

    No, no, sorry, its not that I wouldnt like to ladies, said Daniel as he retreated behind the counter and Bette and Erin followed, But I cant.

    Erin leaned over the counter so that she was right next to the boy and only a blind man could have missed her cleavage. You sure? she asked as she cocked her head slightly to one side. Please?

    Well, I, uhhh ok. When are you gunna bring the boards back?

    Erin looked back at Bette, who looked up at the boy and said Late

    Poor Daniel sighed, looked at the clock, 8:57, and said, Fine, just give me thirty-five dollars and something so that I can be sure you will return them.

    The two girls got together the money, and just as Bette was beginning to look around in her purse for something to leave at the store, Erin unhooked the necklace she had been wearing ever since Bette met her. It was a gold locket and chain that Mike had given her for their one year anniversary. When Erin put it down on the counter withhe money Bette looked at her in surprise.

    You sure that you want to leave that here? Im sure I could find something if you dont want to.

    I can put it in the safe over at the bar if you want put in Daniel.

    Sure, thanks Danny boy. We promise well bring them back

    With that they left the store and wandered back over to the beach.

    Erin looked out at the breakers coming in and Bette watched her usual confident, amiable expression fade and be replaced by one of faint concern and serious nerves.

    The waves are much smaller by the cove, so why dont we head over there?

    Okay now you promise you wont let me drown, right?

    No, I was thinking Id just watch you drift out to sea if you fell off. Come on, well just paddle over to the cove and then I can teach you to stand up and catch one, ok?

    Yea ok, lets go.

    TBC

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    2. AAHHH!! You have me sooo hooked girl!! I’m anxious to see who will make the first move! Hope you’ll update soon! As if you haven’t been writing enough girl! ;-)

    4. what fun! and the image of a young surfer girl bette! how fun! we see a lot of how bette feels, are those small gestures that erin does, does she feel the same way? i mean, she left her necklace… hmmmm! i eagerly await the next one!

    6. It’s cool that they best friends but I think Erin knows what she is doing. As for as the progression, it going at a cool paste but it would be good if things picked up a little bit. Good Job.

    8. I’ve been remiss and haven’t left comments lately, but hopefully this starts to make up for it. Lost, I completely love this story. It just makes me giddy! (Which is no small feat with me.) You are doing a truly wonderful job with the characters, and I have no problem that you take your time with the timeline. Even sticking with a single day, you give enough attention to detail, provide enough dialogue, and give us some depth to the characters that the lack of time progression is utterly irrelevant. (Heck, look at “24” on TV and know that, if well done, time doesn’t need to pass quickly.) This story is just too fun. I adore it. So keep up your good work, follow your imagination, and enjoy yourself. Because you know we certainly do! Thanks so much for writing this story!

    9. Tsk. Tsk. Tsk. Erin gave up the necklace without a second thought. Doesn’t seem like Mike is anywhere near the forefront of her thoughts. And she’s spending her Friday with her best bud instead of her BF…as if he’s an inconvenience. I don’t know. Very interesting. Can’t wait to see how this turns out.

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